IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 176

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is argued that children dedicate their time to smartphones every day. This essay will first discuss that this situation has arisen because of the entertaining apps which are included the smartphones and then, it will explain how smartphones harm their health as a negative development.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. Others think that adults life brings more happiness, inspite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both this views and give your own opinion?

While some individuals have different views that young people have the most happiness time in their life. However, some argue that adult life has got most happiness, although there are lots of obligations in this period. I believe that teenagers definitely have more enjoyment time.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as the main source of income. unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if not managed properly. do you think the benefits of tourism outweigh its disdvantages

It is true that many countries around the world have only tourism as the crucial source of income, and it is a common topic of discussion. There are definitely positive and negative aspects to relying on one source for revenue to be considered.

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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children.

Nowadays, there are a lot of good things. These one of things that affects our children life. Watching television is one of the things.Some people this is a positive idea,while others disagree and think it is a waste of time. This essay agrees that is watching television is useful.this essay will discuss both points of view.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

The internet nowadays has become an important part of student lifestyle it can play a significant role in their education. Despite the negative side of using the internet by children, I firmly agree with the benefits of utilizing it for learning.

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With growing population in cities, more and more people lives in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Most of the people who are in megacity lived in an apartament with no space outside. Even is it better to live in small place or nor this is a common topic of discussion. There are definitely positive and negative aspects to having a small place to be considered.

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Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones, letter-writing ability is disappearing. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, people argue about the new technologies that altered our lifestyle and because of this the ability of handwriting is disappearing. I completely agree with the people who think that writing by computers and mobile phones or other gadgets is much better than old method.

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Individuals should improve the environment or is it the government and large companies that should take action? agree or disagree.

Some people argue that the ordinary citizens should take an action, because it is their responsibility to upgrade the environment, but others believe that it is obligation of huge companies and government. This essay is completely agree that the government should take care of environment, and I am going to provide some reasons, arguments and examples for it.

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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own

There is no denying the fact that appearance is most important to both genders. While it is a commonly held belief that some company’s believe that their employees should dress appropriately, there is also an argument that others they think the quality of works is more valuable than appearance. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. What’s the situation like in your country? What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of doing part-time jobs?

In the majority of countries, juveniles might be encouraged to work in a part-time job. In other words, it is argued by some that more and more youngsters are eager to work during their studies. I strongly disagree with this idea and in this essay, I will explain the same circumstance in my country and I will also present some benefits and drawbacks of working young people.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of great responsibilitues. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Happiness is an integral part of humans’ lives. While some people argue that, it is teenagers who experience the highest level of joy in their life, others mention that despite more responsivities adults have, they have happier lifestyle. I go along with the first group’s view, and I will explore both views in the following essay.

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TOPIC: A love for tradition has never weakened a country, but it has strengthened nations in their hour of peril. Discuss the statement and give your own opinion.

Traditions play very important role in safeguarding the culture. The love for tradition never strives to discouraged the nation but it has encouraged the nation in every aspect. It is true traditions show countries cultural values and plays indispensable role in saving the ethical norms. In my perspective, traditions should be followed by each and every individual living in the country as it will only lead to countries prosperity.

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Many major cities are facing a housing crisis as they cannot provide enough land for new buildings. Some local governments believe the problem could be solved by reassigning park land for residential development, because this land would be better used for housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Big cities are not able to provide house to all people living there as lot of people are relocating from the rural areas to the urban areas. Local authorities think that this issue can be resolved by allocating parks lands for building of new house. I firmly disagree with this as parks are the places where people can go relax and can feel the beauty of nature. Therefore, they need to be preserved and other solution need to be considered to resolve this issue.

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Most people agree that money cannot bring happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?

Some people argue that happiness is come from money, while other people think that happiness cannot be bought by anything. I believe that there are a lot of factors to make people happy, not only by having much money. People have their own way to consider what happiness is and what things can make them satisfied.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There have been ongoing debates regarding whether the juvenile years are the greatest period of life, while others argue that even though more responsibilities, the adult generation can buy greater happiness compared to the children generation. Both points of view and the reason why I personally prefer the latter argument will be elaborated on in this essay.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out of work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parent’s absence.

There is an ongoing debate around the society about both parents should do their job to gain additional income. Meanwhile, some of them argue that children will not receive enough support if both parents go out of work.

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As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problem does this have on the enviroment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

Every year tourism numbers are increasing. More and more destinations are opening up and people want to explore different places of the world. Nowadays the most popular and efficient way for humans to travel is by air. With tourism numbers increasing, there is an extended request for more flights. With growing demand for flights comes a relevant problem. In this essay I will introduce you to the mentioned problem and provide solutions.

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As a result of tourism and the increased number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

Nowadays traveling by flying is considered one of the safest ways of travel. Planes have come a long way of upgrades to have a strong title of safety. As for emissions, flying used only 2,5 percent of the world's carbon emission yearly, and earlier studies show that only 10 percent of the world flies in most years. By 2019 annual world-wide passenger count was 4,56 billion people, but each year as the incomes rise, there’s a bigger demand for traveling and flights, resulting in an emission rate doubling.

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Many elderly people are not longer looked after their family, but are put in health homes. What are the advantages adn disadvantages of this trend?

Many seniors are not anymore being looked after their blood family members, and instead they are placed in elderly homes. One of the advantages of this is that they will have professional medical attention, and other advantages is that they will practice physical activities during the day. However, the disadvantages are that they might feel abandoned and being mistreated at these places.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays everyone around us has access to devices such as, smartphones encluding children. The perpuse of these devices are to help children in their education but, unfortunately some children use their smartphones for hourse to entertain themselves. However I believe this is effecting children negatively for many reasons. In this essay I will first eplore why kids are miss using smartphones and explain my opinion in detail.

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