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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some children nowadays take sports seriously while others play sports in their free time. Is this positive or negative development?

In this contemporary era, play are highly preferred by a group of juveniles who might show a huge interest in them. Howbeit, the rest of the teenagers performs sports activities when they have a vacant hour as I believe that it is essential to have an involvement towards physical games which gives empowerment to the youth, to be away from the bad influences but playing sports should be in limit in order to maintain the focus on studies too.

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Overconsumption of sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take the responsibility to control sugar intake while others think it is the responsibility of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.opinion about it.

Consuming large amounts of sugary foods could result in health problems in the future. However, some believe that individuals should be responsible for controlling their sugar consumption, while others believe its the government's role. In my view, it is the government who should regulate the amount of sweet products on the market.

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9.Full-time university students should spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education play a vital role in every individuals life and demand time investment in order to succeed. Especially, post graduate students are required to indulge into extensive hours of learning which should not be done at the cost of health. In my opinion, for the holistic development physical activities are as imperative as studying.

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It is often said that the government spend too much money on the projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problem that are more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Many experts believe that the government is exorbitantly allocating money to sustain wildlife, while others counter-argue that other major issues need to be solved. Although both views sound rational, I think that more public services-related problems should be addressed and solved. My point of view with appropriate examples will be justified further.

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Many people think that job satisfaction is important in work. Do you think young people these days should be sure of job satisfaction before taking a new job or should they put salary first?

Many people believe that not only money but also job satisfaction are both important essence when they looking for a job. I completely agree with this opinion. I will explain my reasons in below paraghraph.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, developed countries provide financial aid to undeveloped countries, however it is not key to solve this issue. But, rich countries have to assist other genre of help to poor countries instead of money.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive or negtive development?

Over the past few decades, electronic automation has developed significantly. With the development of this automation, some youngsters tend to spend their time using a mobile phone every day. This essay will explore this phenomenon's cause and I think it is a negative development.

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Many countries today are expecting high level of migration from rural area to cities what are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

Nowadays, everyone wants to live in a metropolitan area because of the basic facilities in many nations. In the essay, I will illustrate the causes and solutions of relocation.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Every country has its own traditions and customs. People residing in these countries have been following these traditions for years which become a part of their value system.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In this contemporary epoch, it is undeniable that individual’s weight increase and health level reduction are one of the most challenging issues in many parts of the world. Whilst the main cause behind this issue is the unhealthy foods. This essay shall look at the main causes of this problem and propose some vital mitigation actions.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is an argument that advertisements related to young children should not be telecast on TV. In my opinion, I radically disagree with the notion that these advertisements should be banned because not only they educate people but also help children make careers.

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It is important for children to learn what is right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Children training is one the vital duties of parents. Teaching little one to distinguish between good and bad is a basic way to treat children. some people opine that punishment is important to educate them and it should be adopted at an early age. In this essay, I will explain both how far I am not agree with this opinion and how much parents and teachers are free to punish their kids.

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Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and how serious are the consequences? Cause and solution essay

Eating unhealthy food is becoming popular in many countries. It is indicated that young children opt to have biscuits instead of carrots. This is due to the affordability and easy to prepare. However, there are negative effects associated to snacking.

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It is important for children to learn what is right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punshment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Children's training is one of the vital duties of parents. Teaching little ones to distinguish between good and bad is a basic way to treat children. some people opine that punishment is important to educate them and it should be adopted at an early age. In this essay, I will explain both how far I do not agree with this opinion and how much parents and teachers are free to punish their kids.

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Many people think that job satisfaction is important in work. Do you think young people these days should be sure of job satisfaction before taking a new job or should they put salary first?

Job satisfaction is vital for many people in work. From my point of view, young people nowaday should be ensure of job satisfaction rather than put salary first. This essay will demonstrate the reasons of job satisfaction is more important than salary.

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in many countries today, if people want to find a job , they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

it is true that more and more people have the tendency of moving away from their family members and friends to other areas in order to have more opportunities in work. personally, I hold the belief that the benefits of this trend are overshadowed by its drawbacks.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your option.

It was opined by some people that the experiences gained between before school and during school which one will have the greatest influence on their future. I partially agree with the experiences receiving during school.

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Many people around the world are still relying on the private car as their major mean of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest some solutionsit

It has been universally accepted that the problem of immence use of private vehicles, which is known as cars. As well as this is becoming the main source of transportation because of its comfort, affordability, reliability, However this is escalating an alarming rate.undoubtedly the case that urban areas around the world is increasingly suffer from congestion. I examine the reason for this trend and suggest some practical policies the government could implement to solve this crusial issue.

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Now a day the surveillance is happening at almost all public places. Is it good or perceived bad by people? What are advantages and disadvantages?

With technological advancement and artificial intelligence the system is becoming stronger and secure. Whether surveillance systems is constructive and destructive approach is highly debated topic these days. There are several advantages and disadvantages of this statement.

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The continued rise of the worlds population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present. What are the causes for this continued rise? do you agree that this continued rise is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The numbers of individuals grow everyday, and this will be problematic for future descedants. I fully agree that the overpopulation may be a factor for our generation. This essay will examines causes of rising people such as developing medicine and decreasing murders in society;furthermore, I give my opinion why it can be issue to us.

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