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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many countries are increasing significantly in development and progression in many aspects. Some governments think that economics plays a vital of the progression of countries, while many people believe that other types of development are also equally important. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be discussed before the conclusion is reached.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

Most of the products include a large proportion of sugar, which has side effects to human’s health and that the price should be raised in order to encourage people to eat a lesser amount of sugar. I don’t agree to this statement.

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peoples's lives are now surrounded by advertisements. These advertisements have negative impact on people's lives.To what extend you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, adverts can be found everywhere. It cannot be denied that this marketing ways not only giving positive effect but also causing some drawbacks. I personally agree that the advertisements have negative impacts on peoples’ lives. This manuscript will elaborate first on the function of advertising a product and second, I want to highlight demerits of it on society.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Good physical as well as mental condition always have a direct link with our diet. The common notion, 'we are what we eat and drink' is gaining importance in the contemporary epoch as people are tempted to follow unhealthy eating patterns thereby endangering their well being. Owing to the ill effects of sweetners on health, there is an argument supporting that ought to increase the cost of sugary products in order to discourage its consumption by public. I certainly agree with the aforementioned as health as health is the prime important factor.

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The maintenance of public libraries is a waste of money because of computer technologies that have the same function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the rising use of computer technologies, it is becoming apparent that public libraries has depleted its value. It is also evident that due to the recent innovations, computer technologies has been very helpful in researching.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Communication plays a vital role in everyone's life. Modern technology, however, has changed the way people interact with each other. In today's era, majority of people choose social media applications to connect with the loved ones and to build new friendships and relationships. Anyhow, I believe that there are both positive and negative impacts of social media on children's lives. I will discuss the strengths and weaknesses of social network in the following paragraphs.

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The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of education for all members of the society is undeniable. The more people have literacy in a society, the better condition the society has in various areas such as economics and politics. I strongly believe that efficient rules must be determined which lead every individual in society to take the steps in education and earn a basic knowledge in every part of science and literature. In the following paragraphs, it will be discussed that why adults education is very important and what would happen if authorities do not determine a proper solution to provide them with education.

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12.Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

Environmental damage is emerging rapidly severe in numerous nations and countries. Although ecology threatens myriad societies and species, its devastating consequences can be combated triumphantly. This discourse appraises some of the troubles caused by air transport, water disposal, and deforestation on the entire planet and nominates some viable remedies to curb the grave concerns.

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Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places. What are the advantage and disadvantage of using a bicycle these days?

Nowadays, riding a bicycle is one of the most popular activities in people's life. Some people believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to travel to a destination. From my point of view, although this transport is more healthier, it is also risk accident by car and inconvenient if you travel a long- way or in an urban area.

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Memorization of information by frequent repetition, namely rote learning, plays a role in many education systems. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays rote learning plays a role in the education system as students memorise the information in order to pass the examinations. However, this method of learning has both advantages and disadvantages and this essay will clarify whether advantages outweigh disavntages.

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These days many countries help other countries by giving free food, medical and other aid. what are the drawbacks and benefits to give and receive country?

It is irrefutble that nowadays a large number of nations assist other regions by imparting free food, medical, technology and so on. While giving or receiving help has numerous advantages but its disadvantages can not be undermined. This essay will articulate both pros and cons in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture. What are your opinions?

An immensely vexed curiosity in the contemporary epoch today pertains to whether global languages should be identical or not. There is no denying the fact that has a plethora of superior influences. I firmly coincide it is an affirmative tendency and withstand the stated notion. This discourse will further elucidate my assertions in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In recent years, television has contributed most to changing the quality of life of ordinary people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people believe that the invention of television promotes the quality of life for ordinary people more than any other inventions. In my opinion, I completely agree that TV has the most positive impact on life for average person from different areas.

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Some people say that arts subject such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the pressure of attending college examination, whether arts subjects should be chosen by students in high school syllabus is up for debate. However, I totally disagree with the idea that arts subjects should not be obligated from the high school courses. The essay will examine the reasons and conclude shortly with my opinion.

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In many country average weight of the people increasing and fitness levels are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken solve them?

Obesity has become a concerning problem for many countries as it leads to poor health conditions of their social members. In this essay, I will shed some lights on the reasons accouting for this phenomenon and propose some solutions that the government, company management and individuals could use to mitigate this problem.

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Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

Violence in playgrounds, everyday problems that can escalate to future problems such as child’s future charateristic. It’s crucial for parents to teach their spouts to not fight back the bullies for their own sake.

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Nowadays, distance-learning programmers have gained in popularity( those teaching programmers that involve the use of written materials, video, television and the internet), but some people argue that courses can never be taken as good as those by attending a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different view about whether distance-learning will replace traditional college education. In my opinion, both teaching methods are indispensable, and it is difficult to distinguish which one can be more vital in students’ education.

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Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A multitude of parents is grimly advocating that children are more likely to be educated by schools as qualified employees and law-abiding citizens to contribute themselves to their countries as opposed to thinking independently and critically about their own life and ambitions. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this view.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a posetive or negative situation.

Owning a home can be a very expensive and burdensome process, however, people still prefer buying their own house instead of renting one in some countries. In this essay, I will explore the reasons why people choose to buy a house rather than rent one. I think absolute preference for buying over renting causes a negative impact on the society.

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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

peoples's lives are now surrounded by advertisements. These advertisements have negative impact on people's lives.To what extend you agree or disagree?

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

The maintenance of public libraries is a waste of money because of computer technologies that have the same function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

12.Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places. What are the advantage and disadvantage of using a bicycle these days?

More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programmes to get their news and instead read online. Is this a positive or negative development?

Memorization of information by frequent repetition, namely rote learning, plays a role in many education systems. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days many countries help other countries by giving free food, medical and other aid. what are the drawbacks and benefits to give and receive country?

Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture. What are your opinions?

In recent years, television has contributed most to changing the quality of life of ordinary people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that arts subject such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many country average weight of the people increasing and fitness levels are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken solve them?

Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a posetive or negative situation.