IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 967

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Since the beginning of the 20th century, the number of endangered species has increased significantly and we have witnessed more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time. State some reasons for this and provide possible solutions.

It is often argued that wildlife parks are inhuman whilst other people disagree and think that they benefit the saving of wild animals. These parks create an artificial atmosphere for the wild animals and they lose the freedom of living in the forest. On the other hand, these parks help to protect the wild animal extinction, also they will in doing research. This essay supports the closing of these parks.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing taffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.What measure do you think might be effective.

There is no doubt that the number of vehicles on the road have been increased in the recent times. There are some people think that if the fuel price has been surged, problems of congestion on the road and different kinds of pollutants on the surroundings can be significantly reduced.

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Many parents, mostly mothers, stay at home to take care of the house and look after children. Many believe that the government should pay them a wage for this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that a great number of parents, especially women, tend to take parental leaves and become responsible for household duties. In my opinion, officials should support financially unemployed mothers and fathers, albeit make a list of requirements in order to help people adequately.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In recent times, taking year gap after finishing higher secondary education and university studies has become increasingly popular. In this essay I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of the year gap.

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People are wearing same clothes following same culture. Do you agree with this trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people tend to mimick a particular culture in their dressing. I totally disagree with this trend because the culture mimicking another will lose identity gradually, and the economy will also suffer loss.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need. Others say that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

There is no doubt that the number of commercials have been increasing since the advent of the modern technologies. It is sometimes thought that these adverts create an artificail needs among the customers, while others say that this would help them to know more about the latest products available in the market. I, personally, agree the latters' viewpoint because this serve the purpose of information.

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Since the beginning of the 20th century, the number of endangered species has increased significantly and we have witnessed more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time. State some reasons for this and provide possible solutions.

During the beginning of the 20th century,Most of the wildlife species are being at risk,The reason behind this extinctions is because of animal poaching, however hunting animals illegally should be strictly prohibited and there should be a strict action to avoid this kind of illegal activities.

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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world is seeing a rise in migrants who move from their own countries to live in another. Many people are of the opinion that migrants should adapt and follow both customs and traditions of the destination nation. I can only partly agree with this view and will give my reasons below.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this age of transformation, the widespread use of e-commerce triggers a heated debate- ‘whether it will lead to the closure of all shops in towns and cities in the foreseeable future’. In the case, I partially accord with the notion. The upcoming paragraphs will cast light on factors in favour of both online and offline shopping.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook)have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society?To what extent do you agree? In the current world, The usage of technology is constantly on the rise.

It is an irrefutable fact that this technological world, The usage of the internet increasing rapidly in all generations. The large number of percentage individuals asserts that social websites affect human lifestyle in a really harmful ways. I disagree with this view becouse, it also has more positive impact on people's live. Which are discussed in following paragraphs.

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Predictably, traditional cultures of countries will be lost as technology develops. Technology and tradition are incompatible. Do you agree or disagree?

It is supposed that developing technology could result in the eradication of contemporary norms. Also, I tend to believe the same and completely agreed with this prediction.

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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion

The educational system has been changed from past few decades. Some people argue that physical education and sports activities should be compulsory in the schools, howeverhowever, other individuals think that the choice of the subjects should be optional by the students . This essay shall intend to delve the both views and I completely agree that school management should make sports activities compulsory in their curriculum as these tasks makes youngsters fit and healthy.

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their study in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

Tough the education system improved and access more people from the past to now, some children struggle to focus on their studies in school. Firstly, this essay will discuss the main cause of the problem, and secondly will give suggestions on how to address the problem.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to preoccupy themselves. Discuss both these views and and give your opinion.

In recent years, the after school activities for children engagement has increased significanlty. While some people believes that parents should motivate their offsprings to participate in group activities in their leisure time, I would argue to give freedom to the child in deciding how they want to spend their vacant time according to their interest.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

There is no doubt that the number of criminals have been surging day by day. Main reason for this is that unemployment and lack of direction about the life. By giving proper career guidance and work oriented education can prevent this issue for a certain extent.

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Every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

For those who are interested it is possible to surf the Internet or read articles discussing language. There are several points of view in this matter. The first claim that different languages disappeared. An alternative belief regards this is harmful and considers that it is not essential to know a lot languages as the most important in that case essay both points of view are going to be examined and a particular opinion will be provided.

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"The best things in life are free" To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

There are various expressions as well as opinions in the world related to happiness and money. While idealists often assert that the best things in life, like happiness and health, are free, those who take a more realistic stance disagree. This essay will take a more realistic look at this argument and contend that the best parts of life often come at a cost.

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Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

For those who are interested it is possible to surf the Internet or read articles discussing art and culture. There are several points of view on this matter. The first claim government must not use charity for art and culture. An alternative belief regards that this is harmful and considers culture have a plethora of advantages for citizens as the most important in that case essay both points of view are going to be examined and a particular opinion will be provided.

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Some people thik that getting a degree from univeristy is the best way to guarantee the job, other believe that it would be better to gain experience first. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is important to consider whether a working experience or higher qualification is more significant to get a better job. Although it is sometime considered that having a graduate degree may make a person more employable than one who with years of experience. In my opinion, I consider that the educational qualification is far more important.

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In some countries a few people earn extremly high salaries. Some people think that this is good for country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your oppinion.

It can not be denied that the amount people can earn has always been a controversial question. Some people are convinced that the difference in salaries among citizens is beneficial for country’s economy. However others are sure that the amount of income should be controlled and limited by government. Both points of view will be analysed before a conclusion is drawn.

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