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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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In their advertising, bussinesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is a common trend today, that companies highlight the new features of their products that make them stand apart from the rest. This is often used as a marketing strategy to attract the attention of customers and propel them into buying their products. In my opinion, the emphasis on novelty in a company's product has both positive and negative impacts. On a positive note, companies gain more attention to their products and customers are often enticed by their product's distinct characteristics. In contrast, businesses can deceive their buyers by making claims regarding the innovations of their products that are not true and if these are not well examined, can eventually lead to harm.

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Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city,while others think that bicyles are better. Discuss both points if view and give your opinion.

Nowadays, due to the increasing traffic jams, some percentage of people feel that cars are the best way to commute within a city while others think bicycles are better. I believe, using a bicycle is a better way of commuting in a city. We will discuss these points in more detail in the below paragraphs.

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CARING FOR CHILDREN IS PROBABLY THE MOST IMPORTANT JOB IN ANY SOCIETY. BECAUSE OF THIS, ALL MOTHERS AND FATHERS SHOULD BE REQUIRED TO TAKE A COURSE THAT PREPARES THEM TO BE GOOD PARENTS.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS VIEW?

To create a good balance between job and caring for offspring. It is said that veterans must join the caring kid collection. I also believe that the above given a suggestion is fruitful for both children and Parents. Due to this a minor become Healthy whereas they can work efficiently. However, if they live with their patriarch, joining such a training degree is less important.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the controversial issue that our universe has faced is demolishing the newspaper or printed books and prepare practical infrastructure for Internet in order to increase people welfare for investigating and researching their news. In my opinion, it will bring positive point for individuals.

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Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills, with the advancement of technology, we will witness many teenagers prefer to use mobile phones for a long time also I think so this topic will be detrimental for them, especially on their literacy skills, this essay will check this matter.

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CARING FOR CHILDREN IS PROBABLY THE MOST IMPORTANT JOB IN ANY SOCIETY. BECAUSE OF THIS, ALL MOTHERS AND FATHERS SHOULD BE REQUIRED TO TAKE A COURSE THAT PREPARES THEM TO BE GOOD PARENTS.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS VIEW?

To create a good balance between job and caring for offspring.it is said that veterans must join the kid caring collection . I also believe that the above given suggestion is fruitful for both children and Parents. Due to this a minor become Healthy whereas they can work easily.but somehow if they live with their patriarch joining such training degree is having less important

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In many situations, people who break the law should be warned instead of punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.

It is considered that, in some conditions, people are not supposed to be charged because of the infringement of rules, they should be given a stark warning alternatively. Personally, I would like to subscribe to the opinion. In this essay, I will measure some particular factors regarding the statement and exert my explanation.

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Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the contemporary world, a large group of people insist that PhD or university diploma are essential

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every yong person how to be a good parent Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent

It is believed by some people that the good concept is schools should be taught every teenager how to be a good mom and dad. I totally agree with this notion and the following essay will argue why it is necessary and also, will describe the bits of knowledge a person requires when it comes to being a parent.

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Organized tours to remote areas and community are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?

It is true that the number of tourists travelling to regional sites is growing currently. However, as any phenomena that occur in the world, this trend brings both positive and negative consequences to not only local inhabitants but also to their surrounding environment.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. -what are the reasons for this behaviour? -what action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

In the contemporary world, it is underestimated the value of saving rather than spending. Moreover, some people get dept by purchase unnecessary or unaffordable stuff and it has become a huge social problem. I will explore the reasons for this phenomenon and how to prevent this problem.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Due to the development of the technology, there are many options for people to choose whether to read printed publications or free online resources. In my opinion, I firmly disagree with the statement that nobody will pay for printed books or newspapers since they have cheaper online resources to choose.

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Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn the language of it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Many are of the belief that, finding a piece of knowledge about a culture is related to their language and if we want to know new culture have to learn their language. While others disagree with this sentence. In this essay, I will discuss this idea then followed by reasons from my point of view.

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The reason that most individuals are in debit is due to the overuse as well as irresponsible use of credit cards. Banks should not issue credit cards unless they are completely sure of an individual's ability to pay back their debits. To what extent do you agree with this?

The majority of the population is suffering from debt because they do not save money and spend their money irresponsibly with credit cards. Although some think that banks should not allow individuals who have no ability to pay back their debts to own credit cards, others do not agree with this topic. In this essay, I will elaborate on both sides and give my opinion at the end.

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Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Smartphones are contrasted with five requisites. Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. However, I firmly disagree about this opinion and I will explain a reason in the following paragraph.

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Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

In this era of modernization shows that this topic become more major problem's for youth who? Using most of times into smartphones and see a bad impact on their studies. However, I totally believe or agree with this statement because smartphones wasted their importance time apply watching videos and playing games without notice's value of time.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Nowadays, the duration of living in industrialized countries is getting longer. This essay will explore the issues that can be induced by this along with the possible solutions that might prevent them.

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Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion

It is argued that teaching in lecture halls to large numbers of students is outdated and that instead, these should take place exclusively on the internet. This essay disagrees with the above statement. The essay will first discuss how interaction between students and teachers is essential to the learning process, followed by a discussion of how demotivating learning online can be.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He / She would like your advice about finding a place to live. write an email to your firned. In your email describe where you lived when you were a student at a university recommend the best way for him / her for accommodation warn him / her of mistakes make when choosing accommodation

I hope this email finds you well. Great to hear that you have received an offer from ABC university. And, you will start your university life this September.

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Artists need an certain amounts of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should gave total freedom to express any thought and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that artists need a lot of freedom to express their creativity, so they should have maximum opportunity to express their ideas and thoughts. I totally disagree with such a view because absolute autonomy can be abused and an increase in crime rates can occur.

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