IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 171

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Wealthy nations often provide some financial assistance to the countries that are facing economic difficulties, however, the approach does not effectively address the root causes of proverty. As far as I concerned, I strongly agree that richer nations should offer other forms of support, as more comprehensive methods are needed to truly help these countries.

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Monekybox will lead to panademic like what covid19

Nowadays, Monkeypox has a mortality rate that varies from 0.1 to 10%, and many people are wondering if it will lead to a pandemic like COVID-19 or not? Despite people's fear of the Mpox disease, it will not lead to a panademic as it has a different way of transmission (Maria Cheng,2024). Although there are some similarities between both viruses, but still, the differences are noticeable in the method of transmission, their nucleic acid and their symptoms. In this essay, I will discuss each point for both viruses.

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nowadays the way many people intract with each other has changed because of technology. in what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development?

The mode of comminucating among individuals has been impacted by technology. Different platforms and applications have made profound changes in types of relationship people make. In my opinion, these changes can be considered a negative development.

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

There is debate over whether the latest technology has made shopping easier currently or not, with number of thinking that shopping has become more comfortable and simply with up-to-date innovation and others arguing that online shopping is really unreliable. Personally I think, current technology makes purchasing more effortless.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

There is no doubt that technology has revolutionized our world in a both positive and negative manner. One of the adverse effects is obesity, people gaining excess weight is a major concern in some parts of the world.

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Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/

Two opinions exist about the public transportation’s development. The first one tells that governments should invest mainly in its speed, the second one – in other priorities such the cost and the environment. It is necessary to find the right way using broad mind.

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Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is bans of private cars in certain city centres. It is undeniable that travel by vehicle has become an essentials part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find that using a car on public beaches for ease of move are beneficial, while others consider everything associated with associated with inconvenience to other people. Surely, there are both pros and cons to using a private cars for your own purposes, but I believe advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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Some people believe that the government should fund art and culture, while others think that it should only fund sciences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Government fund allocation is a matter which has fueled heated debate. While it is generally agreed that these money should be spend on social matters like art and culture, there are those who argue that the fund should be focused on sciences in general. Personally, I am inclined to support the former perspective.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Changing things is important activities in our life. Some individuals avoid changes and doing same things in their all life, however, others people prefer opposite side and believe that changing is always remarkable things. I party agree with both argument.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The most optimum method to mitigate growing traffic and pollution is to hike the prices of petrol. I, personally do not find this solution a considerable approach, hence i disagree with the statement.

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Many people nowadays fo not feel safe either when they are at home or go out. What are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem?

Growing number of people feel unsafe when they walking outside. Moreover, some of them have the same feeling at home either. This essay will go deeper into this topic and will try to explain reasons and possible measures to tackle this problem.

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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? (22/08)

While it is widely debated about society should be based on rules and laws-based or not in order to create peaceful communities, others argue that such rules can some how restricted or limits our right and autonomy in some ways. The reasons why I support this statement towards regulations-driven society is essential will be elaborated on in this essay.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, comparedd with the number of the older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the advantages?

Nowadays, in some countries, there is a large number of young people in comparison with the count of older people. It is clear that the young generation is more interested in technologies that are developing more and more now, and because of that they will adapt faster to the future. Also, this large count of younger population may cause unemployment.

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Some people believe that the experience children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Several people think the children's experience before they go to school will lead the powerful effect in the future. Meanwhile, the rest of people believe that the teenagers phase have bigger influence. In my opinion, both of age distribution have their positive impact for young education, however, the primary have the most impact.

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It is more important to use the space in cities well than make them look beautiful. To what extent do you agree ?

Nowadays, there are 2 types of building design, we must choose between high buildings and beautiful buildings. Generally, cities are known for their high number of skyscraper and less aesthetic. Nowadays, most of the constructions are built based on practicality rather than aesthetic, especially in high population urban areas. Meanwhile, there are so many unique and aesthetic one too but they are only available on special spot. To be honest, most of it are built for tourist attractions and business purposes. Personally, I am certain that skyscraper is inevitable, especially for high population cities.

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Smoking Tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people with potentially serious effects on their healths. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

In some areas around the world, there has always been a considerable amount of young people with an addiction to smoking tobacco, which has had a dire effect on their health.

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Some people consider prices as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree.

Due to the advancement of technology, people are crazy to purchase things to use them in their lives. Before buying anything, citizens should consider items are worth able or not. I completely agree with this statement and will shed light on it in the following paragraphs.

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Due to globalization, people all over the world are now able to buy the same products. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, more and more people enjoy buying same products from all over the world because of globalization. There are two reasons to support this idea: firstly, this trend can help people find new hobbies and interests and secondly, it can create a beneficial impact on economy.

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Many people nowadays fo not feel safe either when they are at home or go out. What are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem?

There is no denying the fact that alot of people feels less secured all around ,both at their houses or when they move around.In this essay i will be discussing the causes behind this feeling and propose solutions for it.

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The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generations. What are the reasons for this, and how can the problem be tackled?

These days, the percentage of people who are eating unhealthy sustenance without doing exercise has risen, due to many reasons This essay will discuss and draw my personal conclusion.

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