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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Today, many parents force their children to study all kinds of courses in their early age. What are the reasons behind this? What effects do you think this practice would bring to the children?

Nowadays parents tend to push their children to study a variety of courses when they are really young. Most parents do this because they are afraid of their children's future, and they want their children to excel. However, it is more likely that children are negatively affected by this behaviour.

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Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet while others believe that nothing can replace physical classrooms with direct guidance from teachers.Discuss both views( and give your own opinion).

It is argued that some of the people claim children should not attend to schools anymore because of getting necessary information on the internet. However others think that schools are more important than the internet due to being physical class. In my opinion, going to school for pupils is beneficial effect than online education. In this essay, I will discuss effectively side of the education of attending to schools compared with online institutions and provide relevant examples from my experience.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most parents are disciplining their children with physical punishment. Some people think that the effective way to discipline children is by spanking them. This essay will argue that punishing children physically does not help in developing good in them.

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Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Investments in the advancement of space exploration technology are generally considered to be unjustifiable expenditures, advocating for alternative uses of these resources to more constructive and beneficial purposes. From my perspective, the government should allocate appropriately to balance these activities.

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Today, there is a group of people who do the same thing every day and avoid variations in their life. Contrastly, there is a group of people who think that changes help to become the best version of yourself.

Nowadays some people do the same thing every day and avoid variation throughout their whole life. Conversely exist who think that change is a wonderful thing. In my view, I prefer the changes in my life. However, the following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that foreign tourists should be charged more than local people when traveling cultural and historical attractions. I completely disagree with this scheme/ proposal/ idea and I do believe that we should treat all visitors should be treated equally.

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Public museums and art galleries are not necessary because nowadays people can see the historical objects and works of art in these places on the Internet. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that public museums and art galleries are not important to visit because they opine those things from the places can be seen on the internet. Although the internet could help the people to look those objects virtually, I disagree with the statement of unnecessary as visiting such places give a real experience

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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect theenvironment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have onanimal life and human society

In the current world, pollution is increasing day by day because of multiple factors. This is a major effect on animal life and humans. Not only water pollution but also air pollution. I will explain briefly about water pollution in the below paragraphs.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion

At present time, changes are occurring in everyone’s life. But the human brain quickly gets used to new things. Currently, psychologists call this phenomenon “comfort zone”. Is it good or bad when we stay in our comfort zone? Do we really need a change?

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Global warming has led to the melting of the glaciers and unusual weather conditions across the world and today it is one of the biggest problems faced by humanity.

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Some people think that government should not spend money on sports stadium and building theatres. Instead it should spend more money on education. Do you gree or disgree?

Education should be prioritized to acquire more money from the government before sports stadiums and building theatres, thought some people. I truly believe that it is of equal importance because sports and art places encourage people to have positive health that leads to better study, as well as providing a space for people who have a talent in an art term, which is one part of learning.

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Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

it is believed by some that a huge amount of time and money should be spent on protecting wild creatures, while others think the human population are more important to focus on. Thus, I certainly believe by preserving the wild animal's habitat will affect simultaneously to the human population as well.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, there are plenty of alternative medicines and treatments which are believed as a solution to many health problems instead of seeing a doctor. The vast majority of people think that they are able to recover the health problems using alternative medicines such as Omega3 or Vitamin supplements. However, I believe that the best solution to cure the health problem is the medicines and treatments from the usual doctor who is a professional in medication.

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Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time. Others say that in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question of whether children should engage in educational activities during their free time is a topic of ongoing debate among parents and educators. While some parents believe that such activities are crucial for their child's intellectual development and future success, others argue that too much pressure and focus on education can have negative consequences on a child's well-being. Let's explore both perspectives.

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in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studied

Nowadays , many countries give opportunities to young youth to discover new skills or explore between the gap year of finishing high school and starting university to gain real-life experience , meet the new world and improve their skills in different areas. However, there are several merits and demerits.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will soon be no role for teachers in the classroom. To what extent do you agree..

We cannot imagine the 21st century without computers since it is the century of technology. In each and every field of life, the computer has the role of backbone. Nevertheless, despite all these revolutionary changes I still feel the role of teachers in the classroom cannot be eliminated.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be doing unpaid community service. This could benefit the teenagers and community. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this statement.

A large number of adolescents feel that the world does not understand them enough, partly due to the changes occurring in their body both physically and psychologically and this result in the increasing tendency for them to act out during this particular period. I completely disagree with the statement that teenagers should be required to do unpaid services in the community.

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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over whether using the sole language system does more harm than good for social prosperity in the upcoming years. In my opinion, this phenomenon is negative to the development of a nation.

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Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

All around the world, many employees become remote workers and more children start to study from home because technology has become more accessible and cheaper. Especially after pandemics this trend becomes much stronger than ever. Personally, I appreciate this development as an excellent computer user. Employees, now, can arrange their working time according to their personal preferences, and also for rural areas this development is a chance to improve their economy.

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