IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 175

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some parents purchase their kids a large number of toys to play with.What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having lot of toys.

Many parents buy their kids a lot of toys to play with. One advantage is that a number of playthings can help develop fine and gross motor skills. However, the main disadvantage is that toys may limit children's opportunities for social interaction.

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The plans below show a public Park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In 1920, there were two entrances near both Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street, it is the same today along with an additional entrance from the underground car park. When walking into the park from the Eldon Street entrance in 1920, people would see a fountain in the middle of the park, but now, the fountain has been replaced by a rose garden surrounded by seats on four sides which were once placed around the park. In addition, on the right side, the glasshouse alongside the wall in 1920 had also been removed, and a water feature took up its place. And on the left side, the rose garden is completely gone. Moreover, to the left of the fountain, there used to be a stage for musicians, but now an amphitheatre replaced it for concerts, taking up more space than the old structure.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Healthcare is one of the most important topic that everyone always pay attention, especially some scientists use their knowledge to create medicine or some solutions for people lives. Some people think that the most essential goal of science ought to be improve people’s health. In my opinion, I completely agree with this since scientist can help more people to live so the population will increase help society has more worker the amount of vaccine or more new solution to deal with diseases can be find out faster.

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In many countries, more money is spent on transport system in the cities. In contrast, very little is spent in rural areas.What are the effect of this and What can be done to solve this problem.

These days,a considerable amount of money are being spent on public transportation system in mega cities.However,the government do not prefer to allocate budget to improve transportation system in suburbs very much.This essay will look at some problems of this action which is created in society and also I will propose some effective solutions.

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Topic: Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages? You should write at least 250 words.

In recent times, more and more people tend to change their places from their loved onesand peers in order to seek for job. In this essay, I would argue that the benefits of moving from thier friends and families for work outweigh the drawbacks.

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some places in the world, some people do not support the government for recycling plastic, what are the problemsa nd solutions?

In some countries, society does not cooperate with government in recycling wasted materials like plastic bottles or newspapers. The following passage is going to discuss about the causes of this behavior by people and make some relevant solutions for it.

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The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those times than they are now. What problems will this cause? What can be done to solve these problems?

Nowadays, it is clear that the old habitations are unsuitable for the existing living conditions. Although, it might have been people’s choices in the past. There are several causes of this issue as well as the potential initiatives which can be introduced to solutions.

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Nowadays children play computer games for long hours. they do not play traditional games, what do you think are the reason for this? Do you think it influences children in a good or bad way.

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Maps showing changes in the village and the town. Task 1

The three plans illustrate the developmental changes that occurred in Meadowside village and its neighbouring town, Fonton, from 1962 till the present.

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Some people think that essence of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, education serves various roles in society, spanning social, economic, and personal domains. Moreover, it assists in improving every aspect of life i.e socialisation, and behavioural relation with society . Some say that this competition should encourage adults while others argue that participation is enough to grow their career.In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.

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Space tourism makes space exploration less important. It reduces the impact of real astronauts and scientists' hard work. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argues that if space tourism become a reality, led to space exploration less crucial and this reason can make scientists' hard work are nominated in social and real astronauts lack of important as before. In my opinion, I feel that people should not eliminate these jobs, the role of each of them has unique characteristics, all toward the development of humanity. So I disagree about this argument.

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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative development? You should write at least 250 words.

Children are often looking for a little entertainment. In this modern world children spend more time in playing computer games and less time in sports. I think this negative development is because of the new invention of computer games that looks more attractive.

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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is, in your opinion, the most important thing to succeed in life?

There are a number of individuals who are unsuccessful throughout their school years, but later on turn out to achieve great success in life. Such individuals demostrate that academic difficulties do not necessarily predict future failure. Moreover these struggling may be done by some personal factors such as family, because, kids come from different social backgrounds with various problems that can affect their well being.

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Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree?

While it is widely claimed that group work offering a variety of essential life skills than any other activities, others argue that working as a group can promote various skills such as building up relationship along with communication skills. The reason why I agree with the this statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Older people choose to spend money on themselves (e.g. on holidays) rather than save money for their children after retirement. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some individuals up in years decide to invest wealth on their personal needs rather than collect money for their youngsters after retirement. However, as far as I am concerned, this approach does not facilitate the growth and development of their offspring’s, nor the optimum base of skills required to thrive in their future chosen career, due to the lack of financial savings that could have been allocated for an easier path to success of their descendants. Needless to say, the children would not be able to have access to the first-rate education programs. Also, without the parents’ appropriate contributions, it’s harder for the child to figure out what their interests, talents and passions are.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people Say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Throughout recent years, there have been accompanying issues with rising obesity rates due to a huge upsurge in the number of high-calorie foods. Many individuals feel that introducing higher payment to unhealthy fattening foods may better address this issue of obesity. It is, in my opinion, an unefficient trend that will have a detrimental influence on the people's lifestyle. I will explain my perspective in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Write about the following topic: In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In western countries, it is common that after retirement people tend to live in long-term care or Retirement homes. Some people argue that the government should support the cost of living. However, other thinks that it is the family's responsibility to look after them. In my perspective, the government should allocate funds and provide this service to their people. In the following paragraphs, I will provide an explanation to support my idea.

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While some people believe that children need pressure from parents to develop, others disagree by agruing that parental pressure is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, overall development of a child is essential and required lots of efforts. To achieve this many parents believe that they need to put pressure on their children, However, other people disagree and opine that it can be achieved without any pressure as well. This essay will eleborate both the views and provide my opinion as well.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Most universities have a system that students need to take liberal arts classes which are far from their major field, essentially. But there is a controversy about whether students must take liberal arts classes. Some people say it is a chance to broaden students' perspective. In contrast, other people say, in real, students don't have much time to study their major so learning other subjects is a total waste of time. Between these views, I agree with the prior argument.

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Some people prefer to eat at food stands 9 or restaurants. Other people prefer to band prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Over the last few decades, wether eating out or consuming at home have become one of the most questioned issue. While, some groups of people support the viewpoint of going out and eat yummy foods, others oppose eating out and advocate consuming food at home. In this essay i will debate both sides and give my personal hypothesis to it.

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