IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5. Page 491

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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In some countries, using internet in schools is getting more popular. Is this a positive or a negative development?

In the present age, the Internet has gained a lot of popularity due to its wide availability. Even the education industry is using it for teaching purposes, I believe that it is a positive trend since it offers immense benefits to students. The upcoming paragraphs will analyze two factors that contribute to this affirmation, as well as my personal opinion.

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Some people think that public health is responsibility of the government while others believe that individuals should be responsible for the own health. This is both the views and give your opinion

The virtue of good health is desired by all humans. However, there are split opinions on who should be held accountable for public health. A group of people believe that it is the government's duty to safeguard the health of the citizens whereas some think it is one's own lookout. I assert that individuals themselves are solely responsible for their well-being.

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Children today are told dependent on computer and electronic entertainment.It would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. Do you agree or disagree.

It is widely believed that nowadays children spend a lot of time on technology, while it would be not beneficial for children. Personally, I completely agree with this view that children must play sports and games for a variety of reasons.

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Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe theyshould take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few people believe that government should help retired seniors financially and some say that they should be financially independent than depending on the government. In my opinion, the government should do their part of the fund for the retired people and they need to be financially independent for a safety purpose.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

In recent years, the number of people suffering from lack of sleep has increased. The majority of individuals are deprived of full sleep for various reasons. This essay discusses some issues that lack of sleep can cause (and will come to a reasonable solution.)

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in some countries, more young aldults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed their education and found jobs. Do the advantage outweight the disadvantage

Nowadays, in some parts of the globe, after finishing their education programs or pursuing a career path, adolescents tend to reside in extended families. Although this phenomenon has several beneficial aspects for them and their families, from my perspective, its drawbacks are considerable.

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Smoking should be banned in public places because it not only harms the smokers, but also those who are nearby. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Smoking has always been a topic of discussion and now is no different as there is an ongoing debate on whether smoking should be banned in public spaces as its harmful to not only the smoker but the public as well. This essay will discuss my reasoning as to why I agree with the ban.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

It is prevalent that universities provide lessons on additional modules for a particular academic qualification along with major subjects. Though some students advocate this practice, some other learners are against it. In my opinion, this exercise will be feasible if the minor subjects can be chosen through careful scrutiny.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. some people say ana ging population creates problems for government. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people . to what extent do the advantages of having an aging population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, individual's life expectancy is increasing and they are living longer compared to earlier periods. People have multiple opinions on this, some feel that the old population increases the burden on the government, although, others argue that there are more benefits to society I strongly believe in the latter opinion and I will examine it in the essay further.

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DISCIPLINE IS AN INCREASING PROBLEM IN MODREN SCHOOL. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT DISCIPLINE SHOULD BE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF TEACHERS,WHILE OTHER THINK THAT IS THE RPOLE OF PARENTS.

In this contemporary era,children do not know much about the importance of discipline and other significant factors in life. However,few people feel that it is the responsibility of tutors to teach learners about these kinds of things,whereas others reckon that parents are responsible for this. I am going to shed light upon both sides of view in subsequent paragraphs along with my own opinion.

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Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Nowadays, advances in technology have brought significant benefits to mankind. However, they also pose negative impacts to them. Personally, I absolutely agree with this viewpoint, which will be further discussed in the following essay.

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Some people believe that young people should spend their time with family, rather than go to entertainment activities outsides the house. Some disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people are debating on when, where and how we should spend our free time. Some are saying that it should be with our family while others are saying it should be away from our houses that could entertain us. In my opinion, our free time should be used to do some fun things like outdoor activities.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obesity rates have been steadily rising, raising concerns about the overall well-being of individuals. To address this issue, some argue that increasing the price of high-calorie foods would provide a solution. I believe that this approach is insufficient at best.

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Asror Aka: Topic: Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. Task: what are the advantages and disadvantages of children playing computer games?

Computer games have gained popularity in recent years, causing some public controversy. Although playing computer games can have many disadvantages according to many doctors, there is plenty of evidence suggesting that it can offer broad-based benefits to children.

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Some people believe that it is ok to put the needs of humans over environmental concerns. While others feel that protecting the environment should be priortized. Discuss both views.

The importance of preserving the environment which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion as they are more comfortable prioritizing their own needs above nature. This essay will compare and contrast both opinions and will be discussed a suitable conclusion.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The new-found focus on the benefits of healthy life in recent years has created pressure on governmental bodies to look for different schemes in order to increase the levels of public health. In order to achieve this lofty goal, some believe that increasing sports facilities will suffice, while others state that other complementary actions must be taken. I agree with the latter, and in this essay, I will try to discuss both of these points of view, reason my stance and draw a conclusion based on them.

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In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

America has implemented a limitation on the hours that adolescents are allowed to stay outside without an older individual’s company. Personally, I firmly agree with this practice for two main reasons.

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Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession.What factor may have caused this situation and what in your opinion, should be done it.

It is believed to think that university graduate students are going to work on the speciality they have studied. Although, there are a lot of people who can't find a profession even with a degree or a diploma. The reason for that might be an obsolete study system that should be modernised.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting renting one is very important for people. Why might ths be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In several countries, having a home is an essential subject of their life which is owned or rented. A lot of thing in society makes it important and bold in human life. There are some deals that might have a beneficial quality of it moreover acknowledging that they may have some potential drawbacks. I would argue that it plays a significant or negative role and also I will explain my point of view.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is of paramount importance for children to differentiate between what is right and wrong.Some hold the view that using punishment is recommended to do so. Personally, I somewhat agree with this statement but types of punishment must be carefully selected. This essay shall present my opinion coupled with compelling reasons.

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