IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 258

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps us understand the present.

History is not a useful subject in people's daily lives, which means getting extra time. Although historical information gives humanity an enormous amount of database for different fields of life.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In order to achieve a peaceful and safe community children must be taught from a young age how to be good members of society. Some people believe that parents should be responsible of such education because teaching manners should be done throughout childhood and adolescent years. Others argue that societal education should be taught at school because not all parents are eligible to teach their children .I believe that parents should be held responsible for such matters since they are considered a part of bringing up children.

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Many small ,local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area.How does this effect local communities?How could this situation be improved?

With the introduction of sophisticated superstores the small shops that used to run locally are being shutdown.This essay will discuss how this phenomenon leads to poverty and migration of locals and then argue how government funding and sanctioning multiple supermarkets can be the most viable solutions.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree ot disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Best method to solve increasing traffic and pollution problems is by increasing the price of petrol. I completely disagree with this statement because higher petrol prices wont effect for those who are capable of affording their own vehicle and many people already use vehicles which run by electricity. However, this can be affectively controlled by improving the quality of public transport system and people should be encouraged to use non-enegry consuming transport methods for shorter distance travels.

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over population in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem.what are the causes of this?How can this problem be solved?

Increasing population in various major cities across the globe is posing serious concerns.This essay will discuss how provision of health facilities and advanced eduaction system draws masses toward city areas and then argue how estabilishing of well equipped hospitals and uniform education system across the country can be the most viable solutions.

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Many people believe that a country’s wealth is dependant on the health of its citizens. Other people argue that education is a better indicator of a nation’s wealth and well-being. What is your opinion? What are some other factors that contribute to the growth and prosperity of a country?

There are numerous gauges to the country's overall wealth. Some might argue that the citizen's health should be the primary indicator of a country's well-being, while others believe that education is a better measure. Personally, I believe that education is the rightful measure to assess the country's financial state, however, other factors like infrostructure should not be overlooked.

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As science and technology contribute most to the development of society, science students should get more financial support from government than students in other fields (eg. business, language, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been a commonly discussed topic that science and technology has become a most important aspect for the growth of the society the students who study science subjets should get more financial support from governmant than management and art students. I partially agree with the said statement.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction, do you agree or disagree?

One of the most burning issues of today’s world is whether wages are more necessary than employment happiness. This essay disagrees with the given phenomenon. Job satisfaction is key factor of every work. And it contributes to the amount of work is done.

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Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children while others claim it has positive effect for children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Television impacts children due to channels such as history channels or movie channels, However, it depends on whether parent permits kids to watch TV also it is effective for children or not Moreover Proponents of television viewing argue that it can have several positive effects, while critics believe it can be detrimental to children's health and development.

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Health services are the basic necessity for a person. Private companies have make the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages？

Health services have been significantly developed in comparison with the ancient time. In this regard, recently, there are various types of clinics in all over the world, such as private hospices of which privatizing is a major issue which has opponents and advocates. This essay will express the benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon.

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Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on it? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Explain your choice by using specific reasons and details.

Starting using computer from young age can benefit children in many ways. This can have many advantages as well as, many disadvantages.I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages and then i will share why advantages are more than disadvantages.

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First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

There are plenty factors based on job selection ranging on excellent profile to sheer luck . It can be argued that the interwiev forms a crucial part of the hiring process , but I dont thinks so thats the important . I contend that the individuals achievements and professional experience of the candidate are more important in this process.

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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that modern technology development play a critical role in the ratio of crimes. While it is a commonly held belief that technology improvement declined crime, there is also an argument that opposes it because they considering technology shore up the level of crimes. This essay will analyze this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the reasons that cause stress, and effects?

It is an irrefutable fact that, in the contemporary world, stress become the main barrier in the growth of different countries. Such a trend comes with alot of problems, which demand immediate consideration. This essay will analyze the reasons like the competition level and the high inflation and the impact of these problems on the human being such as mental health issue in the upcoming paragraphs along with examples.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

These days many careers such as healthcare provider and tutor are migrating to work in the developed world for a better future. Although there are several problems related to this matter, solutions are on hand to address them.

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Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's world, increasing number of people work away from their families and friends. I believe that this situation has benefits and handicaps because their relationships with their relatives and friends might affect on a negative way. By contrast, they might earn more than their old occupation.

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In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule?

Besides my backgrounds and experiences in all scenarios, namely academic, work, and research, not only my critical thinking and problem-solving skills have developed faster but also the relationship between the technological field and medicine has awakened my interest. Therefore, I am undertaking a virtual Postgraduate Program in Artificial Intelligence at The University of Texas at Austin, which has given me tools aimed at Python Programming Code, Machine Learning, and Neural Networks in addition to Linear Algebra, Statistics, and Data Analytics.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is widely acknowledged that modern technology has brought people together, but there are also others disagreeing with this idea. As far as I'm concerned, I partly agree with this idea.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music in an excellent universal instrument through which people can convene in one place and share their ideas, emotions and stories. Owing to the issue of popular gatherings, many believe that music serves this purpose the best and I totally endorse this viewpoint due to music’s universal reach and fun nature.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, societies favor academic success better than non-academic. As for that reason, people demand that non-academic related subjects as for physical education, art, and cookery to be erased from school's curriculum. This essay will discuss both views.

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