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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Poverty has become one of the major challenges for all nation ,especially for developing countries. In this essay, I am going to discuss some reason for poverty, followed by some suggestion which can help poorly to overcome their poverty.
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Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Do you agree or disagree?

This is a serious issue to outline that whether leisure is making people lazy or openng their doors of creativity. I strongly agree to the second point and I will be mentioning my points in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that these days, traffic and housing issues have become more serious in a number of megacities. Many people argue that relocating big corporations, factories and their workers to the rural areas could tackle these problems. In my opinion, I totally agree with this view.
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Effects of size heterogeneity, feeding/fasting strategy and stocking density modulation on body performance and cannibalism rate of Persian sturgeon (Acipenser persicus) larvae

Growth performance, survival or/and cannibalism rate of larvae are directly affected by feeding strategies, hatchery management, etc. (Mohler, King, & Farrell, 2000; Deng et al., 2003; Leu et al., 2018; Uriarte et al., 2019) and thus knowing these key factors for sturgeon larviculture helps farmers to provide an appropriate condition. There are, though, a few studies on how sturgeon larviculture can be influenced by feeding/fasting, size sorting and stocking density. It is the first time given cannibalism nature of Persian sturgeon larvae has been reported. The growth and survival rate drawn from this study have been proved by previous documents regarding fish feeding frequency.
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Although more and more people use public transport, some city streets are still overcrowded with traffic. How can this problem be solved? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

These days, increasingly numbers of people have started to use public transport, but there is still the problem of traffic jams on some urban areas. As long as there are private cars, I guess the problem will persist. This essay will look at the ways in which the government and individuals could tackle this issue.
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Childhood is most important period for everybody and child learns many things during this time. Some others say child’s future and career are only built after the completion of their school. What do you think? Give examples to support.

Computers and the internet have changed the lives of humans in both workplace and homes. This essay suggests that the advantages like socialising and time saving outweigh the primary disadvantage that is isolation among the family members.
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Diet, not exercise, is the most important element in maintaining one’s health. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use details and reasons to support your point of view.

Maintaining health is probably one of the most important things in our life. Obviously, nobody wants to be sick or in a bad health condition. Many believe that diet without exercise is enough to stay healthy and fit. However, I completely disagree with this view.
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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.

The crime rate is rapidly increasing Globally day by day, some individuals think that,to minimize the crime is by sentencing them by lengthy jail term to convict. Whereas another opinion that other procedures to demolish the crime rate is better.After enlightening both the view I am thinking that sentencing them for a longer period is the best way to reduce the crime rate.
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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

For the past few years a tremendous increase in the population has been observed. Some believe that population expansion is the prime concern of the mankind. I agree with it completely. In the following paragraphs, I will put forth my views in detail.
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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

People used to go shopping only to get daily needs. However, nowadays, shopping has become the favorite leisure activity for many people. While there have been debates over the two opposite statements, in my opinion, while shopping is not only about purchasing goods, and we can also find quite a great enjoyment in it, the disadvantages of it is still to be reckoned with.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music binds people and some even say it bring generations and cultures together. I fully agree with the opinion and will substantiate it with certain examples.
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Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success, others believe that there are other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Happiness is just a state of mind and a person is solely responsible for it. Nowadays, the majority of people believe that money is an important element for euphoria, whereas others opine this very notion and think there are other ways to find joy. However, I support the latter view and the following paragraphs would elucidate both standpoints with apt specimens and justifications.
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Plastic shopping bags contributie to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

It is an irrefutable fact that the environment is getting degraded day by day due to humans daily habits.There are many different schools of thought about banning plastic bags .Although, there are many other reasons for water and soil pollution, ,,however I think that the most common root cause of polluting these two resources is plastic.In my opinion, I support the idea of banning plastic bags.I will discuss this in my upcoming paragraphs.
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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

College Education is very important to one’s future though some people say that others have become successful without going to college. In this essay, I will discuss that higher education is essential to become successful in life.
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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Overweight is a disease that increases the amount of fat in the body. Nowadays, this kind of disease is more common in children. It is also known as obesity which causes several serious health-related issues to the body. Let us discuss both causes and effects related to overweight.
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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

It is argued that a better life was lived when technology was not so advanced. I totally disagree with that statement because many activities have been made in a shorter time due to modern electronic devices. Besides this, evolution in industrial processes is creating products with more quality.
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Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

Taxation policies on food and beverages have usually arise discussions around its fairness. The latest one, regarding goods with more sugar, is driving leaders around the world to face criticism among greetings. This essay will discuss both points of views and argue why, in my opinion, this is a good policy.
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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

It is true that the majority of people who work do not exercise properly, even when they have free time. As a consequence, many health problems are emerging nowadays. This essay discusses what could be the reasons why people do not exercise, and pinpoints some possible solutions to this problem.
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Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

With the global advancement in technology and transport, there has been widespread community connect resulting in a large number of tourists visiting cultural heritage properties and tourist attraction of various countries. In this essay, an attempt is made to highlight the necessity of increased prices for the foreign tourist than the locals.
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Many people today find it difficult to balance the demands of their work and personal life. What are the causes of this situation, and what can individuals and employers do to reduce the problem?

In current days, populace are facing problems in order to balance the personal life and professional life. The main reason could be they can't make a demarcation line between personal and professional life, this is mainly and due to heavy workload and few holidays. This essay will intend to analyse the causes with possible solutions.
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