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The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that says that the authority is obligated to spend more money on developing science than in other courses for the process of active development of the country. This essay will discuss both opinions and explain why I believe that science should be treated in the same way as in other areas.
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Childhood obesity is becoming a problem thoughout the developed world . Because of this , some people think that adverts for fast food , sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?

Some people state that adverts for fast food, sweets and sugary snacks should be banned in schools and colleges, because of the increased level of childhood obesity worldwide. As far as I am concerned, due to today's inappropiate unhealthy food adverts, children are less encouraged to have a healthy lifestyle. Additionally, regarding children's health, schools should do their best in order to point out the importance of having a balanced lifestyle. For instance, colleges can publish sports adverts in order to trigger pupils' interest in physical exercise. Besides, schools can introduce healthy treats to support children to choose a balanced lifestyle.
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More and more children as accessing the internet unsupervised and at a young age. This can sometimes put children at risk. What problems do you think parents face when dealing with their children using the internet?

Nowadays, there is undoubtedly no age or gender limitations toward using the internet. The number of kids with uncontrolled access to this phenomenon is increasing which is why it becomes dangerous. There are several drawbacks for children and particularly for their parents that I will discuss in the rest of the essay.
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Which of the following activities do you think will be the most beneficial to the environment? (1) Commute by biking or walking (2) Recycling (3) Eating a vegan diet

There are various human activities that have a beneficial effects on the environment. Biking or walking, recycling and eating a vegan diet are few but they have their own significance in nature. As far as I am concerned, I would prefer to commute by walking or biking for having less pollution and for better health. I think this way for two reasons, which I will explore in this essay.
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It is not neccessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can just learn much from books, films and the internet . Do you agree or disagree ?

Travelling has been more accessible than ever before with airfare costing less than 20 years ago. People will argue that to experience a different culture, travelling will not be needed due to the internet and other material. I strongly disagree with that idea.
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The development of technology has resulted in more employees working from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Presently, we now live in a world where technology thrives and switched the trend for many people from working physically to working from home. Many people have a hard time reaching a consensus on whether this new trend is a positive or negative development. To my mind, this is a positive development that leads to an increase in flexibility and productivity in employees’ lives.
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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss bot views and give your opinion?

It is true that some people believe that the best way to get news is from newspapers while the opponents believe that they can get news better through another media. I believe that another media usage is the best way. Is using alternative media the best to get news?This essay will state factors on both views.
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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places

he addictive nature of smoking surges nowadays.Smoking is considered to be a vital cause of many fatal diseases.Undoubtedly,passive smokers are also badly affected by the side effects of this deadly headly habit.Considering this factor many people insist on the ban of cigarettes and other tobacco products whereas their counterparts disagree with the idea.Both sides of the argument are discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people can divided into two seperate groups as people who like change, and who are not. The ones in the first group consider change as good thing, wheraes the others avoiding from it. In my opinion change could beneficial if it is necessariy.
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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

In modern world, all countries are developed by laws and rules to ensure citizen’s safety and maintain the function of societies. Some people argue that if people can do any things with the limitations of laws and rules, then societies would be destroyed. I agree with this statement with my explanations below as well as providing examples to support my opinions.
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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Innovations in technology have made great contributions to our daily activities like computers, Dishwashers Washing Machines Etc. Although, for a few people the use of the mentioned equipment makes growth difficult rather than making it easier. In this essay, we will discuss both positive and negative aspects with suitable examples.
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Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes , while other people believe that Adults should prevent children from making mistakes discuss both side and give your opinion。

Nowadays, there has been a widespread argument that pupils are allowed to fail. However, some others believe that it is a parent's responsibility to make children avoiding their mistakes. In this essay I will discuss both sides and give my opinions.
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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crimes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people consider that technology has been used by criminals to break laws others think otherwise. This essay will look into both facets of this subject and I would argue that technology is to blame for the raised crime rate.
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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Many people prefer that the waste from households which is recycled is not adequate and it is said that this can be resolved by the government to improve the situation. I disagree with this opinion.
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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Should the law be flexible while deciding about punishments for criminals? There are two opposite opinions about punishments for crimes. some parts of society believe there should be fixed retributions for each type of crime whereas others have the opposite view and think different reasons should be considered in deciding about crimes.
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In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs what problems do you think youth unemployement causes for individuals and the society?What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?

Education nowadays is considered as the second backbone of nations after Agriculture. But, there are some countries where most of the people leave their schools in between due to several reasons. For instance,poor financial status, lack of skills and early marriage issues for women etc. can be easily mitigated by taking numerous measures. However, they will directly render aid in the reduction of unemployment . I will fully elaborate them further in subsequent paragraphs with relevant solutions.
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Fewer schools are requiring children to learn and improve their hand writing skills. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend?

Handwriting skills are something we use on a daily basis. We use these skills as communication skills to tell others what we want them to know. Can the advantages of schools quitting training children’s handwriting skills put up with the disadvantages? The fewer schools requiring kids to learn and improve their handwriting skills, the more kids loss their opportunities such as other hand skills and concentration.
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Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

It is true that due to technological improvement, people have changed their way of interacting with others. Technology gathers people around the world, and it is beneficial for people in exploring different things.
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The best way of motivating workers is to offer them performance-based pay packets. Do you agree or disagree?

People do put time and effort into the jobs they are working at, no matter if it is part-time or full-time employment. I do believe that employees should be rewarded if they bring positive results for the company and it is one method to keep their workers from leaving.
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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a common belief that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people. While others think that the purpose of museums is to educate. In this essay, I will elaborate on both sides and then state my position.
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