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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, it is not only large companies that are able to make films as digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Producing films has become very easy in current society, thanks to digital technology. I believe it has a positive development rather than negative.

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Graph about the population of four Asian countries and urbanization

The graph illustrates the percentage of the urbanized population in Malaysia, the Philippines, Thailand, and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for the years 2030 and 2040.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Although women are taking more than half of the workforce in many developed countries, it is not uncommon to see more men in top positions. Companies must give a certain percentage of high-level positions to women. In my opinion, the sex of a worker does not matter.If we will be required to allocate some statues only to ladies, several problems might occur. and we only have to give these statuses to people who deserve them.

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Although countries with long average working hours are economically successful, this often has some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries working long hours is regarded the norm. Economic success resulting from long work hours comes at a price for families, people’s health and may contribute to higher unemployment. In my opinion the long term consequences are to grave to ignore and an effort must be made to reduce long working hours.

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It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishments should parents and the teachers are allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Punishment is regarded as a helpful way to discipline children and make them aware of the difference between their Correct and incorrect behavior since they are not too grown. Although this upbringing method can be of high value And grant children’s bright future, I believe it can also raise several behavioral disorders, if it is done inappropriately. This essay will analyze both merits and demerits of punishment and suggest some appropriate sanctions.

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In some countries today, there is an attitude that anyone can do it in the arts. As a result, people with no talent bocome rich and famous and geniuine talent is not valued. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people believe that anyone is capable of being an artist and the the easy possibility of earning a great deal of money or gaining a a reputation causes that real artworks are not distinguished or appreciated. However, I disagree with this idea.

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Some people believe that the pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families.

It is undeniable that family life is being increasingly harmed by the high speed and pressure of contemporary lifestyles. Although, there are some positive outcomes of modern lifestyles, negative effects on families are far more. I totally agree with this opinion due to the several main reasons.

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Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is true that over the last 10 years, more and more adults tend to send their parents to care homes when they reach a certain age. In this essay, I will discuss the perceived benefits and drawbacks of this tendency.

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In your view, what is the most important thing for governments to spend money on: education, health, transportation, or something else? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Distributing tax-payer money is an incredibly difficult task that divide opinions. It divides opinions between people arguing that government should fund mostly education, while others argue that most of the investment should be in health or transportation. Not just that, nowadays, many people defend that the government should be minimal and most of these services should be offered mostly by the private sector.

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Many students find it harder to study at university or college than when they were at school What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve the problem?

Humanity activity has seen great progress from the past to the present. Nevertheless, statistics show that people's interest in improvement is increasing rapidly every year. It is true that improvement means a lot to free time in our contemporary world. Today, the growing demand for time due to globalization emphasizes its importance. This issue of the nation activity is important for some folks activity, but not important for others, it is left to their own personal opinions. The problem with our modern free timeis still those who think negatively about information.

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These days, there are many zoos in many different countries these days. What are the reasons for it? Is this a negative or positive development?

The remarkable increase in the numbers of zoos in the countries for scientific and economic. Also, having large numbers of zoos gives us several benefits which can be economic or informational, so it can be a positive development.

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There are many zoos in many different countries these days. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

At the moment, there are a variety of zoos in various places in the world. In my opinion, I think this is because zoos have become a business for some governments and organizations, also it has become a destination for some learners. Moreover, I think this is cruel and harsh, and it is for sure brings so many drawbacks.

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Some employers involve their employees in their decision-making process. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a common practice nowadays that employees are involved in making decisions related to their work. While there are certain drawbacks related to this trend such as discriminations between colleagues and waste of resources, I believe that this practice will actually brings more advantages in the form of higher job satisfaction, increase in productivity and speed up work processes.

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Research shows that business meeting, discussion and training are happening online nowadays.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

Nowadays advancement of technology and the globalized world, more organizations are successfully willing to overcome all their activities easier than the past. Although, this trend have certain drawbacks, the advantages are more greater.

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It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?

Many peoples said that enough physical exercise is a requirement to be healthy, other than a good diet and enough sleep after daily activities. However, there is a tendency that people in the urban area does not to get physical exercise for various reasons.

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Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe it is imperative for students to study different subjects in university other than their principal subjects to enhance their knowledge and skill needed in a real workplace, meanwhile focus on the subjects according to their capabilities has advantages and disadvantages compared to various courses studied as well.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the diaadvantages?

Having a child at the later age become more passionate among the society. They decided to postpone to give birth at an early age due to some purposes. Although this trend have certain benefits, the drawbacks are an edge over.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Agree or disagree?

There is an extremist view over the activities children do in their free time to be necessarily educational, If not, such pastimes are said to be a mere waste of time. My opinion is leisure activities could, not must, nor should be educationally beneficial. If, and only if, those recreational activities are fun, they are to have beneficial effects on the kids' upbringing.

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

The widespread problem of traffic congestion has long been a major topic of concern in society. This essay will discuss what are the causes and suggest ways in which this problem can be reduced.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of problems? How to overcome it?

It is true that fewer people can not aim to have a balance life. This can attributed to serveral factors, which can require possible solutions to be adopted.

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