IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5. Page 325

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football, while other people thinuk that taking part in individual Sports like Tennis Or swimming is better .discuss both view and give your opinion

In the modern era, there are a lot of varieties of sports has been introduced. Some people assert that playing in a group team is more beneficial. While some assert that taking part in individual sports like: tennis, swimming, batminton and others are better. As i am an extrovert person, so I am in a favour of the former view and in this essay i will discuss both sides of arguments with relevant examples.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that it is the responsibility of parents to instruct their children on how to become valuable contributors to society, while others are of the opinion that school is a more suitable place to learn this. This essay will discuss both viewpoints, and personally, I support the latter opinion.

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People in many countries spend more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families?

Recently, there has been an increasing number of populations spending most of their time far away from their families. Probably, there are many potential reasons for this occurrence and its inevitable consequences on an individual as well as the immediate family will be discussed in this essay.

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Government around the world are spending billions in support of space programs. This money would be better spent on research into improvements in human health. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the ministry around the globe are expense their allocations to support space explorations. However, some people argue that it is better to spent on educational purposes, add comma, especially in human medicine. Despite all the advantages of understanding human lifes, I strongly agree that space programs are more important rather than human medicine.

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The world's resources are being consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?

Nowadays, there is an increasing rate of resource consumption. However, this phenomenon become a threat to society. In this essay, I will examine the dangers of this situation and propose some solutions.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. discuss both this view and give your own opinion.

Modern technology requires graduation. Some argue that institute students should study their favourite disciplines or ones that will assist them in the future, including science and technology. However, both viewpoints along with my preference will be explained further.

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An increasing number of people want to buy clothes, shoes and other items produced by famous international brands. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

Today’s world is growing at a faster pace with technology that is eradicating international barriers. Today, any product can be purchased and shipped to your doorstep. In my opinion, this has a negative effect on the overall development of the country.

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Some people think new homes need to be built with private outdoor space such as a garden, yard, or balcony. Do you think this is more advantageous or more disadvantageous?

Nowadays, New types of infrastructure are inaugurated especially by an engineer to make an exorbitant city . Few masses concept that if they make stylish buildings in a particular place, it will give more benefit to them whereas, some opine that it will not be better for the upcoming generation. In my opinion, the houses should not be in the park or agriculture . I intend to analyse briefly the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays.

It is commonly argued that some bosses want to contact the employees all the time even on their days off. (template) that the disadvantages of this statement outweigh the advantages.

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Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do benefits of this outweigh the drawbackss?

Due to the rising awareness of the essential educational foundation, many students desire a more advanced and suitable major even though have to study far from home. Although the topic creates conservational arguments, I do believe that having a chance to study in another location brings more benefits than disadvantages.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue their work. To what extent do you agree?

Mostly all creative person earns too little in terms of wages, which is why it becomes necessary for the authorities to back them. Up to a certain level, I support this idea, which I will mention further.

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The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by providing at least six years of free education for each child, so that all children can read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the face of adversity that third-world countries suffer from poverty and education, they strive to overcome these obstacles by providing free education for children for a period of 6 years. From my perspective, I am firmly in favor of this solution.

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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s time, Television is one of the major sources of entertainment among people. Increased televising of violent programs is considered to have a negative impact on children’s behaviour. I totally agree with the statement since, children are influenced by what they see.

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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that nations where people work for long hours are more economically successful. This essay totally disagrees with that statement because Western countries do not have long working hours and long working hours produce stress and exhaustion.

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It is better for young to get an advice from old people than young people. do you agree or disagree?

It has always been argued that it is a better thing if children get knowledge from senior people as compared to their young peers. I totally agree with this given statement and this essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?

It is argued that some individuals have jobs that last only for a couple of months and spend the rest of the year doing other activities. This essay totally agrees with this statement because these people enjoy what they do and also they have less stress

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Before a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

In today's time, the net has become the major necessity in everyone's life. In addition to this, when Internet came into the market, it was very difficult for humans to trust because it created a lot of problems at that time but eventually the Technology as evolved over the period of time and I strongly believe that there were a lot of problems in the beginning of the Internet evolution.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Overpopulation is considered as one of the most challenging issues nowadays for the humankind. One of the main causes of which supposed to be an uncontrolled birth rate. I completely agree that the increasing number of the society is the main issue that humankind is facing

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The intrnet has brought sea change in the way inforamtion is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. what are the most serious problems linked to the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

With the advent of the internet it is safe to say that our lives have been changed entirely. Although a lot of these changes are for the better, it has presumably caused a few serious problems too. Since the new era of social media, we are being drifted apart from our friends and family and furthermore, being dragged into the endless sea of online posts. Also, these posts could be made by a thief instead of a scientist, trying to steal your money. However, with enough education, we can prevent these problems from happening.

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More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

As time goes by, there are many people who want to own a lot of items and goods by buying in modern society. Particularly, most younger people always are willing to buy it immediately if it is possible. In the end, we are influenced a lot by some reasons. Some people argue that this phenomenon has a profound negative impact on our generation. And I personally agree with this statement.

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