IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 688

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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IT IS BETTER FOR STUDENTS TO STUDY FROM HOME RATHER THAN GO TO SCHOOL. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

Some argue that is more good for pupils to learn online than go to study at school. I disagree with the statement and I will write this essay to explain why I disagree with the above statement.

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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Having a private home as a property is so essential for people in many countries. This mindset may be because of three reasens which I will say in this essay. In my point of view this situation is absolutely positive and can be beneficial.

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather then rent it. Do you agree or disagree?

A controversial discussion point is a purchase private accommodation better than renting one. I contend that purchasing home will provide private life and financial independence despite those who believe that living in a rented property is a good choice.

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Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree

Companies used to spend massively advertising on mainstream media such as television, newspaper. From the last decade, the tide has turned that social media is often the main marketing channel. The rise of social media is due to many believe it can influence consumer’s purchasing behaviour more effectively. I strongly agree to this and in this essay how does social media influence what customers buy will be discussed.

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Some people belive that it is good share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others belive that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era, restricting information for the sake of public security and national importance seems irrational to many while others opine that information should be available only when the authority deems them suitable for access both views would be examined in this essay. I personally believe that scientific studies, the academic arena, and bussiness can be greatly benefied if the information is made open to them without restrictrions.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is young people have little leisure time and they are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is young people have little leisure time and they are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. It is undeniable that study has become an essential part of our life. However, these days study becoming difficult from time to time, and because of what people strive for the top and forgetting about their personal lives.

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The current topic of discussion is the fact that people are sleeping less than they used to. What do you think is the reason for this?

What are the implications for individuals and those around them? It's undeniable that we all don't look at the phone at night and stay up late at night. Phones and other technological gadgets have become an essential part of our lives. The purpose of this essay is to examine the factors that cause individuals to stay up late and get little sleep. One of the main reasons is the love we have for our favorite gadgets, such as phones, TVs, and computers. Many people have a habit of looking at their phones or working at the computer at night. Watch your favorite TV shows and programs.

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Topic: Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the troubles to concentrate at school. It is undeniable that difficulties to concentrate has become an essential part of our life. However, these days there are certain steps schools and universities can do to improve students concentration.

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It is undeniable that nowadays second language is play big role and has become a essential part of education system.

It is undeniable that nowadays second language is play big role and has become a essential part of education system. Some experts assume that learning of foreign language at primary school is better for children. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find it hard for students. Surely, there are both pros and cons to it but I believe advantages outhweight disavdantages.

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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued by some people that music plays a fundamental role in connecting communities together regardless of the discrepancies of cultures and ages. In my opinion, the phenomenon is reasonable.

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Many working people get little or no excercise either during tge workinf days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough excerise?

The fact cannot be denied that nowadays so many employees do have not enough time to keep themselves healthy. The main reason for this issue should be their working hours as well as their travelling time for work, which we discuss in the further paragraph.

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Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing in ternational tensions and relasing patriotic s emotions in & safe way.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinions Some Countries Organize popular sports events.Such as football world cup cricket world cupmatch and other international sports, which internatio- -hal sporting Occasions can release intrnational tensions and nationalistic feelings way. I completely agree with topic. I will discuss why agree with this topic.

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Crime rate nowadays is decreasing as to compared to past because of technology advancement. Do yo agree or disagree?

It cannot be denied that criminal activities are a concerning phenomenon in societies around the world. Though we are living in an era of modern technology, the percentage of illegal conduct has not declined if we compare timely. Some commentators do not agree with this perspective but I do.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. Do you agree or disagree?

Previously, in the time of our ancestors leading life was very simple. However, nowadays because of number of facilities for the new generation, it is being witnessed, they have had a lot of choices in their lives such as choosing new ways for income, new fields of study, etc. In this essay, I will explain the reason of agreeing to above mentioned statement.

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some people consider price as the most important thoing to think about when buying products(such as cell phone) or services(medical treatments) do you agree or dissagree?

Price is very important and effective to buy a product such as a mobile phone so, most customers look for the price first. I agree with people who think that the fee is the most important thing when you buy the product. I also believe quality is another important point to consider.

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Every country in the world has its own road rules, but many drivers don’t obey them. What do you think are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Traffic rules are a crucial factor which should be utilised in a proper way to improve roadways and also it can prevent accidents. Numerous countries have their own traffic rules according to their road system. Although, traffic rules are not maintained by many citizens and drivers in the country. This essay will discuss the reason for this situation and what can we do to strike a balance to the problem.

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These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a growing number of tourists traveling to other countries than before. Some people believe it is a positive development while others hold the opposite point of view. I agree with the former, and in the following paragraphs, I am going to explain why the advantages are greater than the disadvantages.

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The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that by making a free education system to citizens in developing countries ,especially ,at a first six years of the education, the poverty in them will reduce. I am completely agreee with this statement. Because reading and writing can open many doors to young generation as well as this notion proved her success in developed nations

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that population is aging at staggering rates around the globe. Although it can cause additional problems to the government, I believe that advantages of such tendency outweights the disadvantages.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?”

It is often held that the expansion of humans’ longevity occurs due to an enhanced healthcare system. From my viewpoint, it is limpid that the downsides of this evolution prevail over the advantages. This essay will discuss both perspectives and argue in favour of the drawbacks.

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