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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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research says more and more business training and business meeting are taking place online. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, businesses like other sorts of things are affected by advanced technology and the internet. Most of the jobs have become teleworking and most of the time, meetings are held by many applications and platforms which introduce every day to markets. however, there are some pros and cons in this issue, I am of the opinion that these implements can help people save their time effectively.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentence other, however believe there are better alternative way of reducing crime discuss both view and give your opinion ?

It the irrefutable that crime is a serious and growing problem in the world. nobody is born to be a criminal but some circumstances become such as that crime happened. Why do crime ? Several types of crime in the world. Some crimes there such as who punished by the government whether hard law made by lawmakers. Both the discussion should be properly clear reaching a conclusion.

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Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?

Shopping is one of the most popular activities of every generation, some may choose to buy things in a department store while others prefer to shop in the local markets. This essay will elaborate on the positive aspects of both options. Personally, I prefer shopping malls over local markets.

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The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , we need to minimize the total number of people who transport from their home to working place , educating students or shopping as a result of decreasing the number of public transportation in the town.I truly agree with this statement because this procedure will help the passengers reach their destinations as soon as possible ,and it going to protect the environment from air pollution .

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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is a fact that punishment cannot always stop criminals from committing more crimes. Several reasons might explain why these criminals break the law repeatedly and I believe that government can place these issues.

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Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others agree that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a notion that students should be given homework on a daily basis in order to be successful in their studies. Others believe that homework is not necessary. This essay with discuss the debate and explain why homework is important but should not be given every day.

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People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems of trying to achieve this goal and how can these problems be overcome?

Achieving a work-life balance has been a goal of many but few have obtained it. Attempting to achieve such a balance, however, is of difficulties and I will identify some problems of this attempt and suggest the possible solutions corresponding to these problems.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What are the causes of this problem and what are some solutions?

In some parts of the world, not only people are getting fat but also their health and workout conditions are declining. Eating too much fast food and a machinery lifestyle are the main reasons for obesity and consuming organic food and spending time in gyms are the two possible solutions for these problems.

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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed by many people that these days we have a lot of choices.to some ,extent I agree with this statement due to the reason that we have more improvements in technology and more and more people are involved in different sectors.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. do you agree or disagree? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Nowadays, more and more individuals prefer to watch movies which are produced in other countries rather than films which are produced in the local countries. I agree with this view because people who try to learn a foreign language or other culture prefer to watch foreign movies, as well as, I strongly believe that authorities should allocate money from the budget from film industries because earn more money and introduce their morals to other people.

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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas, coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion?

Consuming fossil fuels is considered as a significant reason for the climate crisis, which has been a widely-held concern worldwide for the last decades. Some people assert that consuming nonrenewable energy sources should be precluded and replaced with alternative energy sources, which I agree. However, this notion is not entirely straightforward, and there is a heated controversy over it.

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Some people say that the best way to imporve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others , however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

A healthy lifestyle is a lifelong gift a person can give to themself. It does not only improve the physical wellness of a person but also improves mental health. People believe in order to improve our health; we should be active in sports. However, there are other factors that affect our health. In this essay, I will discuss how we can keep a fit lifestyle through sports and other activities.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Accessing to the internet can bring some advantages to children. However, they can be affected negatively if they use a computer on a daily basis. I definitely agree with this statement as I think negative impacts on them are stronger. Hence, this essay will discuss them.

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Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think the government should give a mobile phone so that they can reduce the rate of unemployment. I strongly disagree with this statement as those can use it for the wrong purpose. This essay will discuss them.

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Some people say that it is beneficial for young people to visit different countries of the world, others oppose. Do you agree or disagree? Provide reasons and support them with your own examples.

There are different views about how can be beneficial for youngers to travel to different nations before they become adults . While others argue that it may have some obvious adverse consequences . Personally, I take the view that visiting foreign nations can be advantageous for youngers .

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

There are arguments about the impact of advertising on people’s purchasing habits today. A lot of people say that we will buy items which are not really helpful for us due to attractive advertisements, while others debate that through advertising, we may know new products which increase our quality of life. In my opinion, I agree with the second thought based on my experience.

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many doctors say that people in today's world do not do enough physical exercise. what do you think are the causes of this? what solutions are there to this problem?

At present, many physicians believe that people hardly exercise due to various reasons, such as laziness. Both government and companies could fix this issue by educating people about physical activities and providing them with a free gym membership.

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Some school leavers go travelling or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for their study?

The importance of going travelling or working for a short period of time for some school leavers was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject the notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked The controversy of the potential impact in recent years

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There are millions of vehicles on the road nowadays, and the number is predicted to increase in the future. Many argue that alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people insist that people should use more other types of transport except for cars, and regulations that restrict the possession and utilization of cars should be enforced today. I mostly agree with this claim because the increase in the number of cars has a negative impact on society as a whole in terms of economy and environment.

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views in the question whether that human would be more dependent or independent in the modern sociaty. This essay will dicuss both arguments and present my opinion.

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