IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 779

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Today more people are opting for cosmetic surgeries, hair colouring and other cosmetics. Why is this the case? Do you think this development is positive or negative?

In today's world, the development in science and technology, has led to the possibility of changing someone's personality. Nowadays, many individuals are trying to get control over the natural process of aging by altering their skin tones, hair colour, and many other features. This is a major success in scientific world, yet it sets the standards of beauty too high and have a negative impact on many people. However, there are multiple reasons to opt for cosmetic procedures.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.

In recent times, most teenagers select online media such as Instagram Facebook and so on to interact with each other. Many things to do to encourage teenagers to spend lots of time with one another in person is to make facilities in public places namely parks, malls and so on

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As House is a basic need for people, government should provide free housing for everyone who cannot afford it, to what extent do you agree or disagree.

A Place of shelter is one of the basic necessities, for a person to sustain livelihood. A significant number of people believe that the ministry should offer free accommodation to all the members of society who are not able to buy houses by themselves. I partially advocate the statement. This essay will cover the benefits and drawbacks of providing free shelter to community members with relevant examples.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individual and society?

It is claimed that tourism is becoming one of the developing service while this industry brings a lot of merits in many sectors. This essay will discuss the pros of tourism to personal and civilization.

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In some areas of the US, a "curfew" is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

According to some, freedom of movement sometimes need to be restricted for the security reasons, including prohibition for children under eighteen to be outside of their homes without any adult representative. I strongly support this measure since it helps to protect teens from criminals and assists police to find lost children.

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Because of the rising cost of housing, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30s . Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this trend?

Most young aged into their 30s pushing them to become depending to their parents since the rising value of housing. This current situation are more on drawbacks to young people and especially to their parents.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

In contemporary times, many individuals are compelled to have a profession that is not of their choice. One of the preponderant reason for this is parents’ choices and preferences imposed on the adolescents. Unprofessional attitudes and mental illnesses are the serious repercussions of this.This essay will outline the causes and the effects of forcefully imposed careers.

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Nowadays, young people admire sports stars though thay often do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In today's world, television and internet has led to change chidrens' perspective. Many young individuals has started to praise sports celeberities. I believe it has a negative impact on children. There are multiple reasons to support this ideology.

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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit for teenagers at school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that most of the school students will be benefitted by international exchange. I completely agree with the idea that volunteering abroad will help them to learn about their society and culture which enhances their knowledge and creativity.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays people have an opportunity to watch video with any genre or theme. Thus people also bring up some questions about a damaging effect on the society and what consequences can it cause.

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Despite evidence that certain types of food are harmful, many people maket o choice to eat unhealthy food. What do you think are the causes of this problem and measures can be taken to solve it?

In the modern world, there has been an accelerating trend of people consuming junk-food, which is happening due to careless thinking of health conditions and dependence of process food which is made the industry. Most can not realise this unsafe food creates bad diseases in our body and also increase our medical cost. We should be minimising the consumption of unhealthy food in our daily life.

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Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that scitentific research should be devoted to addressing global health issues, but there are some who contend that there are more prossing problems to focus on. This essay discusses both sides of thos argument and why I partially agree with the later opinion.

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In some countries, governments encourage businesses to move outside of the cities to solve the problems of housing and transport in the cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?

Although as per the governments, it is beneficial to do businesses outskirts of the town, other people consider that it can be detrimental. Some countries can have clean surroundings in the city and have more land to build flats and houses by encouraging businesses to move outside but there are also drawbacks to be taken into account.

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Older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What are the problems will this cause? And what solutions can be recommended?

With the development of society and economy, a growing number of older people who are seeking for a occupation can be witnessed now.It is hard to deny that there would definitely be a competition between them and young generation, which may causes few troubles.

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Behavior in schools is getting worse. explain the causes of this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

It is irrefutable fact that in this modern era an increasing number of more and more humans believe that behaviour in schools is getting worse. Many individuals hold different beliefs about it . Personally l definitely with the above-expressed statement and there are many compelling reasons to support my view. In this following essay l intend two solutions to this .

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects of this on society and families?

Most of the couples nowadays think a thousand of times to have a baby or not at the early stage of their life while others think that they must take responsibility for having babies.

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For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

Art is the main feature which we separate from animals and which makes us human. With the development of technology, this acceptance has changed a lot. Even though, for a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. Nowadays, mankind's values have changed and people are more likely to consider science, technology and business more valuable and important than the art.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays internet has become so affordable and available to everyone regardless of their location and income. Due to this, everything is available online. All the basic and even complex human information is available for us with just one click away. Some people claim that because of this advancement, no one will show interest in buying printed books and newspapers. Although there are some other who disagree to this approach, I partially believe and agree to this statement.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Nowadays, understanding English in an educational formal is more crucial than knowing the mother language. If people are not educated about it, many dangers are applied to them. I personally believe that knowing English is essential, but surviving with a local language can be applied. This essay will discuss both views.

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In most countries, children wear uniforms to school. Some people argue that this is not a good idea. Discuss and give your own opinion.

There are arguments spreading over the society that studying English is more essential rather than studying the native languages. They (The local language) may be in danger of extinction if people do not learn about it. In my opinion, people need to learn English, but at the same time, we need to keep the local languages.

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