IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 537

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The increase in crime rate in cities is a major concern for governments. Discuss the causes of this increase and suggest ways to reduce crime.

Nowadays, various reasons like financial pressure and some tempting amount of money which can be earned by convicting the crimes can lead to a notable increase in crime rate in cities specially in metropolitan cities. This essay argues some roots including the financial problems, lack of preventive rules and the role of family. Then, some proposed remedies and measures like fund raising for this matter as well as the roles of parents and governemt that could be taken into account in order to alleviate this problem are presented afterward.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Although it is sometimes thought that those who are studying higher-education should only aim for qualification, other people believe that other subjects ought to be tought beside the main lessons. from my point of view, it would be in all our interests if students learn about different fields and subjects throughout their studies. To achieve a clear picture; this matter requires further examination into a wider context.

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Some people prefer to be self-employed, whereas others like working for companies or institutions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Which do you think is a better approach?

Working is a part of the every-day adult life: some work for big companies and institutions, while others have the possibility to be self-employed. Evidently, both types of employment have its benefits and its drawbacks, which I am going to examine in the following paragraphs. From personal experience though, I believe working with others holds more positives.

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Many people use distance-learning programs to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring benefits as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Distance-learning programs is truly a breakthrough for the academic life. Not having to be physically present at one place helps people from different places to learn together. This makes it more accessible and affordable at some cases because there's no commuting or relocating involved. Not only that, distance learning is also flexible. Students can learn at their own pace and schedule. This is helpful because some students progressed slower than the rest. Lastly, students can learn some courses that may not be available in their area.

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in many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or a negative trend?

These days, individuals who live in cities prefer to live alone or build a small family. In my opinion, this trend is more negative than positive as such individuals have to deal with some difficulties in their lives.

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Some people believe that television programmes are of no real value for children How far do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion on this.

A section of the society holds the belief that content telecasted by various channels offer no actual benefits for the younger audience. In my conviction, adult content on TV may have negetive physiological effect on children , whereas, by watching educational programmes, they can gain knowledge. Therefore, I wish to partially agree with the captioned statement.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can acheive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In general, adults encourage children to pursue their dream emphasizing the importance of effort to succeed. However, this encouragement has its both sides, positive or negative. This essay will examine the pros and cons of telling children that trying hard can secure a success and my opinion before a conclusion.

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Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that one of the prominent benefit of being affluent is that one can think of other people's well-being. I, personally agree with the said notion because of mainly two reasons; firstly,they have the ability to perform various charitable works. Secondly, they can create job opportunities

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MANY UNIVERSITY STUDENTS LIVE WITH THEIR FAMILY WHILE OTHERS LIVE AWAY FORM HOME BECAUSE THEIR UNIVERSITY IN A DIFFERENT PLACES. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE OF THE SITUATION.

Large figures of colleges students tend to remain with their parents while studying others had to move out in order to stay closer to their colleges this has cons like personal growth as well as some pons like financial challenges than many would have to face.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risk is an essential part in people’s lives, both personally and professionally. As all the other things in this world, taking risk has its own positive and negative outcomes to it. Nevertheless, I think the positive effects that it brings, such as building resilience and creating more opportunities, will always outweigh the main adverse outcome of having feeling of uncertainty.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that provery has increased around the globe. Developed contries are financially supporting to poor contries, arguably, which is not sufficient to tackle this issue. a faction of people holds the notion that rich nations should extend their support other than finance sector. I strongly agree this view as there are ample resons to sbustantiate it.

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Living in the countryside is better than living in the city. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people are asking themselves if it is better to live in a city or in the countryside. There are many good things about living in the countryside. For example the stillness or living more in nature. The city life is much louder. But also everything you need is nearby, for example groceries shops. I disagree, I am of the opinion that living in the city is better than living in the countryside.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the work. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Compared to the past, language is constantly losing its diversity. Except for common languages such as English, Chinese, or Spanish, unique languages are disappearing. It can be thought that standardization of language provides simpler working condition. However, I strongly disagree that loss of languages is beneficial. First, it will result in cultural disappearance, and people using common languages will be dominant over people who do not use common languages.

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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Since a couple of years ago, many debates around categorizing students based on their academic abilities have been sparked. Some argue smart students and those who have great marks must not educate with others including ordinary ones. However, others including me concur that putting students with different abilities could have numerous benefits.

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Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don't. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

There is an increasing number of talented people and how they give amazing contribution. It is often argued that any sports figure create a good fame for the youngster to develop their future career, whilst the others don’t think so. In my opinion, this is a positive trend which can propose influence to the young age and potentially mitigate negativity among them.

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International travel is becoming cheaper and more and more countries open their doors for more tourists. Do the advantage of the increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is true that people who prefer international travel are increasing because of its low-cost prices and more tourists are choosing to go abroad for a trip. I support the assertion that the advantages of travelling in foreign countries are by far outweigh its disadvantages.

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Many people find it difficult to give speech or presentation in public. Some people suggest that schools should teach children to speak in public. How is it important to speak in public? Do youagree or disagree that school should teach at school.

Public speaking is a skill many may look down in primary education, but suddenly realize is very important for the upcoming future. In my opinion, it is very important that children are taught to speak in public from a young age. I will explain the reasons behind it in this essay.

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The data below shows information about energy production in a country in two separate years 1995: coal (29,8%), gas (29,63%), petro (29,27%), nuclear (6,4%), other (4,9%) 2005: coal (30,93%, gas (30,31%), petro (19,55%), nuclear (10,10%), other (0,10%)

The data below delineates the information regarding energy production in a country in 1995 and 2005. Overall, the majority of energy produced is the same in both years with some distinctions in each year's percentages.

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Life was better when technology was simpler? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advanced technology has taken over people's lives in the recent times. It is argued that life was less complex in the past when there was no technology. I completely disagree with this statement and believe that sophisticated technology has made our life more convenient and less laborious and improved the education system.

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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some may believe that studying past past brings limited benefit towards current life, however, I have a different view towards this idea.

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