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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The job market today is very competitive and it is best to choose a career or field of study early in order to get a good job later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a known fact, that finding a good job has become, undoubetdly, a challenging task, since there are many candidates and the competition is almost immpossible among today's job seekers market. That's why some feel that it is wise to select a career path or study in an early stage, which will assure a such acheivements in a later stage in life. In this essay I will ellaborate on this thesis and will explain why I storngly agree with this view.

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Health experts say that obese women and women over the age of 40 should not be given free fertility treatment (IVF) because they are more likely to experience health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is undeniable that women who are overweight and over 40 years old should avoid getting fertility treatment (IVF) because they will get a high risk of health issues. From my point of view, I agree with the idea for many reasons, which will be described in the following essay.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

Plastic surgery is a topic that has been widely discussed among many groups of people. Some think that cosmetic surgery is a negative trend since they worry that children may follow the trend when they grow up. However, I have a different attitude towards the previous opinion. Plastic surgery has many advantages, such as improving mental health, job opportunities, and inspiring students. In the following paragraphs, the reasons why I think that surgery is a positive trend will be proposed with examples.

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Some people say it is necessary to spend money on railway joining two cities,other think is better to spend on existing public transport system discuss both issues and give your opinion

In order to travel to cities, some people argues that it is mandatory to spend more money on railways. While some others often believe that it is better to improve the transport system. In my perspective, travelling in dreams can save more time. Besides, it is more convenient and comfortable.

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In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded. Why is this? What measures could be taken to reduce this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern era, big cities have become too huge and overcrowded. This essay will discuss the cause of this particular issue as well as possible solutions that can tackle the problem.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people today believe that networks have significantly supplemented face-to-face interpersonal relationships leading to worsening communication skills. I fully agree with this wind of view though I consented advantages of social media entrepreneurs benefits. However, while media platform has undoubtedly provided many pros, such as more accessible access to knowledge and social support, it has also brought about several cons, including isolation, lack of privacy, and cyberbullying.

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Some people say that nowadays children have an easy life, and some people think that the life of children was easier in the past. Discuss both points of view and also provide relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While it is widely believed that the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs, others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. In my opinion, both have their own advantages and disadvantages.

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With the recent development in technology like e-books, some point feel that printed media like books, newspaper and magazines will soon be a thing of the past, others feel that these form of media will never disappear. What's your opinion

Some people believed that in years to come that printed publications will become obsolete as they will be available on the internet for free. I partly agree with this statement because as beneficial as online articles maybe, printed books and newspaper have aesthetic feeling attached to it.

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Some young people like to copy the behavior and clothes of famous people today Why might this be the case What problem can this cause

It seems argued that most guardians provide their children with everything they desire and also grant them the liberty to carry out decisions without supervising them. This essay will discuss why I believe this is not an appropriate method of upbringing as it can result in overdependence and other menaces.

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nowadys many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.what might this be the case.what could be the disadvantages of being self-empolyed.

It is undeniable that in contemporary ,society individuals are choosing to be self-employed instead of working in companies. This behaviour may be related to the necessity of having the time better scheduled by some people. ,However this initiative may cause financial problems for people who do not manage such time well.

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The job market today is very competitive and it is best to choose a career or field of study early in order to get a good job later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A competitive market has led many people in believing that it is best for them to choose a career of study earlier to get a better opportunity later onwards in life. Though this might sound quite pragmatic, I disagree with the above statement for two reasons.

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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of these fashions?

These days nations are becoming one global village at the same time people show the same interests regarding food,clothes, and TV channels. So, I agree to a great extent that this trend has more pros than cons.

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Some people think that the (government should provide (assistance) to (all kinds of artists) including painters, musicians, and poets. However, other people think that (this is a waste of money). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it is significant to provide any form of help to any artist and alike, such as abstract and graphic painters, music artists, and in poetry. While others would argue that funding them is just a waste of money. Personally, I believe that artists share an imperative role in the country's culture and identity. Financing them will keep their spirit to continue to showcase local arts around the world, which lead to economic prosperity.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In this era and age, we are observing a situation where we have an overproduction of consumer products with a consequent surplus of things that remain unused and then thrown away. This vast numerosity of offers that cannot be satisfied has an awful impact on the ecosystem because we are not able to recycle and give them a second life. This essay enlightens the possible causes such as lack of responsibility and the propension of developing countries to collect the developed countries’ garbage. Moreover, in the second paragraph, will be analysed the possible solutions of the previous causes.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their offspring how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical experiences that parents give their children, school lessons can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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The development of technology has resulted in more employees working from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people residing in different nations have hard contrasting views about the effects of working at home. Improvement in technology has caused a new system called home office working. In my ,perspective this development has so much positive effect. This essay will touch upon to positiveness of online working.

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The spread of multinational companies and the increase in globalization produce positive effects for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

Some would say that the development of international associations and the rise in globalization generate optimistic results for everyone. This essay also agrees with this initiative because it increases employment and is also beneficial for the nation’s economy through import/export.

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Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

In the last decade, air travel became more popular, and it is a short way to reach their home countries. Due to this fact that there are many airports are building in different locations by authorities. From my point of view that gives a negative impact on environment. I disagree that government needs to tax a high amount to pay airlines for reducing the problem. I have discussed above both points in the below paragraphs and the conclusion is deduced.

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Even after the Covid-19 pandemic is over, some companies are thinking of using a hybrid approach when it comes to working from home and on-site. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working on-site?

The past 3 years of Covid-19 have completely changed the way we used to work in our organizations. As the situation is getting better, companies are moving towards a hybrid model of working from office. While proponents of remote working argue that going to office is a sheer waste of time, there are also some underlying benefits, such as team bonding and better collaboration on work. In this essay I will discuss both merits and demerits of working on-site.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

Nowadays more and more professionals that play a key role in the social stability and development, including in the spheres of education and medicine prefer to find a job in more developed countries that provide more opportunities. Evidently, it creates a deficiency and lack of professional help in the above-mentioned spheres. This essay will address the problems such situation causes and conceivable solutions to redress it.

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