IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 723

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The vital school course is the topic of discussion. Although Some think past is an essential subject in school, others, myself included believe science and technology are more important than history in this modern world.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the development of technology era, many teenagers tend to use most of their time consuming social media, which make them more comfortable to interact with others virtually. This essay will discuss the main reason why teenagers prefer making friends online and how this problem can be tackled.

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Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is ongoing debate about the best way of learning about different cultures. While some people support getting information by online media and television broadcasts, others believe it is better to grab them by personalising travelling to visit the place. I personally agree with the second statement.

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People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?

Most people have problems adjusting to situations in their lives and usually it is hard to cope with new situations in their lives. I think people should adjust to every recent situations in their lives and it is help them to live easily.

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Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of this type of shopping outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it have become an trend of buying a goods from online which have made a life easy as well as fast according, to me it has more advantages then disadvantages. From the viewpoint of a internet the world have become a small market which even supports local shopkeeper.

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Maintaining public libraries are waste of money and resources since internet is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this era of technological advancement, the use of the Internet has been exponentially increasing. There is a claim that online libraries are the potential alternatives of traditional public libraries and keeping those may cause financial burdens as well as other resources. Personally, I partly agree with this statement due to several factors, which will be shed light on in the following parts.

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Many parents are concerned about the violent computer games or movies or leisure activities. How can this impact children ? What can be done to solve this problem?

With the development of technology, a lot of games and films have appeared. Although they are very entertaining, some of them are very violent, and they can harm heavily to children, so I think we have to treat this problem as fast as we can.

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It has been more than 40 years since man first landed on the moon. Some people think that space research is a waste of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More than 100 years ago , humanity started investing in space research and got to the point where a man landed on the moon. I strongly disagree that spending on new space discoveries is a waste of money. I am going to present my reasons in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their products.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Irrefutably, businessmen influence people's minds towards buying their products, globally. Moreover, fast food companies tie up with schools to promote the sale of their products. I fervently believe that this is a destructive evolution of our society, as youngsters will spend money carelessly. Also, eating fast food on a daily basis will lead to obesity among students. I shall discuss the same in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favour.

Abuse of tobacco products is an age old activity and is gaining more prevalence in the society every passing decade. Few countries have taken stand against smoking in public areas like work places and eateries and others nations think otherwise. We will be discussing both sides in this essay and conclude it with my opinion.

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Recent developments in technology have made the T.V screen so live that people not need to go for any live performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree

I strongly agree, recent development in technology have made the T.Y screen so live that a people not need to go for any live performance. As technology like 3D have introduces, T.V screen give vibe that it is really.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants ant the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

As international tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places, on another side there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment but, this have more advantages then disadvantages.

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Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than work together for everyone’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Working together is better things for every persons success, but youngster are pushing their own self for to be better from their classmate . However, there have some pros and cons, I will describe from my view.

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Some experts believe that a second language is better to be taught from an ealry age rather that older age. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

There is a growing trend in the world, which is learning a second tongue from childhood. While some scientists believe that it should be started from an early age, others persist on beginning from an older age. In this essay, I will discuss why I believe the advantages of beginning from primary school outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a growing trend in the world, which is learning a second language from childhood. While some scientists believe that it should be started from an early age, others persist on beginning from an older age. In this ,essay I will discuss why I believe the advantages of beginning from primary school outweigh the disadvantages.

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Physical appearance may play an important role in many spheres of life: in the person͛s success in school, in relationships with people, in the choice of a career path. Say whether you agree or disagree with it, and if you see it as a positive or negative factor

The relevance of the body looks is considered crucial in many ways and cannot be ignored. Many people believed that if they possess pleasing body appeal, they can achieve anything in their life. However, I think otherwise. I have summarized my reasons in the following paragraphs followed by a conclusion.

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Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertisements have become a prominent tool of marketing for thriving companies worldwide. While some argue that advertisements serve no purpose in the purchasing process as people buy products based on their needs, this essay firmly disagrees with that statement. Advertisements play a crucial role in informing and influencing consumer behaviour.

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Some school leavers choose to travel or work for a year before going to university. What might be the reasons for this? What are the disadvantages of this practice?

In some countries, it is common for students to take a year off after completing secondary school, usually to work or travel, before commencing their studies at university. This essay will explore the main reasons for taking a gap year, as well as the potential drawbacks of this practice.

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Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

In this current world, bringing up a child is a huge responsibility. While some people believe that family has the main role, I side with those who think there are other important contributing factors.

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In many situations, people who break the law should be warned instead of punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In general, there is a considerable discussion about whether people who break laws should receive warning rather than strict punishments. Many argue that minor offenses warrant gentler warnings. However, I disagree that lawbreakers should simply be given warnings in most cases. This essay will provide two main reasons supporting this position against using only warnings for unlawful acts.

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