IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 773

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some researchers believe that all children need to learn a musical instrument as part of their education. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is a long-held conviction among scientists which states that every offspring ought to participate in a musical instrument course in their academic path. I firmly concur with that claim.

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It has become easier and more affordable for people to visit other countries. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is believed that visiting other countries has become easier and more affordable for people. personally, I totally agree with this view and will outline the reason in this essay.

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some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. how might having a lot of money make people happy? what other things in life can make people happy?

plenty of individuals hold the idea that possessing a great amount of money is the major reason to be happy. I personally opine that having money usually brings self-confidence and power which are the most important reasons that bring happiness to people. However, having a supporting family and a healthy body have undeniable effects on people's good feeling.

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some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The essential things for students who studying in the high school is facilities for getting ready for the university and living in society. One of the these facilities is community service, of course, unpaid moreover, this option has advantages for instance it is helpful for having experience to do some exercise so some people said that it would be compulsory. In the following of the text I will analyze this topic and give my opinion.

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Some think that the government should tax unhealthy food to uncourage people to eat healthier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Eating habit has left too much impact on human life. The impact of this has made many think about solutions to this. As a matter of that, people think that a high rate of tax on junk food can be a solution to the issue. I believe forcing a high rate of taxes cannot change any ones eating habits.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion?

The convenience of fast food to consume and it's affordable prices have lead to the rise of patients diagnosed with health issues due to high fast food consumption rate in some countries. Although if this is not stopped there will be a surge of patients with health problems due to overconsumption of fast food, I do not agree on altering the tax rate for fast food as a solution for this condition.

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The figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The bar chart illustrates information from a survey of 1000 people in their adolescence in five divided nations, showing the community’s belief about definite rights and obligations for teenagers.

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Most countries spend much money on education as they start to realize the importance of education. In your opinion, which two subjects are the most important for young people and which one is the least important? Subjects: Literature, Sports, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, History. Music, Geography

Education plays a crucial role in our lives.In this competitive world schooling levels drastically increasing day by day , and many countries spend a lack of money on tuition.We have a plethora of subjects,Although In my opinion Mathematics and sports are important courses, Music is an unnecessary part of them.My views are elaborated further.

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Watching television is bad for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As an effect of industrialization, modern technology changed and improved people's lifestyles. Television has become a different form of entertainment for young people. Also, it is an important way to get new information quickly. However, the new technology will raise some new questions. In this essay, I will explain why I agree with this statement and elaborate on the details to support my argument.

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In some countries the average weight of people increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing

The relation between the average weight of people is inclining but their wellbeing and fitness level are declining. this essay will discuss some of the reasons why these problems have arisen and some of the steps that can be taken to address them.

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Some people are of the opinion that social networking sites have irrefutable impacts on both individuals and society. I strongly disagree with this notion due to job opportunities and access to a variety of details through social networking.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person´s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world people have a vast variety of different kinds of products and meals. They can choose their nutrition by many factors like price, taste and health benefits. However, not everybody considers the last factor and prefer to eat a lot of harmful, but delicious and frequently cheap food. Consequentially, they become fat and have many health problems.

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people are spending more on travel today than in the past. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In this era, the global citizens have more budget for travelling than before. While there is clearly a drawback to this, I personally believe that the benefits are more significant.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, advertisements has become an integral part of successful marketing strategies to pursue many consumers to purchase objects . Some people think it is the best way to promote their goods , products and services . However, many people believe that this approach is negligible and that no one care about it .

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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There are countries where the number of citizens who have decided to live alone is growing in past years. This essay argues that this trend has mostly negative consequences because it reduces the country's demographics and may cause mental illnesses among individuals.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be usefull in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although, some citizens believe that college students should study whatever they desired, others believe that they should only be allowed to analize educational subjects that will be usefull in the future, such those related to science and technology.

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Nowadays, a lot of buildings, such as offices and schools, are now being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

Open plan design concept for buildings has been increasingly popular over the years among business and homeowners. While some people would argue open plan design will provide less privacy, I believe that an open plan design concept especially for office have a positive impact especially in increasing collaboration and creativity among the staffs. This essay will address both positive and negative developments of open plan design.

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In your own opinion, what do you think are the factors that contribute to longevity (living a long time)? List some examples and reasons to support your answer.

What is the secret of living a long life? The answer to this question interests many people. There are many factors that impact on this. Unfortunately, some of them are out of our hands. For instance, genetics, accidents and so on. But there are factors which depend on ourselves: diet, physical activities, psychological state, lifestyle and so forth. Studies show that ,these factors play a big role when it comes to longevity.

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Some people believe that elderly parents ought to live at senior homes. Others believe that they should live with family members(blood relatives). Do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals have a belief that seniors should be stayed at old age homes, while others, keeping the notion that living with family members in those later years is apt for them. I believe, that love and affection are most vital factors for senior citizens than the professional care. In this essay, I would argue for the seniors should spend this crucial tenure at home only.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In upcoming years, online publications will completely replace printed ones because people are more interested in them. I totally agree with this opinion due to the fact that printed publications are more expensive,unavailable everywhere. Also,preparing papers to print books require cutting trees.

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