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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

Whether it is TV or the hoardings on the roadside, advertising has become a part of our lives. advertisement is a powerful and persuasive medium. I believe the beneficial effect of ads overpowers the detrimental ones.

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There are many things that motivate people at work. What do you think is the best motivation at work?

While working at a company or any business, plenty of employees enjoy the benefits of their jobs. In a well-managed workplace, blue collars or white collars rapidly improve themselves as they get to help others and sufficient salary. That is why, they obtain job satisfaction which is linked to these issues. Focusing on the same topic with your team contributes to a successful business career. This essay will analyze certain benefits of salary since I reckon that the higher financial situation of people outweighs all the cons

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Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Many people believe that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. However, others think there are more effective methods. In this essay, I will explore both views before giving my opinion.

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Some suggest than young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the itadvantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

Nowadays lots of students intend to work when they are at school before they prepare to start university life. To some extent, I think there are many advantages for those who get a task at this stage, and I want to discuss both sides of this point.

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Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people believe reading the news in a newspaper is the best option, others believe other forms of media are superior. Although there are many benefits to reading the headlines in a newspaper,other forms of journalism are just as valuable. This essay will explore both perspectives and offer insight into each approach, ultimately forming an opinion on the matter.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of globalization?

Globalization is unquestionably one of the most prevalent and worrying aspects in any society. Of course, it is noticeable that this controversial topic of debate has both advantages and disadvantages. Nevertheless, in this ,essay I will discuss both sides of this upcoming trend.

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Housing is essential for people. Some argue that the government should offer free housing for people who cannot afford it. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people who have difficulty buying a house. Some people believe that it is the government's responsibility to offer free houses for people who cannot afford it. In fact, I side with those who believe that the government needs to provide free housing for citizens for two main reasons.

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In the past it was only possible to contact people at home by letter or telephone. Nowadays, mobile devices mean that we can communicate with people anywhere and at any time. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Before the 21st century came, Writing letters or calling the telephone had been the only effective methods that could be used for communication. In the epoch of rapid development of science and technology, a vast number of mobile devices, such as smartphones, smartwatches, laptops, and tablets, have played an imperative role in human conservation. This is because these handheld devices can allow individuals to chat with someone according to their will. The essay will list some cons and pros about the social phenomenon, and do a comparison between both.

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In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective way of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens with a country's past?

In the world , each country has its own dress and costumes. People think that traditional clothes are important for remembering our past ,actually that is true costumes are one part of doing this but not the most important, as we shall see.

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In many cities, there is a lack of space to develop and as a result, in order to modernize, old buildings are demolished and replaced with new buildings. What are the disadvantages of knocking down old buildings? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

With constant development in urban areas, our disposable spaces in the city limit are gradually becoming insufficient, for further construction, some obsolete buildings suggested to be destroyed. While knocking down buildings might lead to traffic jams and ruin the historical heritage, I still believe such disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages.

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What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by the government and individuals to solve this problem.

It is often considered that plastic pollution has adverse effects on the environment and the government should take measurable steps in order to tackle this issue. This essay will further examine the problems and causes of this issue and in the end, the solutions to tackle this issue will be provided.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel tor a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

In some places around the world, youngsters are supported to find some knowledges and experiences such as working or travelling after they graduate from high school. This assay will provide both advantages and disadvantages of this statement and give some reasons of the options.

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Some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy too difficult to learn, so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Are any of the courses learned by children necessary? There are schoolchildren who have some difficulties in learning some lessons like mathematics and attitude, and these matters are on the curriculum of the schools and they should be taught. I believe that, although everyone has to learn these subjects somehow, it should not be a must for the advanced matched of these courses.

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In many countries, young people are choosing to go to universities abroad rather than studying locally. Is this a positive or a negative development.

In today’s world, young learners prefer to pursue their higher education in foreign universities rather than in their own lands. While it has certain drawbacks, I would argue that it is a positive development as job security and high living standards are the best opportunities for a person’s life.

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Shortage of houses has become a severe problem in the cities today and only the government can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this.

Nowadays people are adjusting to the new advancements and amenities ,however there are some consequences of living in a cutting edge environment ,lack of houses is the biggest issue in the cities which seems to be addressed and could only be resolved by the government. I believe this problem can not only be solved by the state but also by society as a whole.

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The advantages of robots doing the basic serving functions in the entertainment, leisure and retail sectors of the economy outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The development of automation, specifically robots, in recent years has replaced human involvement in various sectors, such as entertainment, leisure, and retail. It is, therefore, believed that the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks. While I agree that robots have brought dramatic advantages to these sections, I do not think they are sufficient to make up for the disadvantages.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

There is a growing trend towards taking a gap year prior to entering tertiary education among school leavers in certain parts of the world. But it is true that practice does not have its own advantages, I would argue that the benefits of going to effort or travelling before one embarks on college far outweigh these disadvantages.

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Nowadays, as a part of education process, students work at a company for a short period of time without pay. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's society, the education sector plays a vital role in improving the lives of people. In the education process, students need to be enrolled in internships. This process has its own advantages and disadvantages while its benefits outweigh its demerits. This essay will explore why it holds more significance than drawbacks.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? GIve reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words

In the current fast-paced world, many people are suffering to live with low income. So, every employee is targeting on handsome package to spend their lives happily. I totally agree that a huge salary is required more than job satisfaction nowadays.

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he use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The debate whether the use of mobile phones should be banned in some places is long been a debate. Some people believe that mobile phone is antisocial just like smoking therefore it should be prohibited in certain places. But I disagree with this argument.

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