IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 843

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some young people like to copy the behavior and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be so? What can it cause?

Several youths love to imitate the characters and dressing of people of influence. It's no longer a news that children of nowadays are seen putting on the apparel like celebrities and incorporating their ways of life as a result of the interest they had for them. However, this can lead to further decadence among the youngsters. This essay will expound these with relevant examples and a conclusion.

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Some young people like to copy the behavior and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?

Nowadays some generation of young ones tends to imitate the fashion and lifestyle of celebrities. This essay will focus on how these young ones want to be known leading to the pollution of our society.

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they grow older

It seems argued that most parents provide their children with everything they desire and also grant them the liberty to carry out decisions without supervising them. This essay will discuss why I believe this is not an appropriate method of upbringing as it can result in overdependence and other menaces.

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Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?

It has been noticed that some guardians completely meet the needs of their wards, also allowing them freedom. This is a negative way of a child's upbringing and this can yield more demerits than good by increasing the kid's dependence on parents and exposure to wrongdoings. In this essay, these will be analysed and a logical conclusion will be drawn.

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

In recent times, parents feel more comfortable giving their children complete access to anything they want and permit them to do as they wish. This is becoming a growing trend as many children are lavished with extra resources beyond imagination. This essay will discuss the negativities and the impact of this practice on the growing children.

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Some people think that the media, such as newspapers, should be allowed to publish information about people’s private lives. Others, however, think that there should be controls to stop this media from providing this kind of information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the current age, although some people believe that publishing private information about people's lives in different types of media should be authorized, others believe information should be unauthorized. However, I think when people's information be accessed to the public that would have a positive impact on society.

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"In some countries the government promotes public transport as the primary means of transportation, and discourages private vehicle ownership. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?"

Nowadays, in certain countries the authority wants to make public transport as the core means of transportation. Also, they want to remove personal vehicles from the roads. From my perspective, I agree with them. However, there are some drawbacks. So, in this essay I will further explore this thought-provoking issue.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what soluitons can you suggest?

Internet has developed in a different way and it has changed to learn knowledge from a long time. However, it tends to cause some issues in this day and age. In this essay, I will argue what are the most imperative issues and how it can dissolve.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that education plays a vital role in imparting knowledge to students in an efficient way. These days it's a common practice that students miss one year between schooling and college after a year off. According to reports many students do not return to their respective colleges after a year off.

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The government should spend money on promoting sports and art in schools, rather than sponsoring Professional sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The view of a society is divided on whether the government should spend money in development sports and art in schools or for the professional sports and art event. I agree with the later point of view Reasoning for my view is explained in following paragraphs.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantage of this is outweigh the Like disadvantages?

Nowadays, the demand for gas and oil is escalating day by day. It is an important step to find out other sources from the lonely and untouched area. Although it has some advantages, I personally perceive that not only does this improve job opportunities but also becomes a pollution-free environment advantage which far surpasses its demerits.

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Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Nowadays parents are more concerned about the health of their children.Some individuals believe that they must be taught about eating habits at school while others think it's the responsibility of the parents.In this ,essay I will highlight both views and I strongly believe that eating habits should be started at home.

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Some people believe computer games are useful for people while others argue that they are waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether they may gain benefits from playing computer games or lose their valuable time. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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All over the world societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. Obesity affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How can it be tackled?

Nowadays, obesity has a significant impact on children and adults across the globe. In this essay, I will discuss the causes of the increase in obesity and provide some ideas to face this serious issue.

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Nowadays because of digital technology, it is possible for not only studios but also individuals to produce their own films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In these days, Technology has been developing sharply so individuals create their own movies without studios. In my opinion, it is brilliant development for films because it is easier way to make a film. I will mention that both sides that is about positive or negative.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, people start to pay attention on children's early development, some people consider allowing children to choices on everyday matters depends on their willing can lead to a selfish society, while others think children make own decisions on their own matters is important. In my opinion, although allowing children to make their choices in anything may spoil them and lead to a society lacking of cooperation, its benefits on kids' personality development can not be ignored.

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nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countires. is it a positive or negative development?

Over the recent years, travelling has become quite straightforward as well as comfortable trend for people all over the world. In my opinion, this phenomenon has both positive and negative impacts. I will elaborate them below.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

Some people believe that, if children are given the opportunity to decidesome people believe that, if children are giving the opportunity to decide what they want in everyday life, they might turn to be individuals who are selfish. Other people argue that it is vital for children to decide what they want about matters related to them. This essay will discuss both arguments before a conclusion is declared.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

There is an increase in the population of most countries these days. In most countries The percentage of youth outnumber that of old people. Although there are downsides, this essay argues that the advantages are stronger as the youth constitutes a large number of the countries workforce and also the youth being more technology oriented.

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It is the responsibility of schools to teach children good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children have been educated about not only academic knowledge but also good behaviour. It is believed that institutes are responsible for teaching good behaviour for students besides giving formal education. From my perspective, this opinion is reasonable to a certain extent and I will explain my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.

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