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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting theirs usual doctor . Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

A new phenomenon has arisen in the past decades that people are trying to remedy their health issues with alternative practices rather than seeking appropriate medical treatment from doctors. I strongly believe that this is a negative development and I will explain the reasons further.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The trend of some countries achieving success in international sports competitions by investing in specialized facilities to train top athletes, at the expense of providing sports centres for public use, is a topic that has gained mixed opinion. Although there are benefits to this approach, I am of the opinion that this is ultimately a negative development due to its limited accessibility and adverse effects on talent discovery.

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The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ideas?

Some people have commonly believed that the traditional ideas which the older generations want to teach to the younger ones of how to live, think and behave are not helpful for modern life. I partially agree with this opinion due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with poor. What are some reasons for poverty? What can we do to help poor ?

Poverty is a problem that governments all over the globe are trying to find a remedy for it. It is obvious that there are some root causes behind this phenomenon. However, there are some down-to-earth solutions to tackle this problem.

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The way a person dresses or present themselves tells a lot about them. It indicates their personality, and mindset and reflects a few important qualities. There's always a debate that the crowd seems to have on buying less expensive clothing or buying a lot of cheaper clothing.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Animal testing is indeed a controversial topic for many. While some are expected to be against any sort of experimentation, others would argue that modern medicine and the cosmetic industry would be otherwise non-existent. In fact, a significant number of pharmaceutical products, people use today to treat a simple headache or diabetes, have had to be tried on some living subjects.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Advertising is one of the successful tactics made by a company to invent people buying their products, while other people think advertisement is very normal now and consumers do not pay much attention to it anymore. In this essay, I will detail both views and my opinion.

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Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern era, several people emigrate to other countries in order to search for suitable job opportunities. Some people believe this approach is highly beneficial for family members, however, others think that is a detrimental decision. From my point of view, this trend has several advantages.

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Advanced medical treatments are generally expensive. People’s access to proper health care should not depend up on their level of income. All people have the right to access the best medicine available. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

In current society, due to the innovation of medical treatment which is costly, citizens should obtain suitable health care despite their financial status, thus, I agree with the viewpoint that all people have equal access to the top cure available.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

A number of people voice out that music is a better way of joining people of various tribes and ages together. I strongly concur with this belief because music is therapeutic and lots of people listen to music daily irrespective of the language being used.

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with the pressure on today's young people to succeed academiclly,some people believe that non-academic subjects at school(eg:physical education and cookery )should be removed from syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on acedemic subject.To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

In this modern era, students should have to do a lot of study in order to pass their exams with good marks. A handful of individuals opine that non-academic subjects at school such as physical education and cookery ought to be removed from the syllabus so that children can emphasize entirely on academic subjects. I totally disagree with the given notion. This essay will discuss my opinion precisely in the subsequent paragraphs.

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In many parts of the world, women study science and technology but do not work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?

Women can play important roles in a country's development. Although they are studying science and computer-related subjects but not opting for this field as a profession. This essay intends to discuss the problems and their remedies to resolve this issue

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Some governments believe it is necessary to impose a higher tax on junk food because an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much of this food. What do you think about this?

As consumption of fat, sugar and salt increases, rates of related illnesses such as diabetes, heart disease and stroke are also on the rise. In order to tackle this problem, some argue that the government should levy a higher tariff on junk food. This essay will discuss why I feel that this would be beneficial and lead to more money for health services while discouraging the consumption of unhealthy food.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that people prefer to wear different styles of clothes. A larger number of people argue that by looking at someone's outfits, their religion and personality could be guessed, however, I do not agree with this belief. In this essay, I would explain my view with suitable examples.

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Some people tend to buy products or get services instantly, without waiting. Why is it happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

The technological war has indulged the popular giants in fierce competition in terms of services and products to satisfy the customer. Therefore, this is the reason people are getting instant services at their doorstep without any wait and serious trouble. However, from my perspective, this phenomenon could be both positive and negative owing to their pons and cons.

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The internet has made traditional libraries unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss giving examples from your own knowledge andexperience.

In today's fast-paced world, we can not deny that the internet is one of the important things that drive the world in terms of economy, social media and education. Some people argue that the internet would replace libraries by collecting data on the cloud, while others still believe that a library is necessary for communities. In this essay, I will discuss both views on this argument and give my own opinion on this issue.

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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

Nowadays, we have seen a sharp rise in the number of overweight people, who are now a serious issue in many nations. I'll discuss some of the main causes in this article and offer the optimal action for stopping this trend.

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some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career. while others believe that is better to get a job straight after school. discuss both views and your opinion

After graduating high school, some people suppose that it would be beneficial for them to search for a decent job. while others consider that higher education is an optimal option. In my opinion, the latter view is suitable more for one's success in their career path.

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Some children spend hours every day on their phones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive ar negative development?

Most people spend more hours on their phones in the developing world. This condition is manifested especially among the young generation. According to my knowledge, this is happening because of the attractive qualities of these devices. In my opinion, this development is negative progress. This essay will analyze this phenomenon.

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Research into medical treatments are essential to improve health and fight disease. Who do you think should fund this research: individuals, private companies or governments?

The only way to save human life is through medication. Therefore, it is crucial to keep the research ongoing for medicines and treatments which lead to the betterment of the human body and help fight diseases. I completely believe that the public will not be able to fund such a probe since it involves heaps of contributions whereas many private companies and authorities can play a fundamental role in financing it.

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