IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 773

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In line with the shift in time, there are growing concerns about the number of subjects and knowledge for university students in each course as well as major. while there are a variety of increases in students’ demand for adding another subjects into their main subjects, i partly agree with the idea that it is also essential to focus on studying for qualifications.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits. On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully. On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to drive, and ...

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Society is based om rules and laws.If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do,it could not function To what extend do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Imprisonment is, sadly, an inseparable part of society and it plays an important role to keep people safe. But there is a problem that a lot of humans who come out of jail continue committing crime. This essay will look into this issue and suggest that the right rehabilitation process could help to solve it.

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Some people believe that sports subjects should be removed from school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I completely disagree with the statement as it plays a vital role in the lives of youngsters, also the same would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for a child having a larger number of toys?

A few parents tend to buy their toddlers as many as diverse toys to have fun with. This is usually considered to be a positive method in parenting and I nearly as well agree with it. However, I believe there are still limitations, especially without adult’s control.

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries parents encourage their children to work as hard as possible in order to achieve their goals. Although this concept can help them improve their persistency , it can be disappointing if they fail. This essay will take a look at some pros and cons resulting from spreading this message.

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Some people say that it is the responsibility of the citizens to take care of the environment. While others say that it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some individuals say that it is the responsibility of the citizens to look after of the ecosystem . Whereas others say that it is the authority that should take care of the environment. In my opinion, the government is completely responsible to protect environment because they have power to promote regulations and rasie awareness among public.

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In some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

In some urban areas , public parks and open areas are replaced with gardens where local people can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Although this trend can bring advantages for local residents including, encourage people to eat healthy food. I believe demerits of this trend greater outweigh merits because it can have negative impacts on local people health, and make local people less social.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's world, the global labor movement has gained popularity, particularly among the new generation, accelerated further by the COVID-19 pandemic. Opinions are divided on whether certain professional fields should be limited to local workers or opened up to foreign talents. This essay will explore the reasons behind both perspectives, emphasizing the need to strike a balance between safeguarding local interests and embracing a global approach.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, there is an increase in the number of people seeking out infomation about their accommodation historical background. There are several reasons for this trend as well as methods to satisfy their curiosity. In this essay, some reasons will be revealed and discussed, along with that, I will provide various way to explore this interest.

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In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

There are increasing in the level of crimes in some countries as well as crimes are being more violent. In my view that causes are people and of course people can solve that themselves.

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Some college freshmen find that the courses they choose are not suitable for them. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve the problem?

A lot of studies show that the withdrawal rate of university freshmen are high recently. This is due to after getting enrolled, students find that the majors are not like what they thought before and then they find out that the courses are not suitable for them. In this essay, we will discuss that reason and how to solve this phenomenon.

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Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with a teacher, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition?

Parents are involved in their children’s educational process. Although some parents believe that private tuition can help students to perform better at school, others do not share this opinion. Each of these points of view has both advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Nowadays, the development of the facilities of the public sport, there caused some interests to link those facilities to public health services in order to increase the public health. Some people think that the best way to develop public health if only increasing more sports facilities. Yet, others believe that to do this will have little impact on it and that other measures to arrange are required. In my view, improving public health by the help of the sport facilities would be one of the best ways to choose if it would be not little effect on public health.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets should have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods, while others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, handful of people believe that manufactures and supermarkets should have the responsibility to decrease the amount of packaging of products, however there still some people think that consumers shouldn't purchasing stuffs with a lot of packaging. In this essay, I will discuss about both perspectives and also my opinion to the statements.

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These days more and more people are making the choice to go to university. While some people are of the opinion that the only purpose of university education is to improve job prospects, others think that society and the individual benefit in much boarder ways.

Nowadays, the new generation attends university because they want to fulfil their dream and work in the career that they desire. Whereas the other side criticizes that their purpose is to increase job prospects. I agree with both sides.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.

There are many products and aesthetic services to make people's skin brighten or whiten these days. However, this trend is not just nowadays' fashion. It comes from back in the past. And I think it is not bad for our health but it is bad for our society. In the following, I will explain this view in more depth.

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Some people think it is better to make more money rather than have free time, while others prefer to have more free time rather than making money. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In modern-day society, time and money are two essential commodities that people strive for. Oftentimes, we find ourselves caught in a dilemma between working hard to make more money and spending time doing the things we love. Some individuals argue that making more money is better than having free time, whereas others value free time more than money. Personally, at this stage in life achieving a financially sound position is more important to me than leisure.

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Research shows that the performance of staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. Therefore, companies should focus on improving employee productivity. How far staff performance can ensure the success of a company? What can companies do to increase staff productivity?

Research illustrates that the performance of staff can have a important influence on the success of a company. As a result , companies should concentrate on enhancing workers productivity. In my opinion, staff performance have a huge impact on success of a company. I believe companies can do many things to boosts staff productivity including, provide financial rewarding , and provide a positive environment for the staff.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Previously, people would live a very simple life. Having no competitions among each other. However, nowadays the scenario has changed and in today world to win and compete everyone must take risks whether it’s personal or professional life, all individuals should give their best to succeed. In this essay, I will explain why it is necessary to take risks and due to what reason it is advantageous rather than disadvantageous.

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