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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Over recent years, there is a growing tendency for high school students take gap year before apply to the university. Some experts think this perfect way to choose right academic and career path for teenager whilst other experts worry students waste time and lose educational orientation during the gap year. In this essay will discuss in details both sides.

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Countries with long average working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As competition between businesses evolve radically, people spending much more time at work become inevitable. While working long time do brings great benefits to economic, but some people believe it also cause socially detrimental ramifications. I agree with the view and think working overload will distance people from family and friends.

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Nowadays, more and more children are being brought up in single parents family. What are the cause of this? What effect can be seen as a result of this?

In recent years, there is increasing number of children who being took care in single parents family. The primary causes of this phenomenon are parent' divorce and parent' deceased. Thus, the possible effects which may happened are lonliness and unoptimal children's development.

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In many countries a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to reduce this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your on knowledge or experience

In several nations, the prevalence of criminal acts involving teenagers has become a pressing concern. This essay aims to explore the underlying causes of this problem and propose effective measures to mitigate it. By analyzing social, economic, and psychological factors, we can develop strategies to reduce teenage criminality.

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Giving detailed information of crime in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, criminal news has been clearly reported to the public on various platforms. It has been suggested by some people that unlimited presenting information about crime should be controlled by the government in order to the prevention of unexpected consequences. In my point of view, I totally agree with this statement because it can be affected directly by victims, while the policemen 's investigation system if there is no broadcast limitation. This essay will describe supportive details of my opinion.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

One of the serious issues facing the majority of large urban areas is overpopulation. The main reason for this is the lack of employment opportunities and lack of facilities in the rural areas, and the viable solution is for the government to incentivise its citizen to stay in those areas.

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Cultural tourism, where people travel in order to visit museums, monuments, and archaeological sites among other things, is a growing industry. Having so many visitors may sometimes benefit a nation’s cultural heritage, but can also cause problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Usually having traveler in a country is for better benefits it bring in forex. Therefore money helps the democracy to upgrade our hospitals, schools, grants for elders, the disadvantaged and many more. The state also affords to maintain the system like those museums, monuments, archaeology sites and growing industries.

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Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?

The pursuit of success is a complex endeavour, influenced by a multitude of factors. While some argue that hard work and dedication are the primary keys to achievement, others contend that additional elements play equally significant roles. This essay will explore both perspectives and present a balanced analysis.

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The academic dishonesty* of students is becoming a serious problem at school In your essay, provide at least two reasons why students cheat at school, and discuss at least two negative effects academic dishonesty may have.

Recently, our generation are did not pay so much attention on the education as did our oler relatives. Furthermore, our lazyness lead us to the searching a ways how to cheat at the test or exams. And as a result, the academic dishonest became a seriour increased problem. There is two reasons why pupils cheat at school and also the negative effect from this.

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Some People believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion.

Today people watch different movies and programs on TV in order to entertain when they are tired of their work. I agree with somes think that cruel movies and games impact young people's behaviors while other people claim that these kinds of films and video games do not effect people's behavior. The essay will be discussed both options and provided relevant examples.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Analyse the two sides of this argument.

n this present world, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise. Even classrooms are among the many places that enjo the usage and benefits of technology. The argument that classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology is an argument that is both agreed and disagreed with by many. The two sides of this argument will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in this essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, some developing countries such as Indonesia and India have more young adults rather than elderly people. In my opinion, although this situation might bring some social problems, the benefits still outweigh the drawbacks.

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The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?

In the present world, development of the technology is increased drastically. Including, the establishment technology in the learning system such as internet. People can browse and communicate with internet. It is agreed that someday, the needs of book will be replaced by browser. Analyzing the efficiency of browser, as well as assist government to keeping the tress instead of logging for makes a paper.

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Some individuals believe that the primary goal of universities should be to provide information and skills for needed for future work. Others however feel that the main objective of universities is to give students access to knowledge for its own values regardless of the information is useful for a job or not. What in your opinions, should be the primary objective of university education?

The Primary Objective of University Education: Balancing Work Skills and Knowledge for its Own Value

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There are increasing number of people who does not know thier neighbours. What cause this situation and how to be solved ?

The number of nations who do not know their bystanders has drastically increased.This is because of rural places migration,busy life and social media. some reasonable solutions could solve this issue.

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Large businesses have big budget for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

In the current fast-paced world, there are a number of platforms available to market the products. Mostly, the top companies have huge budgets for publicity to reach their products. This will kill small business people and dominate the consumer area. This essay will elaborate more risks following.

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Some people think movies should only be for entertainment. Others think that they should also have educational values. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are those who think that the purpose of cinemas is only entertainment , although others consider that it has to include both enjoyment and schooling. In my opinion, Deciding whether or not it is wise to tuition is subjective but for ,many it can be positive.

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By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Killing a defendant as a punishment is still facing plenty of pros and cons. Recently, the number of death penalty considerably decreased. I totally agree that prison is better than murder and I will give an elucidation in this essay.

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Scientists advise people to lead a healthy lifestyle, but most people continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think it is and what can do with it?

The recommendations from many scientists suggest that people should have a healthy lifestyle, but most people prefer with unhealthy activities. In this essay, I will identify that why individuals continue to do like that and how to persuade them to have better activities.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think advantages of charging people for a museum outweigh disadvantages?

Currently, there are a variety of ancient museums throughout the world. Many sites charge a fee to enter, while others are free. This has its advantages and disadvantages.

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