IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 69

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?

These days, more and more people tend to be self-employed rather than to work in a company or organisation. Generally, there will always be drawbacks in every choice that they make, it totally depends on individuals which path they want to take. Although self-employment certainly has its disadvantages, there are still plenty of benefits resulting from it.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Visiting places that are considered to be difficult to live in has become more popular recently. I personally believe that this activity can be both enjoyable and life-threatening for the visitors.

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Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternatives ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that many people think that the most effective way to decline crime is to put criminals in prison for a long period , while others believe that there are different methods to decline crime . I believe that the best way to mitigate crime is prison . In this essay, I will discuss both sides and provide my opinion .

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Some people think that competition at work, at school, and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your opinion::: A

Many people believe that cooperation among employees is more important than competition, while others think competition is more significant and has a huge impact either on jobs, school or daily life. In my opinion, competition is what can drive people to enhance their lives in different aspects.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we know longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

Advertising is a way to show people new products in order to persuade them to buy them. Some individuals believe that publicity is the best method to convince people to purchase their goods. Others think that advertising is everywhere that all know about it and cannot impact on us to choose them. Now I want to discuss these opinions and then write my own perspective.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A supermarket is a place where everyone can find different types of things. In recent years, in numerous nations, customers can visit the superstore and purchase various kinds of food which are produced all over the world. I think this change has a positive development. I will explain the reasons regarding this viewpoint with related examples in the following essay.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some culture, children are frequently taught that they can succeed in anything they want by putting in enough effort. This probably benefits children as it encourages them to follow their dreams ambitiously; however, it also has some drawbacks, leading pupils to be disappointed when they cannot achieve something.

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Some people believe that artificial intelligence has the power to improve our lives. However, others are worried about that it could have a negative impact. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the course of the last decades, developments in information technology have changed human lifestyle beyond recognition. While it seems artificial intelligence offers numerous benefits, such as productivity and accessibility, some individuals are still concerned about the negative impacts of this phenomenon.

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst the younger generation. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

In recent years, more young people are choosing second-hand clothing. This trend has become very popular, and there are several reasons why this is happening.

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Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together, while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that by using the internet people become closer. It is undeniable that the internet has become an essential part of communication, but there is absolute agreement on the most effective way to maintain communication. Some believe that using the internet can bring people closer together, while others argue that it harms people's and communities in real life.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

In today’s world, many people think learning English is important and this starts overshadow the need of local languages. In this essay, I will explore the reasons why English is an important global language, and provide suggestions on how local languages can be preserved.

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In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on another planet. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, few people think that in the future, maybe we need to shift to new planets, so it's important to invest money in researching new planets for living. If it comes to me, then I totally disagree with this idea.

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Friends have more impact on the academic performance of students than their teachers do. Do you agree or disagree? Use details and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, academic performance in children is a hot topic among parents and teachers, as some people say that friends or colleagues have more impact on learners comparatively tutors. If it comes to me then I totally agree with this statement.

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The plans below show a harbor in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided maps illustrate a harbour back in 2000 and its present layout. Overall, it can be observed that it stood in approximately the same shape during the period, with the addition of minor facilities.

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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

In this competitive world, people are migrating from villages to cities to seek opportunities and to improve their lifestyles. However, it is good, but people forget the importance of rural areas. In my opinion, it is good but there should be a proper balance in these areas. And also, what kind of problems many countries face because of people moving into urban areas.

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Global warming is emerging as a great threat to human survival in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and suggest some solutions?

Many think that global warming is rising and sea levels are increasing at unacceptable rates, also it can create some dangers for human existence. This essay believes that it stems from the rising number of factories, fossil fuels and plastic packaging. Additionally, the government can mitigate this way to enlightenment in schools and consulting renewable energy sources.

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Some countries invest in specialized sports facilities for top athletes but not for the average person. Is this a positive or a ngeative development.

There is an ongoing interest in national investments in sports. Many countries allocate funds to specialized sports infrastructure for professional athletes, but not for amateur players. The question now is whether this is a positive or a negative development. I believe this change is of benefit, and I will delineate my reasons in this essay, supported with relevant examples.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kinds of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

Individuals generally avoid embracing changes in their lives. The problems it causes are that without changes the lives of people become monotonous and stops the growth of individuals. To solve this issue, people should come out of their comfort zones and should try new things in their lives.

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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that human life was better when technology was simpler. I completely disagree with this point of view because technology has made daily life more comfortable and eased studies and work.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can certainly lead to both social and practical difficulties. In this essay, I will explain why I agree with the statement that living in a foreign language environment can cause significant problems.

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