IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 780

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages togeather. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

According to some people music sole to life.It cherishes every moment we live and is one of the best ways to reflect your emotions and feelings.It has been suggested by some people that music is a great means of connecting humans from various cultures and ages and bringing them closer.i totally advocate the statement and this essay will elaborate on my opinion.

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

The majority of students want to manage their time by themselves. They require to choose when they need to study or let's say play video games and etc., (other leisure time activities). It is agreed that managing your own time resources is quite important or even compulsory. In my opinion, it is an important skill and it can make students very responsible and motivated towards education.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in over-weight people in the society? How can this problem be solved?

First of all, we are very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce our corporation, Korea Water Resources Corporation (K-water). K-water is a South Korea-based, state-owned water utility, responsible for water supply and hydropower, as well as waterfront development business across the country, as a full-service developer, owner, and operator. K-water has substantial resources and stable financial and technical background.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many people with health issues are trying alternative medicines and treatment instead of channeling a medical doctor. Some people think this as a positive development. But, based on my point of view, I think this is a negative approach.

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In many countries, the crimes rate amongst underaged people has been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.

Crime rates among underage people are a growing concern in many countries. This phenomenon has various causes and requires different solutions to tackle the problem effectively.

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The process diagaram details the steps by which liquid chocolate is produced from cocoa beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given diagram depicts the processing of cocoa beans becoming liquid chocolate with three main steps from harvested beans to liquid chocolate produced.

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your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. he would like your advice about finding a place to live. write an email to your friend. in your email -describe where you lived when you were a student at the iniversity -recommend the best way for him to look for accomodation -warn him of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation

I hope you are doing well. It is delightful news to hear from you about your studies. First of all, I would like to congratulate you. According to your request, I can help you to find a place to stay while doing your studies. When I was following my undergraduate degree, there was a nice and calm place to stay. Additionally, it was located within walking distance of my university.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The population in the city is growing in size nowadays, due to the opportunity to have better future, however, I strongly believe such phenomena foster various downsides in big cities which lead to health hazards.

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Nowadays, the rights of young people are not respected. What solutions can you suggest?

Everyone should be respectful it does not matter if he is young or an adult. For example, many people do not care about kids’ emotions in what they think or like. I have some solutions that maybe helps.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Life in a country where a different language is spoken can be challenging. I agree with the idea that people who put themselves in this situation should prepare for significant social and practical problems.

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The arts including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?

Skills are seen as a major aspect of society which comprises craft, sound and play. This essay will explain how skills is been used as means of entertainment in our society and how they can provide job employment in the future for the upcoming generation if incorporated into our institutions' syllabus.

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As countries develop, people tend to buy more andmore cars.Do you think the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

In this contemporary era, automobile industries are advancing due to advancement in technology. As here question arises that in developing countries many individuals buy more and more cars. I accord with this notion as it has numerous benefits to the mankind although there are demerits for the environment also.

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Tourism has become one of the leading sources of revenue in many countries. Do the advantages of tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

The number of children's responsibilities in the modern world were becoming to decline in compared with the past especially, in some regions. from expert's perspectives, this happened have positive aspects for abilities of future in contrast of that some of them have a opposite standview, In this essay I intend to discuss both of these point views and say my opinion about them.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples flom your own knowledge or experience.

These days a significant number of children devote a considerable amount of time to their gadgets, such as smartphones, laptops, tablets or even smartwatches. I know for a fact that it is one of the most controversial issues today, consequently, In this essay, I am going to examine this question and provide my point of view.

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

The world has undergone numerous transformations over centuries and many people reckon that the current era is the best time to live in. From my perspective, I totally agree with this opinion.

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Some people think that professional athletes make a good role models for young people,while others believe they don't. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this modernized era,many youngsters view many athletes as a role model and they want to immitate the way these iconic person's dress,act and their life condition.However,I strongly believe that these athletes arn't worty of their "role model" status.

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More and more measures to improve the security in large urban areas have been introduced in many countries because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of these measures outweigh the drawbacks?

In many societies these days, some people are concerned about a lot of measures to security issues in vast cities around the world. The reason why is that, the rate of crime has increased sharply. The goal of this essay suggested about advantages outweigh more than disadvantages.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Over the past decade, playing computer games have become a prevalent and publicly recognized phenomenon. While playing electronic games as harmless fun or educational tool appears reasonable, plenty of evidence suggests that the opposite is true, I maintain that we support that idea

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that governments of wealthy countries should take more obligation for assisting impoverished countries in such areas. Now people are beginning to realize that development depends on the joint efforts of a large number of different groups.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that governments of wealthy countries should take more obligation for assisting impoverished countries in such areas. Now people are beginning to realize that development depends on the joint efforts of a large number of different groups. Personally, I tend to think that everyone should assist to each other in difficult times.

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The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries that tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The tourism industry has significantly grown in the past 60 years. Some people believe that the destination countries of tourists usually do not benefit from tourism. In this essay, I will the examine the economic, cultural, and environmental effects tourism and explain why I disagree with the proposed notion.

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