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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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It is important for chidren to learn the differrnce between right or wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Interpersonal development is crucial for building positive relationsips and ensuring a harmonious society. Instilling discipline at an early age plays a vital role in teaching children proper etiquette and preparing them for future challenges. There are clear advantages to disciplining children early, the potential drawbacks must also be considered.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Many high-level positions in companies are filled by male employees although in many developed countries, more than 50 percent of workforce are female. Some people argue that companies should provide employment to a certain percentage of females in these positions. I completely disagree with this statement because this restricts companies to achieve their desired goals and fosters discrimination among men and women in the employment procedure.

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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sports on television. Some believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sports themselves. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

There is a side of the world with continuous coverage of sports and activities on TV , many people think this discourages the youth from doing any aspects of sports by themselves . I strongly disagree with this statement for some reasonable reasons , in this essay, I will discuss the view and give my reasons .

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Animals are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

Animals are at risk of disappearing forever. Protecting only those which are resourceful to humans said by some people in my opinion is seems a little unreasonable.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Enhance future lifestyle is this a negative or positive development?

In recent years, parents put a huge stress on their children to achieve goals to be successful. This essay will mention the major cause of this phenomenon and the positive enhancement effect on children's lifestyles in future development.

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The intrnet has brought sea change in the way inforamtion is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. what are the most serious problems linked to the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

The importance of advanced technology increases connectivity globally, provides efficiency and serves an equal amount of challenges, which has always debatable and has now become more controversial with many people claiming that digitalization powered by internet services is hazardous, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over its potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate negative effects of this trend along with some remedies to solve this problem thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that children should be taught by parents until they can be impressive and brilliant people in their communities. In contrast, it seems that schools are the best institutions for this goal. I partially agree with the first statement, and I will discuss both aspects of guiding children by their parents or schools in the following paragraph.

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Many voung people these days choose to live alone instead of living with other family members. Do the advantages of this practice outweigh any of its disadvantages?

In recent years, many young people prefer to live alone rather than staying with thier families. While living independently has its advantages, it also comes with certain challenges. This essay will discuss both perspectives and explain why the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sports on television. Some believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sports themselves. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

There has been ongoing debate about whether ongoing brodcast of sports on TV as beneficial for people, while some argue that it is demotivating young people to practice sports. others believe effective media coverage is a stratigic method to encourage youngsters to get involved in sports. In my view, while others believe media coverage as uninspiring, I believe it is one of the strongest motivitional method for people to practice. In this essay I will discuss both views below.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam”. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars ?

In recent years, many cities have had a problem related to a traffic jam because of the amount of car accumulation. I think I can suggest a several ideas to the authorities to solve this problem. First, the government should prepare the public transportation route. For example, Indonesia has a decent public transport system, although Monorail trains are probably the better option for short distances and trains over long distances. But these public transportations are limited and most developed only in Java and Bali. With the sufficient of public transportation all over Indonesia, this instantly decreases the number of car owners.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people consider that professionals,such as doctors and engineers, need to work in the country where they studied and received training.However, I would argue that if people want work in other countries that they should be free to work in another countries.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, some people hold the view that they should receive a bad situation in their daily lives, such as they work in an unsatisfactory job or they earn a shortage of money. But other people believe that they should try to improve such situations. In my opinion, I agree with the latter point, people should create a better working and living environment by themselves.

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in many countries nowadays , consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world . do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

Nowadays , there is a growing trend toward importing international food product to local markets. I believe that although a variety of products is hilarious , only depending on these imported ones may impose a serious crisis on the economy as well as the environment .

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In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In certain countries, there is a growing number of people becoming parents at a later age. Although the advantages of this includes financial and psychological aspects, I believe it can bring about more problems compared to any advantages it might bring.

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Air pollution is one of the most pressing environmental issues affecting cities worldwide. What are the main problems caused by air pollution, and what solutions can be implemented to tackle this issue?

Nowadays many cities are effected by air pollution all around the world. As a result, global warming and diseases, but this issue can be tackled by making laws stricter and educational programme.

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Nowadays many poeple complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lck of sleep?

Recently, it has been observed that the number of people suffering from sleeping disorders are growing in an unprecedented rate. This alarming trend has many negative impacts on humans such as struggling to focus, as well as having difficulty processing thoughts however there is one simple solution to this and that is changing habits. Both the problems and remedies are elaborated in the further paragraphs.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying that educators are supposed to lay great emphasis on teaching the younger generation to distinguish the right from the wrong when they are still kids. Some hold the view that punishment plays a significant role in this process, with which I partly agree.

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Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earning between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an outlook claiming that social welfare could happen if the lack of distinction in earning between the richest and the poorest people is thin. I do agree with this view, and this essay, therefore, will examine how to degrade the social gap through education.

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Question: Big cities living is causing bad impact on public health. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people assume that urban area residence has a negative impact on the health of the people. I completely agree with the given statement as the population levels are quite high in the major areas. Moreover, big cities are expensive as compared to the smaller ones which is causing bad effects on the public health. This essay will discuss some major drawbacks of this shift with some relevant examples.

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You are unable to attend to your friends wedding in Britain. In this letter. -Tell her what you think about her wedding plan . -Apologize for not attending. -suggest date for future meeting.

I hope this letter finds you healthy. Firstly, I want to congratulate you for going into one more exciting stage of your life. You have been waiting for this big moment for a long time. I believe, a person needs courage and stability in their life before tying the knot with someone.

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