IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 779

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. how might having a lot of money make people happy? what other things in life make poeple happy?

Many individuals opine that a direct route of happiness is wealth.People who have a lot of money can have more comfortable life than the ones who does not have. However, there are other things in life which is more important then money and give individual satisfaction and helps to create happiness in life.

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University students must pay all costs associated with their education, because it benefits mostly them individually rather than the whole society as whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Tertiary pupils should pay all fees which are associated with their academics as it benefits mostly them individually instead of the nation. I agree with the given notion up to a large extent ,but I also opine that it would benefit to the nation as well. Which will be elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that while applying for the job, salary is a matter, which means salary is the most crucial factor to be considered. However, other people think that there are so many things to be prioritized rather than money. In my point of view, even though money is important, there are so many more valuable things than that.

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Nowadays many people choose to be slef employed rather than to work for a company or organisation.why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

Money is an inevitable factor in our life. Now more and more people are rely on self-employment rather than work for a company or organization. This essy analyses the reason for increasing numbers of self-employment and its downsides. My point of view regarding abovementioned statement explained in the following paragraph.

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Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It’s argued that modern inventions have made our society more disengaged although others claim that it has deepened human relationships. This essay will discuss both points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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Being a celebrity such as famous film star are sport personality bring problems as well as benefits.

Famous people like a movie stars and sports athletes have a luxurious benefit however, there can also be determined. It seems to be me that pros or more than its cons. I will articulate my pinpoints in a up coming paragraph

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some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. what might be the result for this? what are the advantages and disadvantages?

Several individuals prefer to reside in their birthplace. Their can be plenty of reasons to stay with their family for instance they would like to have their comfort life. In this essay I will be discussing about the advantages and disadvantages of residing with your family and friend near you.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject at school, while some think that it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are people with the opinion that art is really an important course at school whereas others believe that it is a time waste. In my view, I concur that art must be taught at school even though some people have different opinions.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views.*

It has been observed that many individuals channel their money on celebrations in the family whereas some individuals assume that it is a waste of money. This essay will discuss both sides with relevant examples.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Friendship is the only unconditional relationship in people's life as they are not obliged towards each other but still can rely on one another. Many argued that people should make friends with those, who have similar views, while others opine that people who have different opinions or do not always agree will be good friends. I will articulate both notions with a plausible explanation prior to giving my opinion.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money discuss both views.

Nowadays, few individuals feels it is necessary for members of a family to lavish their income on family celebrations and some others think it's a waste of resources. This essay will discuss more on both views and elaborate on a view with a reasonable conclusion.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Much money is used for family occasions because it a major opinion by lots of people and some believe it extravagant spending. This essay will explain the extent of debt some indulge in, also causing depression and jealousy.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.

As the role of technology has been very crucial in everyone's life, children have been accustomed to the computers. One may say using computers will give great knowledge to computers or the more negatives than positives. I believe using computers can have more negative effects than advantages because the computer makes children lazy and violent.

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Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent does price influence potential buyers? What other factors influence people to buy a product?

Behavior of the consumers has been studied under research for last few decades. Various factors affect the decision making of people while buying the products. Pricing is considered as one of the most influential element in this regard. Companies also use some other strategies to grab customer's attention like advertisements, high quality products or digital marketing.

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In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot ?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over conveying value by art that science and technology cannot provide. I would contend that there are a lot of values of modern science and technology which the arts can convey and help people get more knowledge about life that the former cannot.

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Certain people believe that the only way to reduce crime sentencing criminals for longer time periods, while others believ alternative methods should be used to lower crimes. Discuss both vieve and give your opinion

It is argued that somes think about reducing crime sentences criminals helps to improve their behavior, however others believe that it is correct to alter another principle to relieve situation. In my opinion, according to committing should be sentence by authorities. The essay will discuss these ideas and provide with relevant answers to question.

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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?

It is true that there is a significant population of the world is affected by stress. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this problem and a number of possible solutions to help tackle the issue.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both thesis and give your own opinion.

Many people think that we all have some kinds of gift when we are born, and it affect a lot for our lives. Then, can not we be good at somthing by education? In this essay, I will expain both side of view and my opinion.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent somewhere else. To what extent do you agree with this view ?

Art is the colourful field of life which can bring happiness in many of our lives. When we hear a name "art" we usually think about the sketches or paintings however, it is a wrong concept. It comprises multiple aspects of life i.e., acting, music, comedy, hosting, designing and photography along-with paintings.

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The advent of the internet has made it it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal experiences In your essay.

The ways of working are changing with the enormous development of technology. As a result, a growing number of people prefer to do their duty from their home instead of commuting to offce.In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of working from home and try to draw some conclusions.

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