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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people say that schools should spend more money on computers, others say that more money should be spent on teachers' wages. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Today, there is an opinion asserting a lot that can be inferred from the way that schools choose to teach. These interpretations can provide us with an insight into the cost of money spent on instructing by computers or tutors.However, I personally believe that enhancement of the teaching system can take a sizeable part of a budget , especially by computers and it results in many problems such as financial consistency,while,it will be more profitable if we use teachers.I will discuss both sides in the next paragraphs.

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Some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?

It has been a matter of dispute between the old and new generations over the fight of changing some rules about their life, such as the invention of technology which has drastically changed the ways things used to be get done earlier, which sometimes parents can not accept at first and can be the reason of misunderstanding and they prefer to be in their comfort zone while having their old-school methods of doing jobs. But it is important to be labeled as something important, and it is the need of the day in view of the fast-paced life. In upcoming paragraphs, I will explain the reasons behind this scenario and why it should be called positive growth.

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An American film actor once said, "Tomorrow is important and precious" • Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people claim that the future is more important than the present and society should focus on tomorrow than today. In contrast, I strongly agree that individuals should pay attention to the up-to-date because the future has not yet arrived.

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space is vast and scary .do you agree or disagree?

Online sites have made it easy for the public to access information without the need to buy physical products like newspapers and books at no additional cost. Although I agree with this statement to some extent many factors should be taken into consideration as well.

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Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others , however, believe that boys and girls would benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Many businesses think that the new employees who have just graduated from schools lack interpersonal skills, such as working with colleagues as a team. What has caused this and what are the solutions to this problem?

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. Do what extend do you agree or disagree?

Social networking sites have a huge bad effect on both people and the community. I partially agree with this statement, In my opinion, there are also positive effects.

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Some parents think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better careers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Half argue that babysitting places give the best services for minors of pre-school age. On the other hand, busy parents think that family members for example grandparents, will be better for their children. From my perspective, the first statement is better than the latter one because adolescents can find friends to talk with there, in addition, perhaps the grandparents are busy babysitting their offspring.

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The use of social media such as Facebook or Twitter is replacing face-to-face contact this century. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Popular social media apps like Facebook and Twitter are replacing 2-way contact, with the advancement of technology ,this problem is pretty unavoidable. I personally believe the disadvantages are way more severe and could impact our society as a whole leading to communal disruptions among people.

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot money. Others disagree and think a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many citizens discuss that a job should be liked by workers rather than have more money. Others do not prefer that point of view and prosecute the opposite idea that good payment leads to a more enjoyable life. This essay will disagree with the first statement because a high salary presents more opportunities and circumstances for individuals and their closes, even though the like work can be more suitable, it can need more time and be less paid.

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Today, children play very cruel games. This should be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most of the world's major cities. What do you think about this?

Modern children have a huge interest in video games in which there is violence. Some people believe that this can be a trigger for violence in the future. This is an important topic for discussion, and therefore it is necessary to understand how strong the influence of video games is on the child's psycho. In my essay, I want to present my opinion on this topic.

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More and more media attention is being paid to famous, successful people in sports and movies. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, more and more famous sports players and actors obtain exposure to various media, so the public can easily acquire a variety of these celebrities' news and information. According to this kind of phenomenon, different humans hold sundry opinions.

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extend do you agree?

It is argued that music is a suitable path to make individuals get along with individuals of various cultural contexts as well as of different ages.

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Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, human beings face various problems, of which the pollution of the global environment is the most severe issue faced by humans. Therefore, some people suggest the global market can raise the expense of fossil fuels. However, other people dissent from this count. In my opinion, I partially agree with this method.

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University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

A segment of society suggests that higher education students should pay the complete cost of their degrees, as the overall benefit is for them and not for the general population. In this essay, I completely agree with this statement as the payer's money should be used for other purposes and also this will motivate students to study harder.

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Some pople think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work intead of bering put behind bars. To what extend do you agree?

Some people believe that prisoners should do some unpaid work for the community instead of staying behind bars. I completely agree with this viewpoint because it allows prisoners to feel like a part of the community, and they can gain some experiences.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the word is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

It is considered that the most important issue nowadays is Global warming.In this essay, I will discuss the causes of Global warming such as transportation and infrastructure and possible solutions to this problem.

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Many people like to go on holiday abroad, while other believes it is better to visit places within their own country. Discuss both of view and give your opinion.

In recent years, the debate between traveling abroad versus exploring one’s own country has become a popular topic. While many people enjoy going on international holidays, others believe that domestic travel offers better experiences. Both views have merit and deserve careful consideration.

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Many people believe that a University education is necessary for a good career. Do you agree or disagree? What other factors can contribute to a good career?

Many people think that going to university is essential for having a successful career. However, I believe that while a university education can be beneficial, it is not the only way to achieve career success.

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary world of globalization, It is noticeable these days that media is more focused on issues rather than positive news. Some people argue that it is dangerous for viewers. This essay will discuss the issues with this recent development and why I agree with the notion.

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