IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 475

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Students should be allowed to choose academic courses or practical courses, e.g carpenters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is considered by some that playing video games is harmless, or even benefital for education, while others rebut that this hobby impacts players negatively. This essay will delve into both sides of statement before rendering my support for the latter one.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweight the disadvantages?

Museum is a place where material of cultural and historical value is exibited. Some individuals are of the opinion that such places should have free entry whereas, others believe that entry to such places should be charged. I personally feel that, it should be paid.

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others believe that people should be free to do any sports or activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent days, sports with high risk to get injured are bumped due the increasing popularity among the young athletes and casual people, to experiment a strong feeling of adrenaline. Because of that are under the radar to be prohibited for who believes are putting in extremely danger and causing deaths with the opposite view of those who consider that any sportful person is responsible of his own decision and casualties. I am inclined to think that depends on how and where these sports and activities are practiced and displayed and most importantly the regulations following them.

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People’s lifestyles are becoming unhealthier in many countries. What can governments do to reverse this, and which of those actions is most likely to be successfully carried out by those governments?

In recent years, the throwaway lifestyle has become one of the most serious health problems among people of all ages. This is caused by several reasons including processed food consumption and lack of physical activities. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why people in many countries live in unhealthy ways and suggest some solutions for the government in order to solve this situation.

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Some believe that violent computer games are just a for of entertainment while others think that they lead directly to violent behaviour. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

Some argue that the purpose of video games that contains violence is to entertain, while others argue that it can lead to aggressive behavior. Although there is a chance for children to become aggressive if they play violent video games without guidance from parents, I believe that it helps more in relieving stress than initiating violent activity.

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Some people think it is more important to spend public money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In our fast-paced society, the allowcation of capital to transport systems has become a debate topic. It is agrues that, using money for public roads and motorways is necessary instead of spending for subways. However, I believe that both roads and public transportation have important roles in society and should be given equal investment.

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The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by providing at least six years of free education for each child, so that all children can read, write and use numbers.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are people who confirm that the most appropriate way of solving the common problem of poverty in countries which are working on their economy is not claiming any fees from people for primary education level, around six years, in order to provide every one of future generation with basic knowledge and skills. While I agree that it is advatageus for every country to have everyone educated at least on average level, I firmaly believe that increase in merely educated people instead of totally uneducated cannot contribute to countries' economy as much as taxing or fair education fees in order to reinvest in country development.

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it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives

Taking risks is vital for individual lives professional or personal. Personally, the benefits of taking a chance outweigh the drawbacks because we can learn and know about the result of the opportunity that we have decided. This essay will discuss this case.

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🔶Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online. 🔸Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's world, post-COVID, most trade activities take place online rather than offline or in the office. There are many benifits of this online work experience as it gives opportunity for family time. However, too much indulgence of personal life in professional grounds can have negative effects as well. I have a strong opinion that online training and trading is way more productive than in-office set-up.

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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, it is quite common to travel around the world for entertainment. However, some would argue that it brings a lot of negatives to the countries popular among travelers. This essay strongly disagrees with that statement because tourism might bring a lot of benefits to the locals: strengthening the local economy and contributing to local infrastructure development are two of many more gains that will be discussed further.

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In the past, people preferred to stay in one place for their entire lives. But nowadays, it's common for people to move multiple times and change homes. What are the reasons behind this change? Do you think it's positive or negative?

Allegedly, migration to another city or country is given a significant attention among people's lives. As a matter of fact, this behaviour was really rare among citizens, but nowadays this attitude compeletly changed. In fact, people migrate to another city due to enhance their careers and academic opportunities, and even for weather conditions.

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Some think that governments should tax unhealthy food to encourage people to eat healthier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern era, many are of the opinion that a gevernment should inpose heavier tax on unhealthy food such as instant food in order to foster people's eating habits to be more healthy. Although there are some people who are in agreement with this viewpoint, I largely believe that there will be an alternative to stay healthy in people's lives by encouraging people to have more regular exercise to be healthy.

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In many developing countries, there is an increasing movement of workers from rural areas into cities. Why do you think this happen? What problems can this cause.

In most of the underdeveloped nations. We see an increasing trend of labor from the countryside to the urban centers. In my view, there are two main causes of it. One of the primary causes is industrial development in main urban centers generating employment opportunities. The other cause is cities have better educational institutes and health care centers.

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Do you think Businesses should hire employees for entire lives .do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that any companies would like loyal employees to work in their company to feel more secure and able to trust their skills to manage the company. In my perspective ,I disagree with the statement above in spite of two factor such as limited acess to new tehnologies and idea for both employee and the company. In the next paragraph , I will discuss the reason of this in detail.

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Promotions to higher level should be from within company and not to a new person from outside. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been asserted by some that the right to receive a promotion should be exclusively reserved for internal employees of the company rather than hiring any candidate from outside. I agree with this suggestion despite the recruitment of outside workers may have its own possible benefits.

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Some parents believe that their children their children should do extra curricular activities after shcool. Others say in this was, children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although some are of the opinion that students ought to participate in extracurricular activity after school hours ,others believe that such activities can lead to additional pressure .In my opinion, I consider that extracurricular activities make students feel stressed.

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A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the current days, more and more investments are done to find fossil fuels, such as petrol. As the sources of oil are becoming each time fewer, some people argue that it would be more logical to apply more money to developing new sources of power, like energy from the sun and from the wind. I totally agree with this statement because the reserves of oil are finite, besides these new technologies tend to be more sustainable and eco-friendly than energy from petrol.

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some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training . others belive they should be free to work in another coutnry if they wish . Discuess boh these views and give your opinion.

It is argued whether professionals should stay in the countries that provided them with training, while others advocate for the freedom of pursuing different career paths, even if it means leaving their home country. In this essay I will aim to discuss both perspectives on this matter, as well as to pose why I think it would be better for graduates to pursue their goals outside their home-countries.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere.

The high authorities spend huge amounts of capital on the arts rather than spending money on rising issues such as poverty, global crises and increasing crime rates. In my opinion, government should give more importance to the current issues and invest capital in developing the nation.

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