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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Nowadays most green energy is becoming ever more prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The world today uses more renewable energy than ever before since it contributes to the preservation of the environment and is economically sound; however, some argue that green energy could undermine the reliability of the global supply as a result of its dependency on climatic and meteorological phenomena. This essay will examine both views, but personally, I strongly advocate the adoption of renewable sources of energy. On the one hand, opponents of renewables claim that the world could face disruptions to the power supply should they be fully adopted. This is largely due to the fact that many green energy technologies currently in use depend on changeable and unpredictable phenomena such as wind, rain and cloud cover. To take the fastest growing sector as an example, solar panels can only be used in the presence of strong and direct sunlight, and although the problem of directness has already been somewhat solved with moving panel arrays, a cloudy few days could still...
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The spread of multinational companies and globalization is increasing with time. Some people say that it will bring positive effects for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

The spread of multinational companies and globalization is an arguable topic. Some people believe that it will cause positive effects on society and I completely agree with this statement.
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Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As we know sportive activities are significant for nations who like dangerous sports. Also, we should say that extreme games became famous last decade. At least, we can follow through Youtube and other social media areas. It is amazing that we can reach these areas. On the other hand, investigations show that many young nations died due to extreme sports. It is undeniable fact that dangerous games are not suitable for people. Additionally, it should not publish on television or virtual platforms. Because young people want to try risky things and it brings fatal errors. In other words, extreme activities are remarkable but at the same time damaging.
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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

There has been an interesting trend that the numbers of both working mothers and housekeeping fathers are growing over the last decades. This essay will analyze the possible reasons for this tendency, also using examples from the UN and the UK government to demonstrate points and prove this is a positive development.
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The advantages and disadvantages of Massive Open Online Courses (MOOCs).

Massive open online courses (MOOCs) are free web-based distance learning programs which provide high quality content from some of the world’s best universities for free to anyone with a computer and an Internet connection. There are many popular platforms such as Coursera, EdX, Alison and Great learning, which deliver free and paid courses. All these programs have benefits and drawbacks.
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Nowadays people depend on technology for leisure activities. Is this a positive or negative development?

Technological advancement has encouraged the proliferation of ample high-tech means of recreation. From my perspective, although some regarded this phenomenon as positive, I deemed it more detrimental.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In modern times, the issue of living foreign country has become highly controversial. Some people believe that they have to speak a foreign language when living in other countries and they will face a lot of problems. I Partially agree with this idea and in this essay, I will give some arguments in favour to support my opinions.
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Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and expamles from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years,some car companies have started the production of an autonomous cars which is becoming a global threat. Personally, I am of the opinion that robotic cars will be less common or completely extinct from the world in the nearest future. This essay will be discussing the reasons for my opinion with a relevant example.
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"Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that a good father is the source of inspiration and a good mother is the root of kindness. Without a doubt, child-rearing is a crucial aspect of parents’ lives. As women undergo drastic physiological and emotional changes during their pregnancy, some people believe that mothers are the only responsible ones for bringing the children up. However, from my perspective, the traditional family, with both parents providing emotional and financial support, is the most satisfactory way of bringing up children.
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Without capital punishment (the death penalty), our lives are less secure, and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is said that returning violence with violence will multiply it. Many people, however, believe that without capital punishment crimes would increase, and they wouldn’t have safety in the society. It is also argued that death penalty is vital for curbing the crime rates in the society. In my opinion, nonetheless, this is a controversial issue, and as there can be various other ways to rein the increase rate of crimes and violence, instead of capital punishment, I tend to disagree with it.
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Many people use written language in less formal and relaxed way. Does this development have advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays, many people tend to use a more informal style for their writing due to its convenience. This tendency has both benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed further.
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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In this modern era, it is considered that social media deeply influenced population. Some people argue that social sites and applications have negatively affected society as well as individuals while others oppose. However, I completely disagree with this idea.
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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

To begin with, this is a technology era and a person who is not using social apps is not able to compete with society. To be more precise, all the business and official deals are done via different apps. In fact,official meetings and transactions are also executed by using different online applications. For instance, in Pakistan ,school all the administrative work is managed and updated by using the Punjab SIS application. This will not only reduce the cost of management but also made the transmission of orders faster than a manual system. Hence,keeping such advantages every field is launching its own apps to work efficiently.
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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In this modern era, it is considered that social media deeply influenced society. Some people argue that social sites and apps have negatively affected society as well as individual while other oppose. However, I completely disagree this idea.
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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

There is an ever increase in the number of people who are unstastify with their jobs which can have adverse ramifications. I will discuss some of the main causes and effects that this detrimental situation can bring to individuals and society as a whole.
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More and more students are going to another country for higher education. Do the advantage of this outweigh disadvantage?

Globally,there has been a rapid increase in the numbers of people that go to university in a foreign country. In my own opinion,I think the advantage outweigh the disadvantage if one is leaving a developing country for a developed country. This essay will be discussing the reasons and benefits as well as the downside.
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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individuals/ people do?

Human beings are posing a serious threat to the surrounding environment. It is true that there are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to improve the situation.
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More and more young people are using drugs and alcohol and as a result, breaking the law. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?

It is said that an increasing number of young individuals are addicted to drinking and drugs, which are illegal. There are various factors that cause this matter, and also the government should take up the leadership role to mitigate this issue.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A number of people advocate that foreign language training should be at elementary school rather than middle school. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of these statements and provide a logical conclusion.
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In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays, the demographic changes lead to small family units or alone people instead of nuclear or extended families especially in cities. I believe that this trend is both positive and negative.
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