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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is universally accepted that the world population is experiencing an increase trend, which can be noticed clearer in the developing countries. Considering this trend, a heated debate has occurred around the topic of whether the booming population, resulting in younger inhabitants, will be more advantageous or not. In my opinion, the benefits offerred by the rejuvenation of workers certainly are more considerable compared to the losses. This essay will demonstrate this perspective and give a conclusion.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an satisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinions

It has been majorly believed that unexpected things should be normalized. Nevertheless, the others against this idea are reasonably pointing out the fact that as long as there are attempts of overcoming the harsh conditions, fruitful outcomes are likely to follow. Sharing similar opinions, I also support the latter point.

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Some people believe that students work better if the teacher is strict; others think it is better for students, if the teacher has a friendly approach. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There is no doubt that these days teachers play a significant in education tutors make their students feel comfortable and confident or uncomfortable and inconvenient when they teach. There are some views about this essay some people think that students feel free and confident when the teachers are friendly and supportive while others believe that when the teacher is tough and uncomfortable they feel inconvenient. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my conclusions.

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It is important for people to take risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that risk-taking have a crucial effect on our career and personal life choices. Although, there are some defects on our health, I strongly believe that risk-taking have far more pluses on our growth.

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Some people have been in prison become good citizens later. Some say that these are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of commiting a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is true that after being released from prison, some prisoners show rehabilitation, which results in the belief that they are ideal candidates to talk about danger of law violation. From my perspective, with proper caution and assessment from the government, they should be encouraged to take the responsibility.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

In today’s world, more and more people who graduate with high qualifications now become unemployed. In my opinion, the reasons for this situation are the lack of work-related skills and the high expectation in these adults and the solution is to add more soft skill courses into universities’ curriculum.

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In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their aging members. Do you agree?

It is improper to let aged people stay in retirement homes instead of their families in many societies. I agree with this statement. However, it still depends on the health condition of the retired people.

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Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

In today's world, students have often been the centre of attention,many people argue, indicating that daily routine plays a crucial role for them others add that schoolboys might get distracted during the lesson which definitely affects their concentration.This essay will try to explore possible causes and find ways how to tackle the issue.

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Many governments spend a lot of money on art. Some people think this investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The problem of spending a lot of money on art and other people say spending money on health and education could be precious which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that this is beneficial whereas others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over its potential impact in recent years. This essay will further elaborate on both positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical solution.

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The unlimited use of cars may cause problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

In a modern era, due to technology advancements, it is undeniable that there are many modes of transport that are using by individuals, especially cars. However, the unlimited usage of cars may cause some adverse impacts to society. Because of these circumstances, the government and NGO should be worked together to address it. This essay will emphasize my thoughts in subsequent paragraphs.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship that people make? Has this been a positive or negative developments?

Technology has modified the way of communication among people these days. These changes can be effective or ineffective based on our point of view. I believe that Technology could have positive effects on our lives.

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The number of people who are fat and overweight are much higher than previous generations. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve those problems?

Nowadays the figure for people who are obese is much larger than the generations before has gained in popularity. This essay will attempt to analyze some causes and propose some solutions to this issue.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Millions of individuals around the globe are facing health problems due to rise in their body weight. Physical classes can educate people on how to make their body fit and slim. This leads to reduce most of the illnesses. Certain humans believe that this problem can be solved by introducing more physical education lessons in school. I think it is a good idea to do so which is inexpensive and effective.

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Some people think that those working in creative arts should be financially supported by governments. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is a highly debatable issue whether the state should provide the monetary assistance to people indulged in arts or not. However, I, believe that government should not support the people by giving money to them as it increases the burden of government as well as people can loose the urge to earn the money . The same would be discussed with relevant examples in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Living in a world where changes are constantly happening, supported by the advanced innovation nowadays, leads to most people looking forward to a new experience and adjustment. While some might argue that they are more comfortable living the same way as they did before and keeping their usual traits.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many food companies produce unhealthy products with high level of harmful content which leads to many disorders. Some individuals strongly support the nation that the cost of these materials to be increased remarkably eventually limiting their use. Admittedly, I completely agree that the increasing price of these kinds of products will lead to less consumption of them.

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Some people think that patents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that children have to learn how to be a good members of society in school, while others think that parents should take this responsibility. I would argue that the family have a key role in this situation, and parents are more important in shaping children personality.

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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

Many people believe that Luck is the most crucial factor, which leads to an individual’s success. But I do not agree with this notion, because hard work plays an extremely important role in achieves the goals.

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parents should spend more time helping their children with homework. do you agree or disagree? give reasons for your answer

When it comes to homework, parents often tend to support children with its completion by utilizing their knowledge. However, this approach is believed to be impacting children in both positive and negative way. While I believe that parents’ support for children in the completion of their homework helps them academically as well as with their child-parent bonding, it happens to make children rely on parents forever.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society?

The rate of crime recommitment in people who end their emprisonment period is remarkably high. This can be due to the negative view that society holds towards past prisoners and the fact that it is challenging to get a reputable job once someone has a criminal record. The aftermath of this issue is that instead of one-time offenders, the sociaty will have criminals who believe illegal activities are their only choice which makes it easier for them to commit them.

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