IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 847

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Buying things on internet such as books Sir ticket and groceries is becoming more and more popular .Fo advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantage.

Nowadays people are using the internet for various purposes, such as booking tickets groceries and so on. Purchasing on the internet is becoming popular around the world in order to make easy for population. However there are some advantages and disadvantages of booking on the net.

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children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

In today's world kids are encountering more pressure in education, social and commercial aspects of their lives. There are some reasons causing these pressures. Although, many solutions can be used to tackle this issues.

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People who are learning a foreign language can face a number of difficulties. What are some of these problems? In your opinion, what are the best ways to overcome these difficulties?

Learning a foreign language presents various challenges for individuals. This essay will discuss some of the difficulties encountered by language learners and propose effective strategies to overcome them.

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In many parts of the world,families were larger in the past becouse people had more children.Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past .

In the past almost every family was very large in the world due to every family wanting to be a lot of offspring .They thought children bring happiness to every single family and that is why they love numerous heir.

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The government should control the internet to reduce cyber-crime and ensure safety users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

The safety of Internet users has become a matter of serious concern, over recent years, among people. Some people believe that to mitigate cybercrime, government must undertake the control of the internet. I partially disagree with this statement and the reasons shall be explicated in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people think that criminal behavior can have genetic reasons, while others believe that only circumstances can lead some people to crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the main reason of criminal activities is a contentious topic. some people contend that genetic reasons can be the major reason, while others argue that they are mainly due to the effect of their environments. it is my belief that both of these views are partially right.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Nowadays, many people believe that computer games bring harmless entertainment and are also a good education method. Otherwise, a part of us asserts that video games lead to many negative impacts on players. In my view, while I accept that games sometimes have a harmful influence on users, I believe that they are more possible to have a positive effect.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing games on computers by childrens .

In contemporary society, the advancement of technology plays an essential role. Currently, most individuals and children can use their computers at any given time. However, young children play computer games spending a number of hours. In this ,essay I would discuss what are the benefits of computer games and the drawbacks of playing them.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, Earth is facing with the pollutants which are created from many factors, especially wrapping bags. Some individuals agree that manufactures and malls should be responsible to decrease amount of packing of goods while others think that customers should prevent buying from packaging. In my point of view, I tend to agree with the former.

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In some cities, there is less control over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings. People can build in whatever style they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, we can find vast majority of homes in a certain area built with different design, this is also happened to the construction of office buildings. The following essay will share my thoughts on why the advantages of this notion outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make thier own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a view that it can cause concerning issue for both the individual and sociery to allow children to make every decision by theirselves. However, although it can be problematic in some cases, this essay will explain why I would argue that children should hold their right to decide their own company for the sake of their adulthood.

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government should spend money on railways than roads

Nowadays many kind of vehicle have improved and there is a question about on which kind of transport the government should spend money. I agree with this statement because the railways transport should get more attention and the government should develop this kind of transport. This essay will discuss why the government should spend money more on trains rather than on roads transport.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In the fast-pacing world, people have become more competitive. To leading in this race, they work hard for long hours which eventually reduces the spare-time for their entertainment. Even though working for long hours has some disadvantages, it comes with more benefits.

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SOME PEOPLE FEEL THAT THERE SHOUD BE A FIXED PUNISHMENT FOR EACH TYPE OF CRIME. OTHERS Thought THAT THE CIRUMSTANCES OF AN OFFENCE SHOULD BE TAKEN IN TO ACCOUNT WHEN DECIDING ON A PUNISHMENT. DISCUSS BOTHE SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

It is undeniable that due to the poverty, and social in equality, the number of crimes are rose in certain nations. While some individuals believe that a punishment for each crime's category should be fixed. Conversely, there are those poeple who think that a punishment should be considered case by case. This essays will discuss both point of views in detail along with my personal perspective.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Physical activity is an important part of our life. People have various preferences for sports. Some of us are team players. Others think that individual sports bring more benefits. In this essay I will show different relations.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often believed by people that music, peers and other sources of media affect the growth of children. On the other hand, some opine that growth of children depends on the basic skills, they learn from their parents during the childhood. While I strongly believe that the guardians are highly responsible for the development of a child into a good human being.

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Practical skills are more imporant than theoritical knowledge. Therefore, in the future job applicants will not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a notion that the application of practical skills outweighs classroom learning. As such, no formal credentials will be needed by job seekers. My opinion of this effect will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days it is under discussion that social platforms are occupying the attention of all folk whether young or old and they pay attention for small intervals. However, I believe that it is not true because it has a great impact on folks' life like they have their own influencer to whom they follow. Secondly, many advertisements are done with the help of such services. I will further elaborate on these points in this essay below.

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Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder (ADHD) is one of the most common mental disorders affecting children. There is a supposition that the reason for this mental health is from using social media too much as such a young age. For me, I do not really think that social media is the only thing affects to your attention deficit.

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As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

It is certainly true that today worldwide the structure of family sizes has become more smaller when compared with the past generations. There are many reasons for this trend, I think having small family can bring a positive impact on the community .

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