IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 172

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that students who are studying with classmates in educational institutions have more advantages than those who are using distence learning at home. This essay totally agrees with this statement because schooling prepares students with good skills and moral values, and studying with their tutors in person has many benefits.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving first punishment. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is widely acknowledged that many criminals tend to be involved in more crimes after their first prison sentence. This phenomenon happened because of two major factors which are lack of rehabilitation and difficulty to find a job and the possible solution will be explained more in this essay.

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Some people prefer to eat at restuarant while others prefer to prepare it at home. What is you preferance

In the contemporary world, the access to food is available through a plethora of methods decision depends on our choice. It has sparked a societal debate, as some are keen on dining outside, while others are more interested in the reciprocal notion, to have home-made foods. In my perspective, I do prefer the cook food made by ourselves and compelling reasons with the relevant examples on my stance will be expounded by the following essay.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In our everyday lives, people naturally take a lot of risks. People cannot always avoid risks even if they want to. Facing the problem and dealing with it will be hard process but it gives a lot of advantages to us, so I agree with the benefits of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages.

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More and more people are moving from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order tolook for work. What will be consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

Over the last few decades,changing the location of living has risen dramatically.In other words,the majority of people have moved from suburbs to capital cities in order to find a proper job in recent years.This essay will look at some results of this action and also I will propose some effective solutions.

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The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web ? What solution can you suggest ?

Due to advancements in technology,Internet has become a crucial part of society.However ,numerous turbulences have been brought to the world due to the use increasing significantly.In this essay,I will elaborate on its drawbacks and possible solutions.

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Many countries today are experiencing problems associated with noise pollution ( excessive noise pollution above a normal background noise) what are the cause of this phenomenon and what effects does it have on the people affected?

In recent years, noise pollution around the globe has been increasing at an alarming rate. The main reasons that are contributing to this trend is unnecessary honking on the roads by some car owners and the usage of heavy machinery for new building's development. This could have significant effects on elders and children as they won't go out for regular exercises due to this unbearable noise. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the causes and effects with relevant examples.

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Now a days, the crime rate among young people is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done by parents, teacher and government to reduce it?

In this modernise epoch,juvenile delinquencies have been proliferating dramatically.Wrong doers are always a young rather than aged people.To solve this turbulence,it is a responsibility to their guardians as well as their teachers.In this essay,I will discuss reasons behind it and their possible solutions.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is a common belief that public areas such as big parks and green places in cities should be replaced by apartments or houses due to reduce commuter's travel time. However, there is a more persuasive argument that cities should not be concentrated with full of buildings as there could have serious problems.

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Buying things on the internet, such asbooks, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern society, shopping online, not only for life items but also for travel tickets and so on, is becoming more and more popular due to its convenience and various choices. Though shopping online also has some drawbacks; however, the benefits definitely exceed the drawbacks.

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Some people believe that schoolchildren should do their class work individually. Other people believe that sometimes class work should be done in small groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s society, it is an increasingly popular topic to discuss whether school children should complete their class work individually or do it in small groups. Personally, I agree to a certain extent that schoolchildren should do their classwork individually, however, I feel that there are drawbacks to this which I will elaborate on further in this essay.

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in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an ageing population creates problemds for governments. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. to what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages.

As the technology is developed fast, human's life expectancy is going higher and the proportion of elderly people is getting larger than the past. In this trend, some people argue that increasing of ageing population makes problems for governments. Otherwise, some people say that governments will get more advantages with this. In this debate, I agree with there are more disadvantages of rising ageing population.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some believed that male and female students should study on same schools while other suggested they should learn in mono gender environment. In this essay, I will explain both side of view and I personally support study should be separate base on gender differences.

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Some people believe that handwriting is no longer useful in the modern world and should not be taught in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot of schools teach their students how to write as it is important for them to know about spelling. Nowadays, with the development of technology, computers can help pupils to study about anything including writing. Hence, it is often argued that handwriting is no longer needed to be taught. While I understand the people who argue this opinion, I personally believe that it is still mandatory for pupils to learn handwriting.

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, the prevailing competitions in the companies hs stimulated the necessity of changing the jobs. It has sparked societal debate while some claiming that keen on doing the same job for the long time maybe beneficial , others are contending that the professions should be changed off oftenly to gain the success. I strongly agree with the former view and my stance on it will be expounded by the following essay with compelling reasons and relavant examples.

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Some people think an international car free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution.Others think there are more effective ways do to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In this cutting-edge era,atmospheric pollution is a big challenge around the world.This causes negative impact on human health.Moreover, global car free day is a better method to mitigate contamination .Whereas , others imagine that there are more powerful approach to do this.I opine that,I strongly agree with second statement.This essay will articulate both views in forthcoming paragraphs, along with a relevant conclusion.

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More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

It is widely speculated that in the contemporary era, majority of the facilities and services are condensed in the large cities.Simultaneously, rapid influx of people to settle in such areas is inevitable.It is conspicuous that this increase of urbanization has catalysted the scarcity of living spaces , thus, citizens are used to live in smaller houses without gardens. Although this issue has both positive and negative impacts I believe that drawbacks will outweigh the merits.My stance on it will be expounded by the following Essay with the compelling reasons and relavant examples.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishments' is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

One of the primary essential thing that can be done to kids is teaching them to understand the distincts between what is good and what is bad. I strongly agree that, various forms of punishments such as banning the usage of items they like playing with most and rewarding for a good deed are major things that can be done in order to rectify childern's bad behaviours by either the educators or the guardians though guiding and counselling might also assist some kids.

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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

Nowadays, some countries suffer from contamination in multiple aspects, such as, environments, water, and air. Pollution is defined as a negative and harmful influence that occurs in our nature, usually it is caused by human beings, according to some scholars. This essay will discuss the consequences and solutions of this phenomenon.

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Some claim that children are more aware of environmental issues than older adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that children under 18 years old are more conscious and informed of environmental problems in contrast with adults. I agree with this statement , owing it to the fact that children are actively being notified of current ecological issues in school . Meanwhile , the elderly people are too occupied with their jobs and are proved of making the damage to environment.

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