IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 542

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Opinion School Children should choose the subjects they study from a young age and stop doing subjects they find uninteresting." How much do you agree with this opinion and why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, many believe that children should select subjects they study from a young age, and cease to learn subjects they consider uninterisiting. This essay entirely agrees with this statement, because of the intention that drives them to learn what they want, and a deep dedication of time which is needed to master a certain skill.

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Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What are the reasons for this and how can the problem be tackled?

Although the health sectors are improving, the physical health of many people especially in developing nations is still declining. This essay will discuss how sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits can affect health of individuals and how can exercise help solve this.

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Buying things in internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more popular. Do advantage of this outweigh disadvantage.

Technology plays a crucial role in human lives in modern era. As a result, these days people tend to purchase things from online shopping and it is quite popular across the globe. This trend has more benefits than drawbacks and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents and teachers; Some others believe that less control will help children deal with their adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether childern must adhere to their supervisers' obligations or not is an issue of public debate and concern. Although parents and teachers aim for planning the best life for their loving ones, it is of the most importance to consider their freedom to not invaided. In the following essay, I will argue why youngesters should be free to decide for themselve, despite the unevideble role of nuclear family and authorities.

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Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification.

What students should study in university that has been a long debate among people. Many people believe that students should devote themselves on gathering knowledge apart from major subject, while others believe that student should concentrate on major subjects to become qualified. In my opinion, i mostly support that it is important to study as much as possible by keeping perfect major subject knowledge.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is true that in our contemporary era, celebrities receive too much attention from media. For this reason, some people argue that this phenomena has detrimental impact on children , while others believe that It can be beneficial in many cases . In this essay , I will explicate both stances before presenting my consensus on the latter view.

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Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Something that everyone will agree about that we need to work to earn money and to meet our financial commitments. While some people prefer a casual or part-time job, I believe the full-time job is better than casual.

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Every year more and more students choose to study online rather than attend classes on campus. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Higher university students are now opting to recieve education through virtual lessons rather than take said lessons on traditional classrooms. This could be caused by the accesibility of virtual classes, as well as the popular use of digital platforms. Consequently, the solutions to this issues includes making attendance to the campus obligatory, as well as to adapt classrooms to a much modern setting.

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Some people believe that it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider the countryside to be more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that raising their offspring in the urban area is more advantageous, while some argue that rural area has more benefits. While the countryside are more environmental friendly, the access to better education in the metropolis makes it a preferable place for children to live.

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Nowadays, there is a rapid increase of rubbish amounts all around the world. What are the main causes for it? What can be a solution, in your opinion?

Today, the amount of garbage on Earth is surging dramatically day by day. Our addiction of buying goods which we do not actually need and using too much synthetic materials every day cause this issue, and I believe this problem will be much harmful if we can shop at normal levels.

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Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat. Do you Agree or disagree?

Some people deem that parents should be liable for making their children obese. This essay agrees with this statement because healthy nutritional habits are responsibility of tutors and health problems associated to malnourishment on infants make even more kids become ill adults. However, even though these mentioned aspects, there are some moot points which we will discuss in the following lines.

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Teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage students . Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Educationists think that sending teenage students abroad via international exchange programs would benefit them a lot. Certainly there are both pros and cons of this so let me try to write my thoughts about it.

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Some believe that sport competitions are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore, youth should be banned from participating in sport competitions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Allegedly, sport competitions and their effects in youths' lives are given significant attention. Many individuals believe that youths should be banned from participating in sport competitions, so as a consequence they give additional emotional stress. I agree youths should be aware about their mental well-being, and some sport races may disrupt their mental health, but engage in competitions can edeavour them to be more contious about real life issues.

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Some people think it would be better if the whole family (uncles, aunts, and grandparents) were involved in bringing up children rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

some people hold the view that was close relative to participate in raising children, it would be beneficial instead of only mothers and fathers. In my opinion, due to people's differences in terms of giving the amount of love to the child as well as the diversity of behaviour, I tend to disagree with this approach.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own pinion.

Many folks state that main aim of studying a foreign language is only to do trips or occupation in a foreign country. Whereas said that they are not the only purpose why individual have to study about a foreign language. I will explain both opinions regarding this issue.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The advancement in technology is effecting the education sector in numerous ways. Now, lessons and classes are not restricted to traditional ways of using black-board and chalk, but through laptop, tablets, and smart-boards. This evolution has both prons and cons and I feel that disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Most museums require a entrance fee while the rest are free.I believe that this generates income to the survival of these places, and gives a value to the history and generate foreign revenue to a country. However , the unaffordability for the poorer is the major drawback of the above. Yet , I think benifits of taking a fee from entrees outweight the drawbacks of it.

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It Getting promotion is one of the biggest driver for people to apply to themselves and work hard in the modern workplace. Why do you think people are so driven to get promotion? What other factors influence people to work hard?

It is true that promotion plays a crucial role in human lives. Promotion is one of the most required aim for the population through hard work in these modern-era. Salaries and passion are the main reason for people like to get that and there are some other factors also influenced to put hard work which is satisfaction. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Each person’s condition in this world is not the same. Some people are rich while others do not even have a dollar in their wallet. Some people think accepting a bad condition, for example lack of money and unsatisfying job, is better than trying to improve such conditions. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail then provide evidence as to why trying our best to change the situations is better.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is claimed that, punishing is very important for young ones to differentiate good and bad at an early childhood.In my conviction, penalties create strong memories to distinguish correct from wrong .Therefore, the writer wholeheartly agree with this statment but these punishments should be well crafted and it should be non physical in nature.

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