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In the past employees worked for small businesses but now many are working for large businesses. What are the advantages and dis advantages of this trend ?

It is thought by some that people in the past tended to apply for small companies instead of going to large businesses. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages will be outlined before reaching a conclusion.
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In some countries, the number of shootings increase becausee many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are countries around the world where we have seen an increased number of shootings than before, and many think that the primary reason behind this is that many people these days keep weapons like guns and pistols at home; however, I disagree with this statement because there are other reasons for this scenario as well which I shall discuss in my essay.
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in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. some people say that an aging population creates problems for government. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. does advantage outweigh disadvantage

In the majority of nations, life expectations are now witnessing an upward trend. The writer advocates that despite the benefits of valuable advice from the older generation, the drawbacks of financial burden on the healthcare system and the lack of employees outweigh the positive side.
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Big family has more benefits than living in small family.

If we give a question to people about living in a big or small family, many might say that living in a big family has more facilities cause of the close contact with relatives. But from my own perspective, it is more comfortable and more convenient to live in a small family due to space and independence.
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People living in big cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller town?

In recent decades, people living in big cities have faced myriad problems and difficulties, such as traffic congestion and increased pollution, including decreased air quality and noise pollution. However, moving citizens from large cities to smaller towns is not the only solution.
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Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environments. Why is this the case? How can they be encouraged to go out?

Nowadays, people do not spend their free time doing recreation like hiking and climbing in nature. The primary reason for this is that technology is developing so that outdoor activities are getting more expensive, but the government can take some measures in order to encourage young people to spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor diversions.
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Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider the countryside to be more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people would argue that raising children in the urban would be beneficial, while others say that the rural area would be a better option. Although, living in the countryside would be suitable for children's health conditions because of less contamination, children, by living in the cities would have access to better facilities.
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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

It is argued that pursuing study in another country gives more benefits rather than studying in their own country. This essay will elaborate on the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.
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In many countries people of all ages do sports and exercises a lot. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvanatges? Give reason for your answer and include examples from your own experience and knowledge.

In this modern world, exercise and sports have become an integral part of many countries lifestyle. Some believe that time spent on such activities has no major advantages, as it wastes their time and hampers productivity. However, based on my experience, I believe that all these physical activity trends have huge advantages as they promote a healthy life.
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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many children use their phones for hours each day. In my opinion, this behavior is driven by several reasons and has negative impacts on their physical as well as mental health.
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The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

Urbanisation is a major challenge for cities in the contemporary world. The main cause of this problem is the fact that cities offer a great opportunity for having a job and a better living. One effective solutions to deal with this is to start opening new factories in rural areas.
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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

We should pay admission to entrance some museums, while other museums are cheap. I believe the main benefits are more substantial.
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In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

When I was young, robots were toys for children. Robots nowadays are different. They increased productivity, efficiency, quality and consistency. As a result, there is a trend that they are going to take over most of humans’ work in the future. In this essay, I am going to discuss what are the advantages and drawbacks of having robots complete tasks for men and why I think the advantages of that outweigh the disadvantages.
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News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

It is undeniable that news has significant impacts on society in various aspects, such as economics. People read news for different purposes depending on their interests. This essay will elaborate on the reason why news is so important to people, why bad news gains more attention compared to good news and lastly, why reporters should not focus only on good news.
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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having part-time jobs. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.

Nowadays, more and more high school students are working part-time. While part-time jobs help these students earn money and experience, specific negative impacts on their grades, free time, and potential risks ought to be taken into account.
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Students nowadays spend their free time less actively than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, teenagers are becoming lazier and do less exercise than in many decades ago. Therefore, there is a need to add more mandatory sports lessons in schools for students. In this essay, I will present reasons for not being persuaded by this statement.
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Some people think visual images(like photographs and videos) can tell information more accurately in a news story. Others think they are not reliable sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

According to some, news stories can depict facts correctly by showcasing photographs and clips, whereas the other half believes that it is not trustworthy. With the increased popularity of social media and new AI technologies which can alter any picture, it's quite difficult to differentiate real vs fake visual stories. Hence, I believe visual proofs cannot be considered reliable nowadays. However, I will analyze both these viewpoints and provide my reasoning for such an opinion.
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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Oil and gas have been the most prominent sources of energy for various industries like automobiles, electricity production, etc. In recent times, there has been a significant increase in the global demand for oil and gas. The increasing demand but limited supply of oil and gas is popularizing the idea that the undiscovered parts of the world should be explored to get more access to these resources. Although I agree that these undiscovered areas might prove to be a great resource for oil and gas, at the same, it can be detrimental to our earth’s natural diversity.
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In some countries, the number of shootings increase becausee many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some people that the rise of gun possession by the public has led to numerous shootings in society. I slightly agree with this matter and the reasons will be outlined in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.
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Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

Technology is flourishing in leaps and bounds in every field and therefore, there has been a constant decline in manpower. It is an undeniable fact that robots are replacing humans. I will discuss the effect of the aforementioned statement and conclude my opinion in the following passages.
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