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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

As we know, the education system in different countries differs. While in some countries young people have a flexible syllabus in others children have tremendous workload and are put under incredible pressure.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do u consider to be the major influence?

There are different researches on personality traits and the characteristics we are born with, that support our personality than any experience that we will gain in our life. It depends on the capacity we have and how supportive the special abilities to conquer the living.

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

Human activities are highly responsible for global warming. This essay will discuss the main causes of temperature rising including the excessive use of fossil fuels and plastic pollution. This essay will further suggest solutions to these problems including decreasing the consumption of fossil fuels and reducing the dumping of waste in sea.

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Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym/heath club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the last years, people tried to be more active and adopt a healthy lifestyle and there are a lot of them who prefer to join a gym while others prefer to do their own workout by doing more daily activities without joining a gym . In this essay ,I will write about these two choices and give my opinion.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

All over the world, it can be stated that the majority of society would love to visit zoos. However, someone could argue that there is no proper purpose for having a zoo. Analyzing the fact that the people can observe wild animals which are rare and dangerous from one place and having a chance of conservation on particular animal species will prove this.

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Nurses should write personal statement for nurse who is looking for job in the UK. To what extent do you agree or disagree

I am a dedicated and compassionate Registered nurse with career history in direct patient care, proven ability to remain calm under pressure and skilfully handle difficult patients and high-stress situations. Consistently developing strong relationships with patients and families through therapeutic communications and respectful attitude.

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It is said that travel broadens the mind. What can we learn by travelling to other countries? Should we first explore our own countries? What do you think?

Everyone likes to explore the world. There is a notion regarding the significance of travelling.In this ,essay I will explain the benefits of visiting different countries and why people should have explored their own country instead of international tours.

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It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We live in an age when many of us are dwelling in our working hours too much. Particularly, people who had a high status of their renowned usually find themselves diving in their endeavour. Consequently, how many points they can spend time concerning about their surrounding people and themselves? Unfortunately, they are standing out of the “work-life balance”, which is a conception of many advisors for attaining a healthy lifestyle. This essay is an exploration of the reason why some people are choosing to follow that. And I believe that people should try to maintain the appropriate distribution to their social activity and job.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation’s history. However, some people think they should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the old buildings. While some claim that the government should apply discipline to protect these towers on the grounds that they are part of a country's history, the opposite makes a statement that these should be abolished in order to make room for new ones. While this is valid to some extent, I would contend that maintaining these old buildings is of significance, but this does not mean progress should stop.

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Nowadays companies and other organizations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. What is your viewpoint on this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, many companies either private or public organizations have a working tradition to encourage their officers to wear a uniform. In my opinion, employees should wear the uniform at least once a week, and wear independently any of formal clothes on other days. In this essay, I will explore benefits and drawbacks of using a uniform at an office, and provide my idea toward the statement.

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The development of tourism contributed English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

There is no doubt that tourism is a vital aspect to the economic welfare of every nation. However, this is also causing English to become the most important language around the globe. A stratum of society believe that this is forcing English to become the only global language for communication. In this essay, I will discuss the benifits and drawbacks of this aspect.

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Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The emergence of modernization has vastly spread the availability of the web across the world; therefore, in today's world, certain inhabitants persist that accessibility of the network besides being available, should be made free of cost by the authorities. Whereas, few of other people believe that usage of the information technologies is not our right ,thus should not be payless.Both the statements will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that the Internet is responsible for destroying social skills of teenagers and young adults. Why do you think the Internet is seen as dangerous in this way and what can we do to make sure that it does not harm the social development of teenagers and young adults?

These days, the number of young people who use the internet is growing. Many persons think that this development can bring some harmful impacts to their communication skills and in some ,cases it can devastate their human interactions ability . I believe that there are certain causes to this issue and it can be solved by taking some special measures .

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Does the advantage of this for individuals outweigh the disadvantage for the environment?

In recent times, individuals prefer to purchase their own cars and utilize for their daily uses instead of using other modes of transport. This essay agrees that the negative impact this phenomenon imposes on the environment outweighs the advantages that car owners achieve, and the reasons will be elucidated further.

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Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; others, however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Technologies became a substantial part of humanity in past decades. While the first half of the population deem that phones should be used just for private reasons, the other half argues that cell phones should be mainly needed in work. From my perspective, using this gadget for personal purposes can influence citizens in a negative way. This essay will analyse both views.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Education is a very important part of life and this should be completed before starting work or a job. Education must be an inevitable part of any individual and everyone has the right to complete his or her study.

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Task 2 In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

These days , there are a lot of youngers do not put more attention to watch and read news despite the useful benfits of this practice .I believe that this issue has certain causes and can be solved by taking some special measures .

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Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents.what is the reason for this?what problem can this cause?

In this present world,work is the most important part of our life because money is an important role for their children. The number of families that is both mom and dad working is constantly on a rise. So, parents can not keep in touch with children and as a result ,yong people get negativity effects. The reason and cause will be thoroughly analysed and explained in this essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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Which is the most recognisable county indoor opinion?

DEDICATED FANS of Google Street View, which lets users explore cities and towns around the world via panoramic street-level imagery, have come up with dozens of applications for the tool, from house-hunting, to holiday planning, to experimental art. The most entertaining use of the service may be “Geoguessr”, a game created in 2013 by Anton Wallén, a Swedish IT consultant. The premise of Geoguessr is simple: players are dropped at random places in Google Street View, without any information about their locations. They are then scored based on how well they guess where they are.

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Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is supposed by many that the international sporting events are the golden chances for the organizing country to showcase their key aspects , whereas, others think that it is a wastage of money. I am an advocate of the opinion that it facilitates a place to portray their own distinct feature in front of the entire globe.

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