IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5. Page 860

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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The growth of the online shopping will one day lead to the closure of shopping stores in cities. Do you agree or disagree with this.

In the present-day scenario, we are observing online shopping taking a major share in shopping. It has happened due to the growth of technology, which has led to a better virtual shopping experience. Other prevailing situations in the society like long work hours and busy schedules, have been helpful in online shopping grow. As an effect Individuals prefer online shopping rather than visiting shopping centres. Some believe it may eventually lead to closing down of the shopping stores in cities. In the below paragraph, we will discuss, how I disagree with said statement.

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These days in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers particularly in secondary schools.

Nowadays, the majority of academies, especially secondary ones, are suffering from a scarcity of teachers as more and more people do not seriously consider teaching as a career. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss specific reasons for the shortage of personnel in schools and provide worldwide solutions that could act as a deterrent.

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Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on environment, eating habit and families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The ready-made food sector is growing exponentially in the last couple of years and some sections of society raising concerns about the adverse impact it causing on the climate and eating patterns. I agree with this statement and will present my views in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People start to use examinations to assess the performance of students for a long time. Recently, some argue that the examination could be instead of the continual assessment like course work and projects could. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. I disagree with this view almost entirely. As far as effectiveness, efficiency are concerned, I strongly hold that examination is the best way of assessing a student’s performance.

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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, the breadwinner role in the family has changed, which means men are likely to be househusbands. There are several reasons for this phenomenon, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.

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Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in a job.

Many companies are giving utmost importance to social skills with top qualifications while employing candidates. I agree with the statement that social skills are equally important because globalization needs cross-cultural communication and inter-department communication within the organization is challenging.

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Some people believe that allowing chldren to make their own chices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Othar people believe that it is important for children to make decitions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The right of choosing things for children can have different effects. Nowadays, parents pay more attention to this issue more than before. While some people believe that if children are allowed to make their choices, they would be selfish, I personally believe that it can have significant positive effects in the future. In this essay, I will explain both views and my opinion.

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, traffic jam is a major challenge faced by almost all the big towns and cities. An increase in the volume of private vehicles and insufficient utilization of public transport facilities are the causes of this problem.

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses for communities in poorer countries. Why young people choose to do so? Who will benefit more: young people or the communities? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most young people spent time on work for the welfare of society. Especially, youth from wealthy nations are spending their time educating or helping the neighbourhood in poor countries without taking any pay. This essay will discuss the reasons for young people do so, and how the communities is being benefitted from the help.

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Some people think about learning a foreign language but cannot use it frequently. What are the difficulties that people face while learning a foreign language? What can be done to overcome them?

These days, it is popular for people to learn a foreign language, but not many people can use it on a regular basis. In this essay, I will discuss the obstacles in people’s foreign language learning process and propose several feasible measures to help learners overcome difficulties.

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These days,in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers,particularly in secondary schools.

Nowadays, schools, especially secondary one's,suffer from a scarcity of teachers as more and more people find teaching less attractive.In this ,essay low pay and a burden of the work are blamed for the reasons and a pay rise along with the appointment of teaching assistants will be given as the ways out.

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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In general, due to the ever-growing of current life’s fast pace, most of us nearly forget how to treasure, foremost, the memorable experience from the past. Moreover, according to the youths and a minority of middle-age persons, they frequently have the thoughts that any events related to the past bear no importance and should not be reminded at all. In my point of view, it is considered to leave the miserable past behind, however, learning from them is more vital and necessary.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

It is sometimes argued that the government should spend money to prevent health issues because it is more crucial than developing a treatment for disease and medication. I strongly agree with this idea, besides that, we must live a healthy lifestyle and be cautious of our daily living. It will be discussed in the following paragraph.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the 21st century, human life become more materialistic and complex. Moreover,people's way of modern life result large amount of used and unused products in our surroundings.In this essay, I will explain the real causes of wastage and government solutions for reducing this problem.

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ome people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowadays, it is important to use technology device to enable our life easy. some people say using the electrical appliance as the phone has many advantages as you can easily reach any person in a short time or ask for help from the right man. On the other hand, the misuse of these cells phone by offspring at the wrong date maybe affect their study or thinking. In this, an essay I will talk about the two-point of view and give an example from my experience.

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Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication f what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

Every people have hobby and interest. Some people think that hobbies and interests change day by day. Now people are very much interested in trends and fashions. In their leisure ,times they do different things that are new. I agree with the statement that, hobbies and interests change over time.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

It is argued that fume ingestion has a plethora of adverse side effects. However the overwhelming majority of individuals do not pluck up the costume. Many causes are appointed to this as well as communities are called to solve the issue. This essay will shed light on both causes and solutions as well as provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Today family members do not eat meals together. Why? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Due to the constant development and high requirements from society, people are striving to make ends meet and reach a higher status. In consequence, the majority of the population spend fewer hours with their families and there has been a decline in family grub. This essay attempts to outline some reasons and give an assessment for this trend.

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People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?

The more societies develop, the more people spend less time with their families. .This problem is caused by many reasons and brings a lot of effects to societies.

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Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

In modern societies, people tend to be more competitive. In my perspective, this is a positive trend, which affects a lot of individuals.

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