IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 844

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both attitudes and give your opinion.

Many people are willing to experience new features, for instant, pay a visit to new places and try new types of food. Others ,however, like their lives to be steady and they rather do things that are known to them. I personally hold the idea that it is a necessity for human beings to experience new things and this will eventually end up in evolving humans.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In our modern society, most of people start their own new business instead of working for employers. I think both of them have their own risk. and benefits.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

According to the fact that many languages get lost every single year, there is a belief that this phenomenon leads to an easier life. The underlying of this opinion may be based on communication between communities from different areas. Though some people think like that, I am opposed to the opinion.

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More and more people are moving to cities to look for work. What are the problems does this cause? What are the possible solutions?

This is modern era, 70% of people are working whether male or female So most individuals are shifting to urban areas to look for jobs. Yours is attracting on urban areas for employment. This paragraph discusses both sides.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Technology nowadays has improved in many aspects such as smartphones. The smartphone is one of important thing that uses by scion for their study or even for their personal entertainment. We can not deny that smartphones take part to help kids to develop themselves, for example they can search for some subjects they do not understand. Although there are some advantages, sometimes if we can not use it wisely there will be some disadvantages that arise.

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in some countries , a few people earn extremely high salaries . some people think that it is good for the country, while others believe that government should limit their slaries and limit the amount people can earn . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe the government should supervise the limitation of wages, while others think it is beneficial for the nation if only specific hierarchy can earn radically high salaries. I agree with the view that people should get considerably good pay due to below reasons:

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People believe that certain criminals should be made to do community service instead of putting them behind the bars. Up to what extent do you agree?

These days lenient punishments getting vanished, instead, people punish in their own way. I totally agree with this statement, because of strict punishment a person will not gain something.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Over recent years, there is a growing tendency for high school students take gap year before apply to the university. Some experts think this perfect way to choose right academic and career path for teenager whilst other experts worry students waste time and lose educational orientation during the gap year. In this essay will discuss in details both sides.

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Countries with long average working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As competition between businesses evolve radically, people spending much more time at work become inevitable. While working long time do brings great benefits to economic, but some people believe it also cause socially detrimental ramifications. I agree with the view and think working overload will distance people from family and friends.

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Nowadays, more and more children are being brought up in single parents family. What are the cause of this? What effect can be seen as a result of this?

In recent years, there is increasing number of children who being took care in single parents family. The primary causes of this phenomenon are parent' divorce and parent' deceased. Thus, the possible effects which may happened are lonliness and unoptimal children's development.

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In many countries a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to reduce this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your on knowledge or experience

In several nations, the prevalence of criminal acts involving teenagers has become a pressing concern. This essay aims to explore the underlying causes of this problem and propose effective measures to mitigate it. By analyzing social, economic, and psychological factors, we can develop strategies to reduce teenage criminality.

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Most employees do job interviews before offering position to a person. Do you think this is the best way to do it or are there better alternatives? What is the best method of choosing employer in your opinion?

Choosing the right people for certain positions is crucial for companies to attain their long-term objectives, and one of the methods used by human resources is conducting interviews to know better their potential employees. In this essay, I will outline the interview method considered the best approach for recruiting employees and other techniques to locate high-performance candidates.

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Giving detailed information of crime in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, criminal news has been clearly reported to the public on various platforms. It has been suggested by some people that unlimited presenting information about crime should be controlled by the government in order to the prevention of unexpected consequences. In my point of view, I totally agree with this statement because it can be affected directly by victims, while the policemen 's investigation system if there is no broadcast limitation. This essay will describe supportive details of my opinion.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

One of the serious issues facing the majority of large urban areas is overpopulation. The main reason for this is the lack of employment opportunities and lack of facilities in the rural areas, and the viable solution is for the government to incentivise its citizen to stay in those areas.

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Cultural tourism, where people travel in order to visit museums, monuments, and archaeological sites among other things, is a growing industry. Having so many visitors may sometimes benefit a nation’s cultural heritage, but can also cause problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Usually having traveler in a country is for better benefits it bring in forex. Therefore money helps the democracy to upgrade our hospitals, schools, grants for elders, the disadvantaged and many more. The state also affords to maintain the system like those museums, monuments, archaeology sites and growing industries.

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Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?

The pursuit of success is a complex endeavour, influenced by a multitude of factors. While some argue that hard work and dedication are the primary keys to achievement, others contend that additional elements play equally significant roles. This essay will explore both perspectives and present a balanced analysis.

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The academic dishonesty* of students is becoming a serious problem at school In your essay, provide at least two reasons why students cheat at school, and discuss at least two negative effects academic dishonesty may have.

Recently, our generation are did not pay so much attention on the education as did our oler relatives. Furthermore, our lazyness lead us to the searching a ways how to cheat at the test or exams. And as a result, the academic dishonest became a seriour increased problem. There is two reasons why pupils cheat at school and also the negative effect from this.

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Some People believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion.

Today people watch different movies and programs on TV in order to entertain when they are tired of their work. I agree with somes think that cruel movies and games impact young people's behaviors while other people claim that these kinds of films and video games do not effect people's behavior. The essay will be discussed both options and provided relevant examples.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Analyse the two sides of this argument.

n this present world, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise. Even classrooms are among the many places that enjo the usage and benefits of technology. The argument that classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology is an argument that is both agreed and disagreed with by many. The two sides of this argument will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in this essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, some developing countries such as Indonesia and India have more young adults rather than elderly people. In my opinion, although this situation might bring some social problems, the benefits still outweigh the drawbacks.

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