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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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People argue that children spend their leisure time differently than it was before, and the main reason fir this is new devises.

People argue that children spend their leisure time differently than it was before, and the main reason fir this is new devises.Meanwhile, this changes may cause a number of problems ,I believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum? To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that sports lessons should not take away precious time from the school for physical exercises, it should be the responsibility of parents to exercise regularly. This essay disagrees with the statement completely due to children's physical and psychological health is related to their studies. This essay will first look at how it will open up interest for sports and important sport is for children's health.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary era, advertisement is an inevitable thing in many businesses and there are a large number of companies that invest a great deal of money on advertisement. While some groups are of the opinion that this is not a positive situation, others opine it offers a great number of advantages. In my opinion, ads play a crucial role in every economy.

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job. They want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion

Gone are the days when women were not given equality, thanks to women and empowerment which has bought gender equality. Few masses argue that providing equivalent opportunities is must.On the other hand individuals believe that many tasks only designed for men which women cannot carry out. However, I stand with the former view and shall discuss its aspects with related examples

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Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?

It is often believed that money is the key reason to stay happy. However, some people think that many can stay comfortably with less money. I agree with the latter statement and will provide some key factors that contribute to it.

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The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, cellphone is a tool widely use in our daily lives. Some regard it has a detrimental impact on social interaction and should be restricted by law, same as smoking. Frankly, I do not agree with this stance, and the following essay will outline the reasons and examples.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce the amount of waste produced by society is to impose strict regulations on industries, while others believe that individuals should take responsibility for their own actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sorting of waste has a lot of attention, nowadays, either from individual or industry counterparts. In this condition, some people assume that the best option to diminish the wastage from society by enforce tight regulations on industries. On the other hand, others think that personnel should hand over how society should behave. I would like to explain regards on those two perspectives and give the following reasons for that.

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Many people say that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects equally. Others, however, believe that students should spend more time on subjects they like, or are good at. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

No one can deny that education serves a great purpose in life.However, an argument is rising among the public on whether students should concentrate on all subjects or only on their favourite topic.In the following paragraph, I will discuss both sides of this issue and provide my own opinion along with a conclusion.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that music is a marvellous tool to connect diverse age groups and cultures togrther. It is seems to me that this is an effective approach and music plays a crucial role in this regard.

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Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Taking a break after finishing high school has become more common among students who want time off before college or work.

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Some businesses observe that new employees who just graduated from a college or university seem to lack the interpersonal skills needed for communication with their colleagues. What could be the reason for this? What solutions can help address this problem?

Some of the companies encounter issues with former students who have taken a degree recently because of the fact that they sort of prone to communicate well with other people as well as lack of interpersonal skills. There are a number of reasons for this problem, including lack of experience, but this issue can be solved by a variety of measurements.

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friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face-to-face.Do you agree or disagree?

It is an irrefutable fact that today's technology gives us the opportunity to connect with all kinds of people, such as new e-friends. Nowadays, some people hold the view that the meaningfulness rate for real-life friends is much higher compared to the companions who are met virtually. Indeed, I approve of the idea stated above, and I will explain my choice with some clear details and examples in below essay.

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Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen? What are the solutions?

In modern times, people attempt to attend school. However, a significant ratio of students tend to have a negative attitude toward education. This essay aims to show the cause of this phenomenon and how it affects the future.

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Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the current era, environmental pollution is one of the greatest problems that the world is facing. It is thought that those issues cannot be solved by individuals or countries, since it is a global trend. From my point of view, I strongly agree with this statement.

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The plans below show the layout of a university 's sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment.

The plans illustrate the current layout of a university sports complex and proposals for its redevelopment. Overall, the university sports centre is expected to become much bigger with new recreational facilities planned such as dance studios, a leisure pool, shops and a sports hall.

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Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in.

With the target of renovating the faces of cities, the government has decided to financially invest in art works. These contributions have made significant improvements to many cities so it can be a worthy place to live. However, whether its necessity is still controversial in different aspects.

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Nowadays, many families rarely have meals together. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is frequently observed that contemporary familial dynamics have led to a diminishing propensity for families to partake in communal meals together. The main cause is the busy schedule people are going through and a heavy workload that restricts them from enjoying their time with family. This essay aims to examine both perspectives and ultimately present a position in support of the latter view.

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nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. Do you agree or disagree?

No matter how the society changes, the reading is still indispensible for people. While some people have habit of reading papers, I totally believe the mode of online reading will be more popular in the future.

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Some people think that printed books are no longer needed in the digital era, because all writing can be stored electronically. Others think printed books will still play an important role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At present, with the development of technology, some people think printed books can be phased out in the digital era. All people need is just electronic storage. However, other people think printed books also plays a significant role. In my opinion, printed books can not be phased out, and it will play an important role in our learning life.

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst the younger generation. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

Second-hand clothing has become popular amongst the young generation. This is because the price of everything has risen. I strongly believe that there is nothing wrong with a trend of buying or wearing used clothing, as it shows that they are being respectful for things or resources available to them.

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