IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 253

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Learning English Language is more important than local language why?

Language is used by human being to communication. Language plays crucial role in communication among human beings. Learning international language rather than native language seems to be preferred by individuals as handful of people supports this opinion on the other hand some believe that every language play its own benefit to make connection.

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Some people think that the goverment is responsible for crime prevention. Others think that it is individuals responsibility to pretocet themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some claim that community members should take the responsibility for their safety, while others insist on the government's intervention to provide them with safety. I tend to approve of the latter approach as it can be more practical.

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In many countries, it is mandatory for school children to wear uniforms. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Wearing uniforms at school is necessary in most of the countries for pupils due to the policy. Although those policies stand against schoolchildren's rights of choice, they might help them to concentrate on school subjects more, and I strongly believe that this advantage is stronger than any potential disadvantages.

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Despite better access to education, many adults today still cannot read or write. In what ways are they disadvantaged? What can governments do to help them?

Although people have the enhanced educational opportunities, a lot of old community members are still not literate in the modern era. Consequently, many adults experience a number of drawbacks of not having skills such as reading and writing, nevertheless, I believe that states can easily assist seniors by creating some helping groups and so on.

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Some people think that secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss btoh views and give your own opinion.

Students in school have various fields to study about such as Mathematics and Sciences. People argue whether secondary school students need to have International News as one of their subjects. In my opinion, I wonder that students will gain more information about their Earth when having this subject in their schedule. This essay will shed the light on different point of views regarding this subject.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Although the large amount of students live in their hometown while studying at university, the majority of students tend to move on to another city and begin a new life. I completely agree with the idea that living far from home could be more benificial than failing.

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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people think that university education should be free, while others suggest the opposite. However, I strongly believe that free education helps us to create an equitable society. This essay will discuss the reason why college education should be free for all students.

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Many manufactured food and products contain high level of sugar, which causes several health problems. Sugary product should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is the fact that numerous diet-related health issues root from consumption of large amount of sugar. In order to deter from purchasing sugary products, their price need to be increased. I totally disagree with this view. There are many individuals who can control eating sugar and making things pricey has never been a solution.

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Artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom . Do you agree with this statement? What is an alternative to face-to-face teaching?

School may soon upgrade their system by making artificial intelligence teachers.however, i do not think this is possible as AI is not advanced enough to reach a teacher level. Online lectures are life saver for students because they can be accessed anytime .Thus , it is quite effective.

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In many parts of the world, people are choosing to have fewer children.

In many parts of the world families gradually experienced fewer children than previous years. There are various reasons that impact to this trend tremendously and this essay will discuss the reasons of this tendency and its impacts on society.

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Giving detailed description of crimes in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some people therefore suggest that the gov ernment should impose restrictions on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The subject of the essay is, giving a detailed description of crimes in media that have bad consequences. Therefore, I give my opinions on the should government impose restrictions on them.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people opine an encourgement in physical activities is the most considerable way to improve health of people these days. Conversely, others deny this and say it has the least affect and other factors can help more. This essay will discuss both point of views and argue in favour of the latter.

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Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss bot the views and give your opinion including relevant examples.

Money people battling whether it is good to give cash money as a gift for a teenager or not. While giving money as a gift will encourage them to learn how to manage their financial and give them freedom of choose what to do with the money, others argue that teeanagers will view this as a non-valuable gift and too material-related. This essay will discuss both arguments and state my own opinion and examples.

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Some people think government should ban dangerous sports; others, however, believe that people should the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,a part of people argue that government should prevent people to do dangerous sport, another part of them believe every one is free to do his chosen sport.As for me,people should not be limited to whatever sports they prefer,even the government needs to provide some support to them.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio- diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

It is clear that throughout the history of humankind mankind has influenced changes in the nature drastically. It includes processes such as die out of various animals, insects and plants.

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Modern technology,such as personal computers and the internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home atleast part of the time instead of going to an office everyday. What are some advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Modern technology, for example, personal computers and the internet, have made it easier for many people to work from home at least sometimes instead of going to an office every day. There are advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

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Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, numerous teenagers can learn productively by using electronic devices, so their guardians should allow them to access the TV at home and school while others think that it is not a crucial learning method. In my opinion, I believe that learning from different sources such as books and newspapers is more important than devices.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Reports stated that the health levels of many citizens have deteriorated. The optimum way to address this problem is by adding the number of sports facilities, however, others argue that this solution will only make a slight impact to public health therefore, another measure must be taken. This essay will discuss both arguments and state my opinion.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful in persuading us to buy things. Other people believe that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are opposing views regarding the outreach and determining influence of modern advertising methods. Many believe that they are a huge success is shaping our purchasing behaviour, while others underestimate their impact as marginal. I am of the opinion that advertising is still of significant effect to the extent that even lack of attention does not prevent its penetration into our unconscious mind.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some regions, international sport is achieved by providing top athletes with high-level training centers, instead of equipping public spaces with an affordable inventory. I, personally, think that this practice has a negative impact in terms of restriction potential athletes, who are not wealthy enough for expensive trainings. For others, it is believed that such policy could be a positive development.

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