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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many feel that the common educational system of teachers and students in a classroom will be replaced by the year 2050. Do you agree with this view? Give your opinion.

A few people believe that learning at schools and collages with teachers and students in a classroom will be replaced by artificial intelligence by the year 2050. Educational system is constantly changing all over the world with recent advancements such as Smart classrooms, virtual reality practical classes and online classes. I totally agree that traditional classroom culture with teacher and student sitting in the same classes will be replaced in future.

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In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this situation true in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Previously, pupil used to have different and innovative skills ,for instance, conducting most of the repairing work at home and even sewing clothes on their own. However, it is extremely daunting to find such highly skilled individuals nowadays as people have truly lost their learning power. This essay intends to shed light on its various factors and provide some feasible solutions to ameliorate this problem.

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In many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the reasons? How can this problem be solved?

Technological advancements have had a demonstrable effect on modern society, especially with regards to household waste. As the spread of the COVID-19 pandemic on a global scale has led more and more population turning to adopt technology as parts of their daily life to make their life more convenient, a bunch of household waste is generated during this new normal era caused by several human activities like online shopping and food delivery services, which this essay will explore in addition to possible solutions.

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Some people think that in the modern society, individuals are becoming more dependent on each other, while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there have been noticeable changes in the rate at which humans rely on each other. There are individuals who think there is an increase in this rate; however, critics feel that people are becoming less dependent on others. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and why I feel an increase in dependency is advantageuous to society.

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In some countries, owing a home rether than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, people are opting to have their own house rather than paying monthly rent. This preference is often viewed as a sense of security and fiancial stability that owning a home offers, which renting may not provide. I believe that securing a house is a positive trend.

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Some people think having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe skills and experience are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the recent years, the correlation between education and job opportunities is a widely discussed topic. A number of people suggest that obtaining a college degree is the most efficient way to secure a profession, while others argue that skills and experience are superior. Personally, I firmly believe that while higher education is essential, an individuals ability would provide an upper hand during job applications.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days some people hold the view that they should learn about other subjects as a minor subject. But others support that they should pay more attention to their major subject. This topic is popular and common all over the world. In my opinion, I agree with the form point.

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Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While many people argue that the reason for pollution and waste is due to ascend in amount of vehicles in cities, others believe that industrial facilities are the main cause of this issue. According to me, even though there are lots of factors affecting the environment, industries are the biggest source. This essay will explore both notions in greater detail.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days more rural people are really into living in cities, so the population in the countryside is declining. This topic is pretty popular and common all over the world. In my opinion, I support that this trend will lead a negative development.

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Making a lot of money is the only way to evaluate whether someone else is successful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it? Write 300 words of an academic essay about it using your explanation and specific examples to support your answers.

A few individuals argued that whether an individual has a successful life or not is solely determined by one’s wealthiness. While I agree that striving to be rich can lead to a more stable life financially, we cannot overlook that happiness can be achieved by having meaningful connections with people around us, which money does not able to do so.

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Some countries have introduced a law to limit working for employees. Why is the law introduced? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the rule that limits employees to work has appeared because of the risks from overworking. I firmly believe that this is beneficial development since this increases health rates and mitigates demographic problems in many countries.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

In the present era, social media has become the significance part in the life of people . some people think that it has negative effects on youngsters as well as on their ability to make personal relationship, while other people believe that these sites are beneficial to bring people together. Although I am in the favour of latter view ,I will discuss both the perspectives in the upcoming essay.

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some people think that it is responsibilities of governments to take care of the environment while other believe that it is responsibility of the citizens discuss both views and give your opinion

People have varied thoughts about carefulness environment as some individuals anticipate that it is government accountability, While others assets that this issue is the sole concern of citizens only. Nevertheless, I think both the public and the government are equally responsible for improving the environment and providing a good community to live.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is a common belief that some individuals have inborn talents, such as sports or music, and in some cases others do not. However, sometimes it is claimed that any child can be a good sportsperson or a musician if they are taught. Even though an innate talent helps a person to shine in that particular field, I personally believe that it is possible for any child to show growth in a specific sector, if they are taught in an apropriate manner. Who knows? Maybe It is possible for there show of hard work to grow into many achievements.

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It is often tought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this issue?

It is widely acknowledged that an increase in illegal behaviors among young people can mainly stem from exposures to violent content on the media. I disagree with this notion and this essay will outline the potential reason behind this trend and propose viable solutions to this issue.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. What is the reason for this rise in obesity and how could it be tackled ?

Obesity is a growing problem in modern societies, it is important to understand how this problem is affecting us, according to WHS, USA in one of the countries with more than a million of people with this condition. During this essay it will show the reasons to the rise and how this can be tackled.

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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

In the past, the upbringing of the children took place in rural areas, this was true for the vast majority of the population. As cities grew larger, a new dichotomy was presented owing to the fact that children in urbanized areas deal with different circumstances than those raised in the countryside. The way I see it, it is more convenient that, in order to rise raise a child, parents should prioritize the ease of access to the services provided in the city. This essay pretends to discuss that in further detail.

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Some people think that getting a degree from univerity is the best way to secure a good job. Others believe that employers value work experience more than a university degree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that the gaining university degree ensures the job opportunity, while others say that the work experience is more crucial to be employed. While the professional experience develops practical skills, I believe that the education provided by institutions allows to implement deeper approaches to the subject.

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Some people believe that Google and other search engines will put an end to the existence of libraries. Others think otherwise, claiming that libraries exist for a cause, and that technology will support libraries rather than eliminate them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some consider which different searching platforms can put and end to existence of libraries. Whilist others believe that developing electronics will support to survival libraries. This essay will discuss both perspectives however, i firmly believe that developing technology is more beneficial for libraries.

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Tell me about your self?and what is your dream job?

Hi, my name is Redh Jaffer Almahroos I am 14 years old I live in Saudi Arabia in Qatif and I was born in Qatif.

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