IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 469

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A number of people believe that a successful person must be hardworking and single-minded, while others possessions and good appearance are more essential. However, the writers supports the former statement as these virtues are needed in such a competitive world though some emphasis the importance of beauty and power in showbiz world.

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ome people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination,while others think that therefore more important factors such as money and appearance.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Working hard and being determinated are believe to be a key for a bright future.However, insist that money and looks play a greater role in helping a person succeed. In my opinion, both views have their merits. While good looks or money alone cannot help a person succeed, in many fields hard work or determination is not sufficient either.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Studies indicate that socialising online is more preferable for many teenagers rather than meeting in person. This essay will examine the factors behind this case and what measures that could be used to encourage teenagers to spend more time to meet in person.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination. while others think that there are more important fators such as money and appearance. Dicuss both views and give your opinion.

some people harbor a belief that hard work and determination can contribute to success in life. Many people have the reverse viewpoint there are other factors such as money and appearance. In my opinion, I stand with both opinions since the mentioned factor are equally importance to healthy life.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important facts such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals argue that success in life comes from hard work and determination meanwhile money also appearance are more necessary factors. In this essay, the author will illustrate why the hard-working and determination are the keys to successful that are more than another factorfactors. It must be recognized that success should be understood that the main reasons to be successful the determination and hard work. This is because most people will need success in their lives as the keys are two of them. For example, most students succeed in their studies because they have a determined and hard work style. Therefore, it is easy to understand why people must have a determined and strong will in the success path. However, some people say that hard work and determination are not the most important factors because mostly they want successful, they will need a head mark like money and appearance. This belief is based on these modern days by money and look are the most things people ne...

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Some People Think That Success In Life Comes From Hard Work And Determination, While Others Think That There Are More Important Factors Such As Money And Appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a common view that success in life is the result of hard work and determination instead of depending on other elements such as richness or appearance. This writer agrees that everyone needs to try their best to gain high achievement due to long-term efficiency rather than relying on money.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion ?

It is a belief that hard working and determination can contribute to success in the life whilist others hold the reserve view point that there are other factors such as money and appearance.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard-working and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether success stems from industriousness and devotion or other elements including wealth and beauty is a highly subjective discussion point. However, from prior experience, hard work and determination is more worth considering due to motivation and admiration compared with the idea of impression made by external factors.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether people should accept a bad situation or work actively to improve the situation. While acceptance may be easy to maintain peace of mind, I believe that we all should make active effort toward improvement and change.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether success stems from the devotion of time, efforts and energy or it is attributable to financial and outlook factors is a debatable discussion point. The writer of this essay contends that determination and hard work is the ultimate pathway to triumphant due to the low risk nature and increased efficiency, despite some who believes that money and image is more significant as it is the main motivation for workers.

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Can money bring happiness to people? Should people rather focus on moral values instead?

The concept of happiness breaks into countless interpretations, making it impossible to quantify. People generally fall into two groups regarding the relationship between money and happiness, sparking endless debates. In my perspective, money serves as a tool to achieve the peak of happiness. If you aim to maintain good health to cherish moments with your family and experience joy, money will become indispensable for securing that health.

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Human activities have negative effects on the plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this question. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many believe people have created bad impact to many species in plant and animal and it is too late to tackle this problem. On the other hand, others think there are solutions to solve this. This essay will discuss further these two views.

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Many think that secondary and high school students should learn money management as it is an important life skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that starting from the middle school pupils should study fundamental financy. I strongly agree with this statement, hence money management it is important part of adulthood, and understanding of proper use of income would be beneficial for individuals.

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These days, in many counties fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

It is believed that there is a shortage of secondary school teachers in numerous nations as the less number of candidates are interested to become tutors in these schools. A number of factors are responsible for the aforementioned phenomenon. This essay would intend to discuss the same along with effective measures to tackle it in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting and they are best at. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The debate over whether teenagers ought to allocate equal attention to all academic subjects or solely focus on those they find intriguing and excel in is a contentious one. This essay will explore both perspectives, ultimately endorsing the latter viewpoint, which emphasizes specialized focus based on individual interests and strengths.

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The most important aim of sience should be to improve people's live. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Nowadays. with the development of technology, the sience also enhance to serve the society and play a huge role in this system. So, I wholeheartedly concur with this issue.

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Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays due to the development of modern technologies almost everyone can see exhibition online, therefore museums are longer useful for the society. I strongly disagree with this statement, hence new technologies extend access to the knowledge, however does not take the job of museums, hence they can provide totaly different level of emergening in history.

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The news media have become more influential in people’s lives, some people think it’s a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The role of the news media plays a vital role in shaping people's perceptions of the world. It is also undeniably true that the more persuasive the news content, the more easily people can be influenced. However, some people perceive such phenomena as negative developments. I strongly disagree with this view because the influence of the news not only raises one's awareness but also increases one's critical thinking skills.

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Some people think computers and the Internet are more important in child’s education. Others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In developing epochs, modern technologies are becoming popular. Some humans believe that social media and computers are crucial in children's studies. However, others view pupils are able to study positive impact in schools and with teachers. This essay discusses how both are essential for effective learning.

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With the advancement in healthcare and technology, people now have a longer lifespan. Some argue that the retirement age which is normally 60 to 65 years of age should be adjusted to 70 years or even higher. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? Give reason and example to state your stance

It is undoubtedly true that the emergence of technology has a significant bearing on almost every aspect of people's lives, including health. With this in mind, while the majority of seniors usually retire at the age of 60 to 65 years old, some people contend that there should be an adjustment to the retirement age requirement of up to 70 years. Although health constraints are no longer a concern due to technological advancement, I strongly disagree with this view because it could be seen as human exploitation and there will be massive shifts in the workforce regulations.

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