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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people believe a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job. Others believe that a good working environment is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views when it comes to working; While some people believe that more income is the main reason for choosing a job, others, with different ideas, believe that the most important factor is a good vibe in the workplace. Despit the fact that income is important, I would argue that a good environment is a top priority in a job.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing . Do you agree or disagree ?

Recently, the rapid increase in the number of online orders has led people to think that most markets and shopping centres in cities will be closed in the future.

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In many counties around the world,rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is positive or a negative devlopment ?

Nowadays, many people from the countryside tend to move to modern and big cities to live. Some people suppose it will make the population of the rural areas decline strongly. In my perspective, I strongly agree with this statement and I am going to explain more specifically in this essay.

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Report research suggests that the majority of criminals who were sent to prison would commit crimes when set free. IV) Why has it happened? What should be done to solve this problem?

The enactment of laws aimed at curbing anti-social behavior underscores society’s commitment to maintaining order, with prisons serving as a pivotal institution in this endeavor. However, there is still a headache problem for the public that those criminals would commit crimes again, causing many crises and harm to the masses. Thus, it is essential to analyse the reasons why criminals will commit a crime again and how to solve that issue.

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In many countries, the rate of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with this?

In contemporary society, crime is one of the most considerable concerns and the rates of it have an upward trend. This essay will discuss some reasons for this problem and provide solutions to this.

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People face a lot of difficulty in giving a speech or presentation in public. If the children are being taught in schools, about how to give speech in public, would it be better. How important is it to learn how to speak in public? Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give relevant examples

Individuals find great difficulties in public speaking ,whereas, if students are being taught it at the school level will there be an improvement in it .Generally, learning how to speak in public creates career opportunities and it makes life easy . Hence, this writer is in strong agreement with the captioned statement.

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Many people are afraid to leave their home because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crimes but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

Recently, it has been a hot topic, due to the frequently crimes people are terrified to leave home.

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Some people believe that life in a large city is becoming more and more arduous, while the life in villages is much more beneficial. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The twenty-first century is said to be the century of competition because of rising competition

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With the improvements in today's health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a conventional wisdom that, with the upgrade of the health industry in the modern world, people are obliged to care for the drastically uplifted quantity of the elderly. This essay agrees that modern society is absolutely able to tackle the increased number of elderly people and that the only way to facilitate this process is to gradually increase the funds for health care.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether parents should teach young students how to behave in order to be good citizens in our society or schools should teach it. Both sides of opinions will be discussed in the essay, followed by my perspective on this question.

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some people work for the same organisation all their working life. others think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is universally accepted that some argue that working in the same collaboration for their entire lives. However, there are those who say that it might be better if people change their organisation. This essay will examine both perspectives and outline supporting reasons throughout the following paragraphs.

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Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, traffic congestion and water pollution. Do you think that governments should impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict today’s tourism industry? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As we know, tourism cannot be separated from ecology-damaging impacts that are supposed to be refused and evaluated. Several aspects of this management are contributing to decreasing the ecosystem quality all over the world. Nowadays, even nature sightseeing tourism could contribute to damaging itself from the transportation that is used by tourists to get there.

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Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

When individuals achieve it is because of hard work. Luck is not related to advance. While some people claim if people succeed in their fields, they have luck in achievement. My opinion is irrelevant with luck.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a controversial question about how much time teenagers should spend on education. Some individuals believe that young generation needs to have full-time before 18 years old. This essay will discuss this idea and propose my point of view.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

Many people guess that robots are becoming more and more essential in our lives now.The writer of this essay believes that learning and housekeeping can use automatic machines for help in the future and this is a negative development due to the high charge.

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Some people think that the use of mobile (cell) phones should be banned in public places such as in libraries and shops and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, with the development of technology, phones have become inseparable from people. However, some people think mobile should not allowed in public areas. In my opinion, I partially agree that mobile phones should be banned in public places.

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some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country Task DISCUSES BOTH GROUP AND SAY YOUR IDEA

Some individuals argue in favor of mandatory work in a specific study location , While some individuals champion the freedom for people to work in various countries. Personally, I align with the latter perspective

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some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country Task :

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With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for these resources in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As the world’s demand for oil and gas soars, the exploration of these resources in remote and untouched areas is a contentious issue. The question is whether the benefits of such exploration outweigh the potential drawbacks.

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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

Some people believe a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job. Others believe that a good working environment is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing . Do you agree or disagree ?

In many counties around the world,rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is positive or a negative devlopment ?

Report research suggests that the majority of criminals who were sent to prison would commit crimes when set free. IV) Why has it happened? What should be done to solve this problem?

In many countries, the rate of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with this?

People face a lot of difficulty in giving a speech or presentation in public. If the children are being taught in schools, about how to give speech in public, would it be better. How important is it to learn how to speak in public? Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give relevant examples

Many people are afraid to leave their home because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crimes but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

Some people believe that life in a large city is becoming more and more arduous, while the life in villages is much more beneficial. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

some people work for the same organisation all their working life. others think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

Some people think that the use of mobile (cell) phones should be banned in public places such as in libraries and shops and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country Task DISCUSES BOTH GROUP AND SAY YOUR IDEA

some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country Task :

With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for these resources in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news.They get news about the world through the internet. Is this a positive or negative development?