IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 847

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people would consider music as a connective abstract device between diverse cultures and generations. I totally agree with this statement, and in this ,essay I will discuss some points.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this era and age, the population is still growing sharply, creating important issues to satisfy all the food demand. One of the possible alternatives is to introduce new types of nutrients such as bugs, caterpillars and locusts. This essay analyses the benefits of introducing insects as an aliment in our society such as reduction of costs and pollution, but also drawbacks such as the sensibility of people and the obstacle of culture.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Many animal species face the risk of extinction, which will reduce the diversity of creatures and thus endanger human’s living environment. There is no denying that human is the main reason that causes animal extinctions and there are many efforts that people can make to solve this problem.

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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society Do you think the art still have a place amoungst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum

It’s believed by some that art and fields have become a major part of our society.While other fields are great importance in society,art continue to play vital role on shaping the culture.Art should be incorporated in the school curriculum since it’s helps us to understand world around us, explore difference perspective and express feeling and emotions.

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While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem that we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

People have different views about the reason why our world become more and more struggled. While some argue that deforestation become the primary reason for our environment. I believe that global warming is the fundamental reason why climate change become deteriorate.

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Nowadays, marketers have left no stone unturned to entice customers. Certain fast food companies and restaurants now tie up with schools to endorse their products. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The collaboration between fast food restaurants and schools to endorse their products is a topic of debate when considering its impact. This development can be viewed from both positive and negative perspectives. In this ,essay I will outline the argument for each viewpoint.

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More developing countries are given aid from international organizations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important?

Some individuals consider that more developing countries are given aid from international organisations to enhance many financial issues and citizens's life. Meanwhile, it is argued that instead the vital role of financial aid, practical aid and advice are essential for developing countries. From my perspective, I adhere to both views and this essay will further elaborate on this statement.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, more and more people want to do sport to maintain their health condition. Certain community assumes that there is more upsides in the groups types of sport, lile basketball, while others suggest that activities with only one participant, for example running, is the best choise. This essay agrees that social-connected sports is better, in order to develop some social skills, but other group thinks that it leads to discrimination from others members of team.

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Crimes can be controlled by individuals and government also. Discuss both views.

It is irrefutable that crime is becoming common in the world. More and more people are getting engaged in it. It is believed that government should take the responsibility of preventing this crime, however, others think that the individual should be responsible for it. The following paragraphs will discuss both the sides.

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Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for them. Why? What are the most effective ways to improve people’s eating habits?

Lots of people are fond of consuming junk food despite their awareness of its’s harmfulness. As far as I am concerned, there are several reasons for this which are related to human psychology and his attitude to life. I believe, there are some successful strategies to change eating habits in a good way.

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With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

The issue of social media has become a controversial topic in this century. In this way the majority of people believe that uncontrolled access to the world wide web by children contributes to a large number of problems. The following essay will explore two problems and 2 solutions regarding this subject.

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In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the majority of information is stored online rather than in physical books as it was in the past. I will examine the advantages and disadvantages of information storage media and provide a logical conclusion.

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During the last fifteen years, the use of smartphones has increased dramatically, making it possible to contact others almost anywhere and at anytime.Do the advantages of smartphones outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been a significant growth in the smartphone usage in the past fifteen years, and people now tend to rely on their convenience. However, some individuals also point out the numerous negative problems imposed to our society.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is true that advertisements are relatively popular in modern day. Despite several drawbacks, I firmly believe that advertisements have positive impacts on society.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

To achieve more success in sports, while some people believe that it is more crucial to cultivate your mentality than physicality, others argue that physical health is more vital for athletes. In this paper, I will discuss both viewpoints in-depth and present examples to show why the latter assertion is more compelling.

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Question: Universities should accept equal number of males and females in every subject. To what extent do you agree?

It is generally believed by some people that education institutions should fairly receive both males and females in number of students. This trend has both merits and demerits. I agree that tertiary schools should equally accept them without any discrimination thus it shows that education is embracing gender equality

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Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.discuss both perspectives, and let us know your opinion.

In the present era,the declining health of the environment is a global concern.Few individuals believe that environmental issues are too complex for people to tackle, whereas others think that the administration cannot handle these atmospheric problems unless the crowd take some initiative.This essay will discuss both notions along with my opinion.

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although some people claim that getting an enjoyable job is more essential than earning a lot of money, other believes that a well-paid job leads to a fancy life. I agree that a good salary is more important than enjoyable work.

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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

Nowadays, it's common for parents to want to be involved in every aspect of their children's lives. They see it as an essential ingredient for personal growth. While some argue that it may lead to selfish behavior. This essay will discuss both views.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, decisions are taken by some individuals to bear children at a later age. I strongly believe that the demerits outweigh the merits as this can lead to terrible health conditions for the woman around child birthas well as stigmatization in from friends and family. These will be further explained in the essay.

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