IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1147

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While it is true that watching TV affects children, it is difficult to determine whether it is the content of the programs or the length of time spent watching them that has a more significant impact on children. It seems to me that although the amount of time does affect youngsters, it is the content of the programs that has a more marked influence on them. On the one hand, the consequences of watching TV for long periods of time can be deleterious. Firstly, the longer children are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. When children become over-reliant on television for entertainment, they might neglect engagement in outdoor activities. This may result in a sedentary lifestyle that is highly detrimental to their physical health. More importantly, excessive TV watching impairs children’s communication abilities, so they find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. As a result, children w...

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With the development of only communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?.

There are different opinions about in recent years, technology has entered our daily life. It affects the quality of our social life. Also, it chances in our life. People can able to make new friends bad will never be alone.

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It is argued that parents of children who break the law should be punished as they are responsible for their children's actions. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that " laws are made to maintain the decorum of a nation ." It is a debatable issue that well-being must be penalised if their offspring break the law since they are responsible for what their department do . I partly accord with this statement. In this requisition, I will discuss my views from multiple angles before deriving a meaningful conclusion.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is believed that all experience that people have in their childhood has a big imprint on their adult life. But some people believe that pre-school experience is the most influential one,while others reckon that teenage experiences at school are more important.This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Apparently, there is an increase in the rate of illegal actions which are done annually. It is considered by some that capital punishment is the best method to deter the problem, while most people think some other approaches prevent criminals from doing offenses. As far as I am concerned, the second group have a better point due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

There is no denying that using of social network especially, Facebook has increased by year by. For this reason, many people claim that social media sites cause several negative situations for not only personal but also community. Although such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local societies.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is ture that the problem of obesity is increasing at an alarming rate and become a huge concern of government and citizens. Some people recommand that the price of junk food should be raised to tackle this problem, while in my opinion, it might be helpful to some extant, but there are other measures that are more effective to address this issue better.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is believed that all experience that people have in their childhood has a big imprint on their adult life. But some people believe that pre-school experience is the most influential one,others reckon that teenage experiences at school are more important.This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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Some people believe that studying history is very important and we must study the past to understand the present. Others say that it is useless and should not be studied at all. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some People argue that choosing history as part of their curriculum is vital to get knowledge about what was happen in the past and what is happening in the current time, while others opine that history has no use in the Present world. I believe in the first statement because it is about our development process which is paramount to our current and future generations. I am going to expatiate in the following paragraphs.

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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Different professions have very different wages. While some of them seem way to high for the actual work, other professions seem to be underpaid. People of public life, especially entertainers like film stars, musiciens and sport stars earn very good money. But are they paid too much?

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Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effects on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a fact that in recent days, movies and computer games containing violence are common in society. While some people argue that it has negative impacts on individuals and society and should be banned, others believe that these activities are just useful relaxation. From my perspective, I agree these views and would discuss both views in this essay.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Some populations think that people should accept the terrible situations in their life but other communities claim that humans should attempt to enhance their life and it is better choise to convert problem to opportunity. In the following paragraphs, different attitude of this concept will be discussed.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative that positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?

While some people think using an electronic device ,especially every day is not bad for humans and even is very useful for them, other public, as well as many experts, believe that utilising a lot of time has a more negative effect on people. Let me discuss my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet while others believe that nothing can replace physical classrooms with direct guidance from teachers.Discuss both views( and give your own opinion).

Some peoples argue that due to the advent of technology pupils get more information than in traditional classrooms, hence there are no need educational institutions. While others advocate that nothing can surpass the teacher's interactions with students. I believe that teachers are important in once life we can not have an alternative for this. I am going further elaborate on both views in the following paragraphs.

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today people are wasting large amounts of food. why you think so? what can be done to reduce the amount of food wasted?

Nowadays a vast amount of food is being wasted all around the world and has become one of the main problems in human society. This phenomenon might be caused by numerous reasons and people could find many solutions to solve this problem.

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Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities, which are becoming overcrowded. What are the reasons for this movement to cities and what can be done to reduce it?

In the present, there is a huge amount of people dramatically emigrating from the rural areas to modern cities, leading to the overload of public facilities usage. In this essay, I will point out both of reasons and solutions of remarkable increase in emigration.

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Some people hesitate between getting a job and starting their own business. While the idea of not having a boss and working on one's own schedule may sound tempting, financial risks and stress sometimes outweigh these advantages. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of working in a company?

More and more people are thinking of starting their own business to be more independent in their everyday life, which would offer them more freedom for holidays and everything else. However, with these advantages there are also some disadvantages because of the financial risk and stress that it can have on the self-employed. But what side has more arguments?

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Please discuss the impact social media has had on your personal relationships. Do you believe social media improve our processes of communication? Describe an instance social media has helped you and another time when it was a nuisance.

Following your favourite influencers on their holidays at the most incredible places, getting outfit inspiration for your next professional meeting, or just watching some cute cat videos - you can spend and lose a lot of time on social media, without even realising. However, social media can also improve our communication and therefore be helpful in creating and keeping contacts. But is this actually true, or can it also have negative impacts on our personal relationships?

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Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is frequently believed that young adults should opt for varsity for higher specialized education. Although the contrasting views are also shared by others who think that they should be convinced to learn the art of car repair or building construction and work in such sectors to benefit their own families as well as the society itself. This essay will portray the reasons behind both sides of argument and also mention my opinion regarding this issue.

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Globalisation has highlighted the need for international communication.It is iften argued that english should be a compulsory subject for all school children around the world. Other argue that this would do more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Human beings are called the most intelligent animal because we have been able to develop languages to communicate amongst ourselves. There are hundreds of languages present across the world, however, recently, the need for common international language is being highlighted everywhere. Some believe that english should be made compulsory in schools, but many thinks otherwise. In this essay, I will evaluate the benefits and negatives of making english mandatory and will explain why the positives outweighes the drawbacks.

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