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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many opine that the goal of studying at educational centres that cause becoming literate should be provided for individuals to become useful for society. However ,some people claim that it should aid individuals to attain their aspirations. From my point of view , the purpose of education should be provided to follow humans' choices and goals.

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Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many hold the view that growing dependency on hi-tech communication devices is killing the art of conversation. At the same time, there is some uncertainty as to the merits and demerits of this viewpoint. In this essay, I will review the issues to seek a solution.

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The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reason and solution?

Some diverse range of creators are damaged seriously by human activities. As a result onland and marine animals are becoming indagment. This essay will consider issues about becoming extinct rare animals and offer way of their solve.

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universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that college should accept similar number between male and female. Although same ratio of them have positive aspect, I think they also have negative aspect. In this essay, I will discuss both point of view with relevant information.

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Nowadays most people are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.

In the contemporary era, people are busy with their routine schedules they don't have time to take care of their health. I would like to share my views about the current situation about fitness and activity.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There is an increasing number of people wanting to explore the background of the homes or buildings they reside in. This essay will discuss on factors that trigger the curiosity and methods that they can use to get some information on the building’s background.

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It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together?

Nowadays, the family connection is not considered to be the most important aspect of life ,especially in the younger generation. Several factors are believed to be responsible for this issue such as resentment between generations due to different points of view, miscommunication, etc. However, this problem is not too late to solve with the right approach which will be discussed in the following essay.

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The government should make laws about people's nutrition and food choice. Others argue that would be their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The government should be responsible making strict laws and regulations about people's nutrition and food preferences. Others believe that, it is individual's choice and responsibility about their food intake. I believe that, the government is only responsible to make laws but it is totally individual's choice and responsibility for choosing food and nutrition in their daily routine.

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Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

In this era of technology, social media platforms have spread their wings all over the globe. With the usage of these platforms our youngsters have initiated idolising public figures and celebrities , even if such personalities themselves take the wrong path. From my perspective looking up to famous figures is quite advantageous as teenagers can learn to follow their dreams without being afraid from downfalls and adopt healthy regime.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Many argue that zoos are unfair for animals due to animal crueality and should have shut down and on the other hand, many agree that zoos can be protective for wild animals. I strongly believe that, zoos are attraction point for many children and educate them but it is very cruel for animals because they can't live freely under the constant observation of humans.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to adverties themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The opinion is divided on whether businesses should advertise themselves via sports sponsorship or not. Although some people suggest otherwise, however, I believe that financing competitive games have greater benefits. This essay will discuss both views in detail followed by a reasoned conclusion thereafter.

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Around the globe, pushiment is imposed on anyone found guilty of commiting a crime. However, some poeple argue that prison sentence should not be the final resolution to criminal acts rahter favour unpaid community work. On the other hand , i dont consent to such flawed thinking and strongly believe that a criminal should face jail time. This essay will explain why prison sentence is better punishment for prisoners than unpaid community service.

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are several people thinking that Every student should have the right to higher studies in University and that government should offer them scholarships and make them free regardless of their financial aspect . This is a very Controversial Topic and thus, this essay is going to discuss that.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem

Nowadays a considerable amount of children have an unhealthy life way. the education system and parents have to make attempt to solve this problem.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem.

Nowadays a considerable amount of children have unhealthy life way. Education system and parents have to make attempt to solve this problem.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for slowing this problem

Nowadays considerable amount of children has unhealthy life way. Education system and parents have to make attempt to solve this problem.

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Some people believe that purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People have different views about the aim of education, some believe that providing useful people for the community is its purpose and others say that securing the people's goals is its aim. While both of these groups have their reasons, I strongly believe that the first opinion is more rational. Both views will be addressed in this essay.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people' salaries to pay for public services such as roads and schools. Other thinks high taxes are bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that using tax revenues from people's income for public related services such as schools, roads and hospitals would be appropriate while others think it could be a burden to the people. However, the issue is not entirely straight forward and arguments can be made against the idea. In my point of view, high taxes in undeveloped countries could be a nightmare for the people.

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Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say it is too late to do anything, some people think that we should take effective action improve situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are tremendous controversial perspectives heating a debate whether people’s harmful consequences on fauna and flora are too late to be tackled or else it is necessary for human to take far-reaching action enhance this circumstances. I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that children are mainly influenced by media, pop culture and their friends circule; whereas, it is considered by the others that the role of family is significantly vital in the development of children. These arguments are supported equally before drawing a reasoned conclusion in this essay.

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