IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 470

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that people should be required to retire from their careers at a certain age. Others believe that people should be allowed to work as long as they like. Discuss both these views, and give your opinion.

In the modern era, there is a heated discussion about the retirement age. It is believed by some people that retirement age should be optional for every person while others disagree and think there should be a certain age for all individuals. Actually, I endorse the latter standpoint because of rejuvenating work force and physical jobs that can be done just by youth and I'm going to expalin more about in the rest of this essay.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

In contemporary society, where a significant portion of adulthood is devoted to work, the role of job satisfaction in shaping individual well-being is paramount. This essay examines the factors influencing job satisfaction and evaluates the realism of expecting such contentment universally among workers.

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Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Which education system do you think is better? Why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most individuals claim that boys and girls should be educated separately whereas others feel that it would be effective and worthwhile if they could attend the same schools. My point of view is that there are pros and cons to both these statements.

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With more and more people communicating via computers and mobile telephones. There is a real danger that we are losing ability to communicate with others face-to-face. To what extent you agree or disagree?

The phenomenon where growing number of people communicating through computers and mobile phones is jeopardising their ability to directly interact with others.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The heated debate over that females should focus less on career development has become increasingly controversial. Personally, I concur with this statament to a limited extent. This essay argues against the deprival career development of women, as in the aspect of work-life balance and parental responsibility.

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Some people think that the best way to broaden young people's understanding of the world is to encourage them to travel to other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some people argue that encouraging young adults to visit foreign countries is the most effective method to expand young adult's perspective. While travelling overseas can be beneficial for young people, it is not sufficient and not always accessible for them. I agree that travelling can be one of the best methods to expand global views. However, it should be complemented by other methods, such as by volunteering in refugee centres and getting exposure to global issues trough media sources.

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Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sports activities are the current trend among the youngsters; however, it contends a wide range of opinions. Some advocate that, sports have crucial role in society, while debaters argue that it is just a pass-time activity. This essay will discuss both the view points, and it will argue in the favour of previous statement.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although some suppose that people should tolerate unwelcommed events such as job dissatisfaction and money deficite, there is an idea, and it is also in my favour, that individuals should not accept their problems and try to find a solution. In the following essay, I will discuss both sides,and I will also express my opinion.

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Some people believe that when people become old and need help financially, physically and mentally, young members of the family should be responsible to take care of them. Do you agree of disagree with the statement?

Some people think that when people reach the age includes old person and struggle financially, physically or mentally, are in desperate need of care by a junior member of their family. Older people in the stage of poor health and have a lower budget need to be looked after by the latest family members.

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American film actor John Wayne said: "Tomorrow is the most important thing in life." How is it important for individuals and countries to think about the future rather than the present? What’s your opinion?

It is being comprehensively accepted by individuals in this world , that future and the days to come are the most significant asset of human being in the life as an American movie artist John Wayne noted it. This essay will discuss why highly considering the future can hinder success and leads to non achievement.

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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a huge number of authorities have an idea of demolishing old buildings. Most of them support this with the thought of building new houses instead. I partly disagree with this statement.

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The use of cellphones has increased in this twenty-first century. Additionally, Cellphones can now be used for many purposes besides of making calls only. What are the advantages and disadvantages

Portable tiny computers which are so called “mobile phone” are the means of variety of tasks to be done nowadays. Taking into account that these small devices carry the significant burden of human being these days by multi purposes utilization rather than calling only, their usages in current century has been mounted so far. In this essay I will discuss why applying it has tremendous effects on individuals beside some minor drawbacks.

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Social media is gradually replacing in-person face to face contact with many people worldwide. Do the benefits of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

It is widely accepted by people that technology based tools are almost inseparable part of human beings life. In this regard software which is capable of sharing data plays an important role and is like an obstacle visiting the people in person. In this essay i will discuss why using social media are more beneficial despite having some drawbacks.

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Some people think parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Educating children to become good members of society is always a controversial topic. Some people believe that teaching at home brings good value to child development, while others think that educational establishments are the best place to raise student attitudes in today's environment. Based on my point of view, I wholeheartedly concur that both play a significant role and contribute equally to teaching good manners to children.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

People throughout the world are dramatically willing to own a private car in recent decades which caused many mega cities experience heavy traffic daily. I believe this issue which is unwelcomed is happening so, steps should be taken by governments to control before it becomes chaos.

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Another negative impact is a trend that can create a negative work environment. For example, although younger employees have an advantage over older workers in terms of adapting to new technologies, older people usually

Another negative impact is a trend that can create a negative work environment. For example, although younger employees have an advantage over older workers in terms of adapting to new technologies, older people usually hold higher positions and are paid higher salaries. As a result, young employees may feel depressed and be ignored, while older employees will be under greater pressure because they fear losing their jobs.

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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important.Discuss both views and giv your opinion.

There is an opposition point in some cultures that youth and old age which is more vital for the community. I totally agree with the view that the youth play a crucial role in our world and this author discusses both views given.

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n some cultures the old age is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether some population believe that the elderly are valuable, whereas others think that young people are more vital is a highly discussion point. This writer believes that the benefit of acquiring knowledge to protect their culture from old age, drawback new thinking of youngsters.

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n this modern world, there is a strong competition between young and old people for the same job. I will discuss the pessimistic sides of this trend and suggest some feasible solutions. First of all, this trend will reduce young people’s employment opportunities and give rise to unemployment.

In this modern world, there is a strong competition between young and old people for the same job. I will discuss the pessimistic sides of this trend and suggest some feasible solutions.

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Schools should teach students how to become successful in their work instead of focusing on academic success. Do you agree or disagree.

Allegedly, success in work is given significant attention in the society. Individuals believe the outcome of co-workers in their works is more important than the academic success. I agree that principals and instructors should teach pupils how to become successful in their occupation, but I disagree that this idea is more important than academic success.

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