IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 478

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society?

It is widely argued that many offenders would become engaged to re-offend after releasing back to the society. Personally, I believe that holding the prisoners in captivity should not be considered as the rehabilitation process and that’s why, most of them are feasible to recommit crimes as soon as getting back to the society. In the following essay, I will state my reasons and the significant impacts on the society.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that a person’s occupation, heavily hinges on their gender since it places a vital role in their proficiency and capability, because of their biological differences between male and female. Although some believe that everyone is equal and there is no differences between men and women, I uphold the standpoint that some special professions are suitable for a specific gender.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is widely argued that children at an early age ought to learn the distinctions between right and wrong. Punishment, therefore, could be enforced in terms of broadening the children’s horizons with regards to right and wrong. I totally agree with the fact that both parents and teachers ought to consider punishment worthwhile due to its considerable benefits yield in. In this essay, I will defend my perspective and highlight different types of punishment could be enforced to new generations.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion on this?

In different countries around the world, there are two types of schools, one where male and female students are mixed and those which are uni-sex. There are two opposite views regarding the benefits of each of these typed of schools. I personally believe that schools registering both genders are more adantagous.

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Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults who commit crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Deciding to choose among the potential ways of punishing young people who commit crimes continues to be a controversial issue for the societies and the governments. It is argued by some that these people should be treated the same as adults. I personally disagree with this opinion due to the adverse effects of imprisonment on a teenager’s mental health.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

The majority of people are inclined in hiring a personal rather than involving in sports or exercise classes to improve their fitness. This is mainly due to personalized focus and quick results. However, there are various detrimental consequences due to this trend.

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some people view sports as an important feature of our society while others feel it is nothing more than a leisure activety.

It is argued that some humans look to sports as an essential feature of our community.While others believe it is not that important and it is just leisure activity .I believe that despite gym members wanting to show as luxurious people , it is help women and men in perservise way it is keep our bodies more flexible and healther also, it is improves and develop mental health.

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Science could help people live up to 100 or 200 years. Would it be a good or bad development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the state-of-the-art knowledge, the possibility of people to prolong their life is higher. However, that notion might be controversial, surrounded by dispute among humans. This essay will discuss both point of views, yet I am inclined to disagree with the previous idea.

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Some people tend to take temporary jobs (they only work for few month of year), for they have time to do other things.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Few people want to do short time service and rest of the time do another work. I strongly agree that part time jobs are beneficial for individuals because of gathering experience.

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Some people tend to take temporary jobs (they only work for few month of year),for they have time to do other things.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Temporary jobs are more preferable by some individuals as it provides them enough time to do other activities. Although they have both advantages and disadvantages, I personally support that its advantages definitely outweigh the cons.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem in our time is the loss of particular species of animals and plants.Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often considered that a few individuals reckon that the loss of particular species of animals and plants are the main environmental problems. Whereas, many believe that there are some more important environmental issues. In my, an inclined, there are more important environmental problems. Thus, this essay will elaborate on both notions which further leads to a logical conlclusion.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therfore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent fo you agree or disagree

There is a controlersial argument whether certain careers are more suitable for either men or women. The autor contends that men and women are equal in terms of potential and qualities, thereby, have the same opportunities in their chosen field.

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Some people believe nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree to this statement?

Today, many think that we have too many options to decide. I totally agree with this statement because we now have endless amount of liberal entities that serve us about anything we need and do not actually need, and the internet constantly informs us about them.

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When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the concept of a building is arduous and has several design stages. Some people believe that the outward appearance takes the first place and others have an opinion that the exploitation of it is more important. This essay will discuss the reasons why I moderately agree that more attention should be paid to the intended usage of building rather on its image.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is taking risks in professional and personal lives. It is undeniable that risking has become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find it crusial, while others consider everything associated with risking very dangerous to their peace. Surely, there are both pros and cons to risking, but I believe advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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some people believe that trips to place such as musuems and art gallaries should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. Others says that students should complete all their learning within the classroom. Discuss both views and give your OWN OPINION.

Currently, schools provide their pupils with live experiences outside the class to improve their knowledge. Most people stated that visits to locations like museums and art galleries should be mandatory and incorporated into their academy programmes. Whilst another group illustrates that pupils should be confined in the classroom. This essay will discuss both views and I firmly believe that people have a better chance of solving world problems when they are exposed to both the inside and outside.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent time, it is believed by many thoughts that each sex has various qualities and this leads to some fixed jobs which are only suitable for either men or women. This writer totally agrees with this statement and will outline the most persuasive reasons why.

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some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agreee or disagree?

There is a controversy about some certain jobs are suitable for one gender than the other due to different qualities are possesed by men and women. The writer disagrees with the mentioned opion and will explain in details in this essay.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities Therefore some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sexual distinction has been one of the most serious problems on around the world during many decades. Although it is reduced dramatically in recent modern society, this still occurs in some certain aspects such as occupation. This writer strongly disagrees with this statement and believe that gender equality should be prioritized.

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Many claims that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today it is common belif that fas food industry influences on environment,eating style and society in detrimental way.I agree with this statement to a maximum extent and my essay will elabarote on this in the following paragraphs.

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