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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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The unlimited use of cars may causes many problems. What are those? Solution?

Cars that can be used unlimitedly by the public could cause many problems which I agree with because in my opinion even though cars can benefit the public who use them but the disasters that it brings can cause disadvantages too for the world.

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Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others,however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

It is a proverbial saying that "Health is Wealth" but in the modern world the topic of a Healthy Lifestyle often ignites a contentious debate about whether it is easier or difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle.In the forthcoming ,paragraphs we will discuss two viewpoints and then present my views on the topic.

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Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home? Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is often believed that kids can be educated pretty effectively by allowing them to enjoy popular TV programs both at home and in learning centres. I disagree with this aforementioned statement and think that children shouldn’t be granted to watch TV frequently either at home or school. This essay will portray my reasoning behind this disagreement.

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The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

"Melody is a gift of god", my teacher said once.

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It is common practice for some students to take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is usual among a few students that they take a small break before joining college instead they work or travelling. The main benefits of this is they can earn money for college fees and gain knowledge; however, the key drawback of this is they lose interest in studies and earn less in future. I think that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Every year many students graduates and look for better job opportunities; indeed, some businesses often notice that these newly graduated employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills that are vital for their company. However, the reason for this is a lack of practical knowledge and inadequate training which can be overcome by providing it either by the university or by firms.

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Most agree that we should be training children to recycle waste to preserve the Earth’s natural resources. However, some believe that it is parents who should teach their children to recycle waste, while others feel schools are more responsible.

When the amount of natural resources is limited and the importance of reusing them is obvious, there is an opinion that the main responsibility of teaching children to recycle waste belongs to their parents. Nevertheless, it's argued by some that it mostly should be made by schools. Even though the role of parents is important, in my view, this issue requires a more systematic approach which is only possible in schools.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case ? what can be done ?

Food security is one of the major concerns of today's world. While there are tremendous modern farming technologies, some people are still suffering famines. Population number and distribution of resources are two main causes of this problem. This essay will address in detail those reasons and discuss some solutions.

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IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE ADULTS ARE CONTINUING TO LIVE WITH PARENTS EVEN AFTER COMPLETING THEIR EDUCATION AND GETTING JOBS. DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWIEGH DISADVANTAGES.

offspring's love for their parents is a naturally gifted entity and has withstood the test of time. Some people believe that the trend of adults residing with their parents even after they have fulfilled their studies and started their careers has escalated over the years. From my perspective, this direction has plenty of benefits but a few side effects as well.

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IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE ADULTS ARE CONTINUING TO LIVE WITH PARENTS EVEN AFTER COMPLETING THEIR EDUCATION AND GETTING JOBS. DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWIEGH DISADVANTAGES.

Children's love for their parents is a naturaly gifted entity and has withstood the test of time. Some people believe that the trend of adults residing with their parents even after they have fulfilled their studies and started their careers has escalated over time. From my perspective this trend has plenty of but a few side effects as well.

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While there are various marketing strategies that a firm can adopt, the most effective one must be possessing a unique and desirable product.

As the market is expanding, resulting in increased competition, businesses must come up with innovative ways to increase sales and their presence in the customer’s mind. While there are various marketing strategies that a firm can adopt, the most effective one must be possessing a unique and desirable product.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been argued that, on average, people are likely to be less healthy in the future than they are now. The main reasons for this negative outlook are environmental pollution, poor diet, and the population's sedentary lifestyle. Despite the gravity of these problems, I believe that research and technological developments can help us turn the tide.

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IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE ADULTS ARE CONTINUING TO LIVE WITH PARENTS EVEN AFTER COMPLETING THEIR EDUCATION AND GETTING JOBS. DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWIEGH DISADVANTAGES.

Relationship of parents with their children is a god gifted entity. Some people believe that the trend of adults living with their parents has escalated over the time. While after they have fulfilled their studies and started their careers. From my perspective this trend has plenty of merits but a few side effects as well.

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In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers is important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

Communication structure plays a big part in how modern companies apply their policies internally. Successful organizations usually reach a top-level link between administrator and team which influences the results of the company in a positive way. That said, it is possible to affirm the relationship between successful organizations and the link between administrator and team is very important.

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Some people think that giving gifts and presents to friends and family is important to show them that we care. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that it is very critical to give friends or parents presents or simple gifts to show them our love . Others believe that there are many different ways to show them that we care instead of giving gifts. In my ,opinion I believe that there are better things to do to show our love rather than just giving presents , and in this essay I will explain why and draw up my own conclusion.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Using solar systems in our homes is more and more popular as an alternative source of electricity in many countries around the world. But we should take into consideration any new technology has pros and cons.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is difficult for teachers to be both popular (well-liked) and effective in helping students learn.

There is no doubt that a teacher plays a key role in the learning process of their students, and teaching effectively is by no means a simple task. It is not difficult, in my opinion, to be both educationally effective and well-liked by pupils, despite the fact that effective teaching requires tolerance, tenacity, and some difficulty. The majority of the time, popularity will help teachers become more successful, and these two traits do not contradict one another. In the section that follows, I will explain how being liked can improve students' educational experiences and why it is not difficult for teachers to be both liked and respected.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is difficult for teachers to be both popular (well-liked) and effective in helping students learn

There is no doubt that a teacher plays a crucial role in the learning process of students, and teaching effectively cannot be assumed to be an easy job by any means. Although the inherent nature of teaching effectively is ingrained with tolerance, persistence, and some difficulty, I strongly believe it is not hard to be both educationally effective and well-liked by learners. In most cases, popularity will help instructors be more effective, and these two characteristics do not contradict each other. In the following, I will elaborate on how being liked can improve students’ educational experiences and why it is not hard for teachers to be both at the same time.

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Teachers should assign daily homework to students Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that students have a lot homework, when they should do it in class with their professors to resolve their doubts. Personally, I believe that students should have time to disconnect their studies.I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

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Development in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is often considered that the contemporary era is an era of modernisation in which a rise in technologies leads to environmental issues. Whereas, some masses believe living simple life help mitigate nature problems. Meanwhile, few people argue that technology has the ability to resolve such obstacles. In my, an inclined globalisation help in the development of resources, thus it also causes side effect on mother earth. Thus this essay will elaborate on both views which leads to a logical conclusion.

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