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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Nowadays, many people have to work longer time and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?

In the modern era, people have better working conditions like the workplace, work agreements, and work-life struggles such as mobbing rights, from the interviewing to losing their positions. Under the circumstances, it forces to companies try to provide more benefits to their employees by applying to expand work hours. In contrast, for employees, working longer causes more stress in the workplace. In my opinion, it does not work for companies

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problems and suggest some possible solutions.

Overweight among the young generation has introduced great issues throughout many continents.This essay will elaborate on the root cause and the impacts of weight gain on kids and provide some solutions.

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The government should ban smoking in public places , even though this would restrict some other people's freedom . Do you agree or disagree.

Although it is widely known that smoking is injurious to health, many still tend to smoke very often. While some have an opinion that the administration should forbid cigarette usage in common areas, others argue it might limit some folk's privilege. I agree with the former opinion and this essay will elaborate more on my view.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

Nowadays, the number of the young adult population is usually larger than that of elders in some nations. This has certain advantages in several areas and I personally believe that there will have fewer drawbacks compared to benefits.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It’s now debatable whether improved medical care plays an essential role in prolonging people’s life. In my opinion, unambiguously, the advantages here overweight the disadvantages.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to larger shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. In this a positive or negative development?

These days, many people tend to shop in enormous shopping malls or mega malls. It is an advantage to progress. Because they could be buying everything which need without going out to the shopping mall. But it has some disadvantages for local stores.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

This notion that which one of inherited characteristics or experiences and learned materials has more impression on our personality always has been a matter of debate between psychiatrists and other people. I think that influence of these factors is relative, and both can have a greater impact than each other based on the person him/herself. In the following, I am going to discuss my opinion comprehensively.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People migrate to non-native countries either because of jobs or for educational courses. I am of the opinion that living in a foreign country can sometimes cause some social & practical problems due to non-familiar language. We will discuss these points in detail further below.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I do not agree with this notion that the number of enrolled males and females in every field is supposed to be equal. In my opinion, there is no difference between both genders to some extent, but there are some physical and sex-related differences between men and women, and also sociological situations sometimes make a gender work or study in a field more than do the other one. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss my reasons comprehensively.

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People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable, but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a pity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certainly, people's lives have become more and more comfortable today due to their hard working and consumerist values, however, some feel pity that many traditions have been replaced and I generally agree with this view.

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With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion?

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether E-media replaced the printed format or not. There is no denying the fact that technology is increasingly becoming prominent in all aspects of life. I firmly agree and withstand the given notion. This essay will further elaborate on my visions in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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The use of cars and motorcycles causes transportation difficulty in cities. Why do people continue to use cars and motorcycles in city? What is the best way to solve this problem?

The extensive consumption of private vehicles is becoming increasingly serious on the planet. Although mankind's activities threaten many species, Their consequences can also be combated successfully. This essay looks at some of the troubles caused by the transportation and suggests some rectifications to the troubles in the forthcoming paragraphs

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Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in- store shopping . this a positive or negative development?

It is true that shopping has become more popular due to the arrival of new technology , online shopping benefit time saving , discount ,veraity of produch.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should be encouraged to question and offer criticisms on their teachers. Others think this will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The quality of education, nowadays, has improved due to the invention of the feedback system. While there are people who believe that asking questions and criticising teachers will improve the quality of education, I am of the opinion that this will reduce the value for teachers and respect towards them for several reasons.

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Some people think it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports is better like tennis and swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue playing individual sports such as tennis has more advantages. However, others myself included believing that attending company sports with a higher proportion of players such as football is more beneficial for individuals in long run. This essay shall examine both sides in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to the regional areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The prefecture in regional must be developed to make a better quality of life in rural areas. Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to regional areas. In the following paragraph, I will outweigh the advantages and disadvantages of this policy and express whether I support it or not.

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Water is in short supply in many countries of the world, but consumption of water by families is increasing. Why is this happening? What can be done to preserve water?

In the modern era, It is a well-known fact that water consumption has been increasing very high due to the family's daily needs. Therefore, a fair amount of experts believe that the consumption issue and scarcity are inevitable and have to be controlled. Hence, I would like to provide my viewpoints along with a few sets of examples to save water.

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Some people say that educational success depends most of the time on having a good teacher. Other say that attitude of students also matters? Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued that Teachers play an important role in the student's academic success, whilst others disagree and think it depends on a student's attitude to be successful. This essay will first look at why teachers are important academically and then we will discuss how being focused and having the right attitude is the way to be successful. This essay will discuss both views.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factor contributes to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

In the contemporary epoch, a vast number of individuals spend the majority of their productive life at work. Linked to this, occupation contentment is undoubtedly crucial.

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

the importance of leisure time for children was always debatable and has become more controversial among the people claiming that it should provide for toddlers while others reject this notion.the substantial influence of this notion has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years .

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