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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage?

Nowadays, many people believe this proverb that there is no pain no gain and in some cultures, children usually hear that they can attain whatever they want by trying hard. This message may have significant impacts on kids’ personalities and their lives in the future. In fact, it could have two main benefits and also appear to have some drawbacks.

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Today, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your on knowledge or experience

In the modern world that we live in, individuals have the liberty to live and work where they desire due to the advancements in transportation, communication and technology. While there may be some drawbacks to this transformation, I firmly believe that the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Discuss the benefits of this development and problems associated with it.

In today's society, education is an aspect that has been given the utmost importance. While in many ,countries young people are choosing a year odd between finishing school and going to university. However, this practice brings about a mixed bag of both and bane. I believe that these methods surely initiate some positive benefits for the individual.

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Some people believe it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of money.others arige that it is better to try to improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is an undeniable fact that everyone has their own problems. No one in this world has been blessed with not a single issue. However , there are predominantly two contrasting views, where a section of society claims that it is better to accept an unfavourable situation such as unsatisfactory jobs or a shortage of money. While others emphasize that these situations can be changed if we are given a chance. I personally believe that it is worth trying to refine it.

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Everybody today should pay a small amount from their income in order to help people who are homeless and / or suffering great poverty. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

With the increase in scarcity, some communities believe that they should spend a small amount of their income in order to help the homeless who suffer from lack, in order to help their family economy. I strongly agree with this point of view, in ,fact I have also helped so many people till now and continue to help them.

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In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

I am of the personal belief that online shopping is a highly positive development, and such an opinion is largely based on the reasons below.

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Today people are living in a throwaway society where they use things for a short time only and then throw them away. What are the causes of this and what problems can it lead to?

In recent modern society, people are likely to use their belongings temporarily. The main cause of this phenomenon is the fascinating trend of consumerism and the desire of people to follow it. Therefore, it may lead to unwanted waste that will pollute the environment.

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Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Currently, It has been criticised for decades that the purpose of most academies is only to help its students to get employed. Whereas others say that more advantages can be provided by the university. In my opinion, most of the students' desires are to achieve their dream so I partially agree with both opinions.

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In today's world,people spend a lot of money on appearance because they want to look younger.Why does this happen?Do you think it is positive or negative development?

Nowadays,people expend a big amount of money on their appearance due to the fact that they want to look like younger people.In my point of view, this happens because they want to look better among other old people and I consider that it has both positive and negative development depending on the type of thing the money is spent on.

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1. Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching with the technology available today, there is no justification for it, and everything should be online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give your own opinion.

Engaging an ample number of students through traditional methods of teaching with all the available technology nowadays is not at all a cliché.Conventional methods of teaching never grow old even with advances in Artificial intelligence.I opine that the old way of teaching is not only effective but also rewarding.

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In order to study effectively, it requires comfort, peace and time. So it is impossible for a student to combine learning and employment at the same time because one distracts the other. Is it realistic to combine them at the same time? Support your opinion with examples.

In today's world, responsibilities and expenses have increased massively, which forced many individuals to combine learning with employment. In my opinion, This is not ideal as both of these tasks are being affected by the other. I believe that people excel in doing one thing at a time for multiple reasons.

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Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Looking at the task below, which is concerning the idea ( from one side), of those who sustain the opening of a public library at zero cost and others ( from the other side), who strongly believe that this one will be just a waste of time and money too. It's evident the way how two wide views give the opportunity to think and admit a personal opinion about it.

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Some people think it is better for children to have many short holidays during the academic year. Others believe that it would be beneficial to have fewer and longer vacations for children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The structure of school breaks is a debatable topic, some advocate for multiple short holidays and others believe that long breaks are essential and significantly increase students' interest in other activities. This essay aims to discuss both views and I will provide my opinion in regards to both statements.

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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Nowadays, there are many water sources that are polluted. Additionally, many people are concerned about these problems and their effects on the environment. There are two main factors that cause water pollution, which are industrial waste and fuel spills. The consequences of these problems are dirty water sources for animals and infected seafood for humans. These are causes and effects, which we will discuss further in the essay.

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There have been many inventions in human history. Some people think the most important thing is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Social media websites have a significant impact on our daily lives in the 4.0 era. Because of this, many people think that the Internet is the most revolutionary invention that has ever been created. Although this may be partially accurate, I will argue that the development of electricity is much more significant than the development of online platforms.

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Online shopping is becoming more common these days what are facts could this on environment and what type of jobs are required

Owing to the proliferation of technology, the dependency of customers on virtual shopping is surging too. Even though it increases job opportunities,I opine that it is putting adverse impacts on the surroundings and will discuss these views in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some say that news has no connection with most people's life and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

It is commonly argued that it is wasting time for receiving news whether reading a newspaper or watching TV programmes, so there are those who claim that news unlinks peoples’ lives. Personally, I completely disagree with this view for a variety of reasons.

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In many countries, foreign labor is an important part of the economy. Using migrant labor can contribute to the development of a country, but it can also cause economic problems. What are some of the advantages and drawbacks of expatriate labor for a country’s economy?

With cutting-edge technology and innovative transportation system, globalization is more and more accelerated. In this case, a variety of foreign manpower can go around the world. Some people may think that they can improve the development of a nation; while the opposites argue that it can also lead to economic and competitive problems.

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In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good news for individuals but it may have negative consequences for our world as a whole. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150?

Nowadays, due to advancements in the field of science and technology, there is a possibility that citizens can live up to 150 or even more than that. For some, it might become good news for them and for others it may have negative consequences in the near future. In this ,essay I will explain the benefits and drawbacks of people living more than 150 years and in the last conclusion will be made.

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It is increasingly difficult to feed everyone in the world today. Some people believe that the best solution to solve is issue is for scientists to discover new ways of producing food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Feeding the population of the world has become an incredibly challenging task. There are people who think that the only way out of this is for scientists to consider new methods of producing food. In my opinion, I agree that new methods must be sought. However, I also believe there are changes that can be done right away to help feed all individuals, namely redirection of existing grains.

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