IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 469

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

The majority of children has failed to read books in recent times for entertainment. In this essay, I will explore the causes for these problems, and I will suggest a way that children can read more.

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Some people argue that art, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and and the government should spend this money on pubic service To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A considerable amount of people have opinion that government should allocate money on public services rather than on paintings, arts amd music, which is waste of money. I agree with this statement because there are many areas, especially villages where these services are not available such as roads, transportaion system, besides, institues for education and hospitals.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the fact that there is a deterioration in the number of animals and plants in various nations. To some extent, I would contend that there are abundant justifications, followed by some equivalent effective solutions to this severe problem.

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Some people think that online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Is Chris both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,there is an intensive debate about what is the effective way to learn our kids . While lots of individuals believe that internet reading items must be used for a toddler to show him how to read , others thought that just handbook has to be took. I completely agree with the initial attendance.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Global hunger is worsening at an unprecedented rate. Even though there are some developments to the production and distribution of foods, it seems that they are not enough to reduce the rate of people who suffer from hunger. This essay will discuss the causes of global hunger and what can be done to help.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The data shows a comparison between a university’s sport centre current setup and how it will be redesigned in the future. Overall, the sports centre will have a larger size and various additional features and facilities will be added to it.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of outweigh the disadvantages?

Countries with higher portion of elderly people have their own perks. The further explanation about this statement will be presented in this essay.

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Some people believe that having sports in schools is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that sports in school are a vital part of education. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people believe that including sport in school programs is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is a crucial part of education.

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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

In today's world, there is an urgent need to address the problem of environmental pollution. Some believe that it is better to deal with these issues on a world scale, while others consider that ecological problems can be solved at the national level. And my opinion leans more toward the global level of solving this problem.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and your own opinion.

Some people believe that nowadays people are more count on each other while some others think that people become autonomous. Although it can be argued that more people who depend on but I think in social life, more and more young generation are self-reliant.

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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?

Whether local business is now competitive with large supermarkets and online shopping is quite concerning. This problem relates to the development of technology and human needs but can be solved by applying advertisements around the area.

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The friends that children have are a very important part of their lives. What kinds of influence may children's friends have on them? What can parents do to ensure that their children's friends are a good influence on them?

It is generally agreed that peer’s pressure is inevitable, since kids are raised up in the society and contact other children daily. The impact friends have on the young people can be both beneficial and disastrous, depending on numerous circumstances. However, I firmly believe that parents may set certain conditions to provide positive influence of others on their offspring, such as instilling the right values in them and teaching them to think independently.

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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argue that schools are competitive and it is creating a bad impact on children, whereas others say that the competitive surroundings provide motive for the students to succeed. I believe that the competitive environment are creating more stress and negative impact on childrens. This essay will discuss how this environment is creating stress to the childer and followed by that it will discuss how it encourages children to achieve.

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Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While many believe that children should study all subjects at school, others argue that they should only study subjects they perform well or interested. Both point of view and reason why I agree with the former statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this statement.

In this modern era, every mankind is fulled with numerous options. This fact is inevitable. I Partially agree with this statement and uphold my thoughts with appropriate examples in upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV shows, advertisements, fashion and follow the same brands. To what extent the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV shows, advertisements, fashion and follow the same brands.

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in many countues , a small numbe of people earn extremly high salaries . Some people belive that this is good for the country , but others think that goverment should not allo salaries above a certain level

Only a few per cent of employees' salaries are higher in many states. Although, it will be motivation for low statistic residents, they would be frustrated with some financial dependence .

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Some people argue that art, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and and the government should spend this money on pubic service To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Although, the state ought to use the capital on creating employments along the nations, however, music bring excitement as well as painting provides nice image of the city which persuade tourists to visit the place.Therefore, I personally disagree that the adminstration must spend cash on construction of roads and railway lines or paying public workers.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Children are a great imitator. They tend to follow peoples behaviors without knowing whether it is good or bad action. It is becoming crucial for their surrounding such as parents or teacher to teach youngster to differentiate what is right or wrong from an early age. I would argue that disciplining the youth misbehaviors by giving them punishment is necessary. However, it is important to note that parents and teachers should sanction children bad action without traumatizing them and is harmless.

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The presence of technology in the classroom has become more and more apparent and offers students tremendous resources with which to supplement their education. Given time, technology will completely replace the traditional teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

In general by passing time students get involved deeply with devices, apps and artificial intelligence in school,hence, some people blive that technology is going to delete the old school ways of teaching and even the teachers. Although this imagine is unbelievable, I certainly agree with it.

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