IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 785

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reason for this? What can be done to solve the problem.

In the modern era, several students could not concentrate on their academic subjects at school. There are several causes for this issue, however, in my view of point, it might be solved by some practical approach.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Various controversies have emerged as to whether study at home or go to school is best for children's future development. In the following paragraphs, I will introduce the benefits of both arguements, and elaborate on my point of views about this issue.

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More and more people suffer from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated by modern medicine. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine is warranted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether a return to traditional medicine is warranted due to health problems caused by modern lifestyle is a complex one. It involves considering the strengths and limitations of both modern medicine and traditional medicine.

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Some people believe that it is parents who teach children to recycle waste. While others feel schools are more responsible. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the social concerns today relates to the responsibility of schools and families in teaching children to recycle waste. While it is widely believed that it is parents who teach children to recycle waste schools are more responsible, others believe. In my opinion, it is parents who teach children to recycle waste.

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Some people believe that it is parents who teach children to recycle waste. While others feel schools are more responsible. Discuss both views.

One of the social concerns today relates to responsibility of school and family in teaching children to recycle waste. While it is widely believed that it is parents who teach children to recycle waste schools are more responsible, others believe. In my opinion, it is parents who teach children to recycle waste.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Along with education is more and more important, there is an ongoing debate about subjects importance, some people believe History is the most important subject while others favor Science and Technology more. In my opinion, both subjects are beneficial to strengthen personal ability.

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Should education and health care services free of charge and funded by government, or should it be responsibilities of the people to pay for this service?

Education and healthcare should be funded by the government as these are basic human needs and as people have paid taxes to the government, it is believed that they should be provided with free healthcare services and quality education.

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In many workplaces, online communication is becoming more commonplace than face-to-face meetings. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, people get used to adapting online communication to approach the purpose of meetings. Online communication becomes easy to do in preference to do soffline meetings. Nevertheless, conducting face-to-face outweigh the benefits of network communication as the system is more transparent and credible. According to my opinion, online conversation has more merits than offline approach.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to this.

It is believe of some people that the secondary school leaving should get involve in activities or to travel for a year before getting admission into higher institution, I will be looking into the merit and demerit of this action in this essay which example and conclusion shall be drawn.

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People should be able to keep all the money they earn, they should not pay tax for the state. Do you agree or disagree?

Taxes system have been set as a mandatory in certain countries. it is often argued that the taxes should be removed to ensure that everyone can own an exact amount of the salary rather than handling it to the government. However as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far as I’m concerned, I strongly agree that state has already received an amount of funds from government thus is no longer a necessary to collect an additional tax from citizens.

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𝐓𝐨𝐩𝐢𝐜: 𝐌𝐞𝐧 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐰𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐧 𝐞𝐦𝐩𝐥𝐨𝐲𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐟𝐮𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐢𝐦𝐞 𝐣𝐨𝐛𝐬 𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐬𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐩𝐨𝐧𝐬𝐢𝐛𝐢𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐞𝐬 𝐨𝐟 𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐬𝐞𝐡𝐨𝐥𝐝 𝐜𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐞𝐬. 𝐃𝐨 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐚𝐠𝐫𝐞𝐞 𝐨𝐫 𝐝𝐢𝐬𝐚𝐠𝐫𝐞𝐞? 𝐒𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐥𝐞𝐯𝐚𝐧𝐭 𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐨𝐧𝐚𝐥 𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐧𝐜𝐞

In recent times, the enormous family needs have led most teams to be engaged in round-the-clock jobs. Thus, sharing everyday duties is an often debate emanating from this growing trend. In my opinion, apportioning home schedules between dual-income couples should not be allowed. The following paragraphs will illustrate the merits of this position.

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Some experts believe it is better for animals to live in zoos where they are safe and are given all the food they need. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that zoos are better place for animals’ lives because of safety and sustenance. While there are serious negative consequences of living in zoo for animals, I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantages.

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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

Some people believe that success is equivalent to the level of someone’s intellectual, whereas others argue others medium should be considered. In my view, the latter views should stand and I will elaborate further in the next paragraph.

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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that fast-pace technology development affects everyday life anywhere around the world. People argue which is the better place for living between a city or countryside. My perspective is that it would be better if we are surrounded by complete facilities in the city to ensure that can help our daily life be effective and convenient.

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Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. it would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors.

Nowadays, smartphone addiction in youngsters has become a severe issue because they spend the majority of their waking hours, especially for entertainment. Personally, I agree with Believers who urge them to engage in outdoor activities that are both healthful and social.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

People use social media a lot during the last few decades. And there is a big probability that it could have a bad impact on the ability to form relationships with social media users. It is agreed that people can get a negative influence from social media. Facebook, Instagram and so on have influenced not anyone in a good way on bloggers, due to bullying.

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It is common for larger companies to require their staff to wear uniforms at all times. What are the benefits for a company of having a uniform? How can uniform benefit the staff?

Nowadays, some departments demand employees to wear uniforms at all times.This approach in my point of view, has several advantages, while few individuals perceive it as a major drawback.There are several benefits of wearing uniforms at a workplace.In this essay , I will explain my personal view with relevant examples.

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These days undocumented immigrants are a big problem. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

A generation ago, moving of civil to other countries was not a big issue. However, come to today, several countries which the most developed states are face up to this trouble. This essay will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, there has been a large growth seen in the usage of smartphones among youngsters. There are a number of reasons behind this statement, which convinced me that it is more beneficial than negative. Both reasons and my view are elaborated further.

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