IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 847

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people think that hard work and dedication are essential for success. Others believe money and personal acceptance are more important

It is certainly true that there are numerous factors behind every success. Some people deem that hard work and persistence are the primary factors which help a person to achieve success but others argue that financial status and looks are more important. In my opinion, both views are valid as a combination of perseverance and money is needed to achieve success.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What are the reasons for this? What in your opinion can be done about it?

There is no doubt that these days many nations have highly qualified graduates without employment. The question is What are the reasons for this issue? in this essay, I am going to discuss the problems and mention my perspective.

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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The number of people who are gaining weight is increasing in many countries, mainly in the high income countries. This is one of the main issues that nations need to consider. This essay will discuss two main solutions to this problem.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer–based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

It is true to say that in modern pace of ,life computers have a significant role in the life of people therefore some people believe that we are mostly relying on computer-dependent technology.according to my although the application of computers increases more and more with the passage of time we find another option also for doing a different type of tasks.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is am opinion that celebrities are known as for glamour and wealth are famous than achieve.While a reckon that this is a bad example for youngs,I believe that the others can occupy cool role models

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The impacts of increasing life expectancy to people and society In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

With the development of our nowadays world the level of living increases, consequently, the average life expectancy raises too. However, not every person is happy about that and someones think that this could cause several problems. There are some measures that could be taken to decline the contribution of life duration.

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International sporting events like the Olympics and football World Cup place a huge financial burdens on host nations that cannot be justified. To what extent do you garee or disagree with this opinion?

There some important reasons to disagree with the idea that providing competitions like Olympic games or football World Cup is waste of money for host government. Personally, I am completely disagree with this view.

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The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year. What do you think of this trend ?

There is no denying the fact that the main purpose of exams is arguable. While it is a commonly held belief that evaluating the student in a sustainable way would be better than examining them. From my perspective, I strongly believe that assessing pupils is more useful than testing them. This essay will shed light upon the reason why I believe this.

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In many parts of the world, shopping is no longer a way that people buy things that they need, and it has been developed into a form of entertainment. What are the reasons for this development? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Shopping is a way for purchasing what we need. Nowadays this becomes a form of hobby and people enjoy spending a considerable quantity of time shopping. The reasons for this issue are a more affordable condition of population, accessibility, and convenience to massive shopping centres. In my opinion, it has a positive effect.

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in some countries , owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people

People in several countries are more likely to have a owning residence than renting one. There are many reason why people should buy a home but there are still have some drawbacks as well.

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Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or negative development?

To tell the truth, shopping is a favorite for many people. Today we live in a technology world, I mean that the internet around for life.no doubt shopping is important for all social categories (man-women-child).

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computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education

In today’s society, the advanced technologies applied onto computers makes them more suitable for education purposes, hence teachers’ role might be redundant in a foreseeable future. While it could be argued that educators are no longer relevant in the digital era, this essay contends that they still have a crucial role to play not only for lecturing, but also for supporting students to navigate many aspects of life.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages

It is believed that taking risks for both professional and personal lives is essential for people’s growth. There are benefits when making risky decisions This argument offers some benefits, such as ability improvement and being more confidence improvementt. However, these upsides also have some drawbacks as well, for instance lose both money and job.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all time. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefit of having uniform for a staff?

Some organizations have made it compulsory to wear a dress code for the organization's staff. The main benefits of this practice are to impart equality and discipline among the staff. This essay intends to analyse the positives of wearing a uniform during job timings with detail and suitable examples.

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Everyone should stay in school until they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is sometimes argued that whether should everyone stay in school befoor 18 years old. While there are some merits of leaving school befor the age of 18, but i do believe that school can be conducive to peosonal development.

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In today's world more work is done by machines do the benefits over weigh the drawbacks of impact on individuals and society.

In this fast paced era,technology is proliferating continuously so the majority of individuals prefers to use automated system in their work as compared to labour.In my opinion,the advantages of this statement are more than its disadvantages. This essay will shed light upon my perspective in upcoming paragraphs

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‘Children who have brothers and sisters often have better social development than an only child. The government should therefore give money to parents to have two or more children.’ What do you think about this proposal?

the heir who has siblings often has better social maturity than a youngster without brothers and sisters. The authorities should also give cash to parents to have two or more children. Personally, I believe that having brothers and sisters in our life is the best thing that ever happens to us, however, not all parents can have more offspring than two or three, as they do not have enough money for child support. In this case, the government should help a young family to grow by paying child support.

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Government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatments facility in order to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The phenomenon of government proposing a new environment policy to control all organizations that releasing any toxic materials before purificational process has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I completely agree that any organization which do not following the policy should be enforced to end their business.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

In this modern age, with ubiquitous access to computers, video games have become a popular activity for children. This trend is causing childhood obesity and other related diseases that arise from too much computer gaming. This damage, however, can be significantly reduced by engaging children in outdoor activities.

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some people say that advetising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things . others people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . Discuss both the views and give your opinion?

Advertising has become an intergral part of the rising debate in present world. Where proponents of the arguments in favour, however the oponents are completely against the releavence of the promoting.In my opinion, advertising is extremly successful at persuading us to buy things and it has more positive impacts than negative around the globe.

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