IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5. Page 192

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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In more and more countries, people choose to give money on special occasions rather than giving gifts chosen personally.Why might this be the case? Is it a positive or a negative development

In an attempt to not offend someone, people these days have started to hand out money as gifts rather than giving them chosen gifts. Like everything, this cause has its own advantages and disadvantages. This essay will examine both sides of the case and deduce if gifting someone money is a positive or negative development.

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We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choices as consumers and what effect does it have on our lifestyle? Discuss this issue and give your opinion.

It is psychiatrist Ralph Klein who was credited with first coining the phrase ‘secret schizoid’. Unlike the overtly schizoid or schizotypal individual who is characterised by aloofness, coldness and indifference, the secret schizoid may present himself as an engaging and interactive individual according to Klein. Thus, Klein argues, there are not one but two distinct schizoid personality types: the overt schizoid and the covert schizoid.

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Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

these days , severe pressure is imposed on the kids by their parents in order to prosper. guaranteeing kids' future and boosting their resistance, they do that although this notion bears not only some upsides including adhering to order and making attempts to reach goals but also some downsides such as mental disorders.

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Many young people are motivated and successful at high school. Many others , however, lack motivation and see high school as irrelevant to their interests and needs. Why is this? What could be done to help all students succeed?

Many young people excel in high school, driven by motivation and a sense of purpose, while others struggle to engage with their studies, finding the educational experience irrelevant to their interests and future goals. This discrepancy can be attributed to several key factors, including the traditional educational system's rigidity and its limited alignment with students' diverse needs and aspirations.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that as we live only once we need not save our income instead spend it now and enjoy the moment. Where on the other hand, some argue that saving money for the future is very important because life is very unpredictable and as a result, there is a chance we may use that money. Apart from this early retirement is only possible with the right financial planning. Hence, I completely agree with that we should stop spending unnecessarily too much and start saving some part of our salary.

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In most cities and towns, the high volumes of road traffic have become a problem. What are the causes and what actions could be taken to solve the problem?

These days, technology has been developing immediately, so we can travel really fast by both private and public transportation; however, we have a bad happen that name is road traffic; additionally, it is important that we spend a lot of time on it. This essay discussed the main reasons that make this issue and how can we solve it.

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Does internet need to be controlled by the government?

There are many arguments believe that the Internet does not require to be controlled by the government. I think the government should control the Internet because too many hackers command mobile phones and other devices. Moreover, there are people who post illegal videos.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause What can be done about lack of sleep tiredness darkcircles

The topic of not getting enough sleep has become a major concern in recent years. This essay will discuss the problems. And provide some potential solutions.

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Climate change is an urgent issue and it is believed that the utilization of fossil fuels should be stopped and alternative energy resources should be used instead. It is however believed that oil, gas, and coal are indispensable. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant example

In recent times, abrupt changes in weather conditions have posed a severe threat to our ecosystem. It is argued we should adapt to utilisation of the renewable energy resources, and stop the consumption of fossil fuels whereas it is believed that such gases are required for our survival. In my opinion, adapting to natural resources such as wind and solar could help us to mitigate the negative effects of global warming.

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Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowladge or experiance

In modern life house companies have taken fast steps to solve housing's high demand. Some people say it's better to have strong quality materials to last a long time, on the other hand, others believe it should be more practical and easy to finish building in a short amount of time. In this essay, I will be discussing both side's views.

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Some people think that learning news from newspapers is the best way. Others, however, say that there are more effective ways of learning news from other media. Discuss both points of view and give your opinions

Nowadays, we have varieties of ways to be in touch with news. Although newspapers could be considered the best example, there are more developed and convenient resources which save both finances and time.

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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation, Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

Over the past few years, private cars have become the main type of vehicle that people use. This essay will discuss the potential causes of this trend including the affordability of cars and their ease of use and it will suggest solutions such as making use of a private car more expensive while making public transport more convenient.

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Climate change is a significant issue that requires urgent attention. What are the primary causes of climate change? How can individuals and governments work together to address this issue?

Climate change represents a pressing global issue requiring immediate and comprehensive action. This essay will examine the primary causes of climate change and explore how individuals and governments can collaborate to effectively address this pressing challenge.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

In today’s society, the internet plays a major role in making people's daily lives easier. However, spreading and consuming information from the internet has several drawbacks. This essay will explain the problems that may occur due to the use of the internet and offer some solutions.

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Many major cities are facing a housing crisis as they cannot provide enough land for new buildings. Some local governments believe the problem could be solved by reassigning park land for residential development, because this land would be better used for housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As cities struggled to provide areas for the construction of residential complexes, an idea of utilising communal areas—which are allocated to facilities, such as a park—has emerged. I strongly disagree with this proposition because it further induces overpopulation, and erodes the sense of community, which primarily emanates from communal spaces.

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Doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly. However, many of them do not get enough exercise. What are the reasons? What can be done to encourage them to exercise more?

Nowadays, we can see and hear a lot of different advice from doctors, slogans and movements that encourage us to exercise. It is especially common to hear advice from doctors for the elderly.

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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It's hard to deny that remote learning is becoming more popular but also can cause the problem of low learning effect, which leads some people to generate their idea that kids should be educated in the classrooms instead of learning online. However, such kind of statement lacks both factual and logical fallacies and should be examined more meticulously. In my opinion, as far as convenience, safety and learning quality are concerned, the advantages of learning from the Internet obviously outweigh the disadvantages.

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It has often been suggested that the reintroduction of capital punishment would deter the ever-increasing rate of serious crime. What is your view? Do you think that capital punishment should be reinstated?

Facing increasing numbers of serious crimes has become a major issue that tremendously affects society. Many people argue that applying the death penalty will help to face increasing crime frequency. I strongly believe that putting strict rules as execution will be a deterrent to any offender; however, there are other considerations that have to be taken into consideration.

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Some people think having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe bskills and experience are more important. Discuss bot sides and give your opinion.

There is an issue about whether a university degree or skills and experience are more important for getting a good job. Both sides have strong points, but I would say having skills and experience is far suoerior for some reaosn which are set out below.

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It is crucial to teach children in the right direction at an early age, some individuals suggest punishment is a potential tool for helping them learn effectively, I strongly agree with this notion. In the following paragraphs, the advantages and possible types of punishments will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

It is crucial to teach children in the right direction at an early age, some individuals suggest punishment is a potential tool for helping them learn effectively,and Istrongly agree with this notion. In the following paragraphs, the advantages and possible types of punishments will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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